Sweeping me off my feet
Starry eyed, I gaze at the
Sojourn of lustrous stars
Surfing the empyrean
Saturating air with stardust
Streaking the celestial
Scintillating the nova
Spectacle galactic
Spinning inky aether
Spellbinding gravity
Stringing the Big Dipper
Shimmering Milky Way
Stunning, dazzling me as
Shooting stars wish me well.
# Pleiades
Lovely poem, Yassy! The rhythm is almost tantric in its flow. The imagery you create is stunning. So well written, my friend!
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Thank you so much , Brad.
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Thank you for the reblog , Ned.
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Super Splendid Scribble 😁
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Thank you for a super splendid comment , Pp!
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Welcome 🤗
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What a beautiful poem on the night sky 🙂
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Thank you , Simon.
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I love the alliteration throughout. Beautiful poem!
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Thank you 😊
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That’s a fantastic poetry piece artistic as it mesmerizing! Just imagining being under the night sky while reading this can truly envelope you in awe and wonder!
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Thank you for your wonderful reply … I just love looking up at the night sky .. it’s awesome and breath taking in all its splendour. Never fails to amaze me.
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love this Yassy! ❣️
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Thank you , Cindy 🤗⭐️ 💫
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You’re so welcome Yas!! 💞
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🤗❤️
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Gorgeous and well-written, as usual! (I only recently found out which constellation was Pleiades…turns out I’d been mistaking it for the Little Dipper for some time)
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Thank you , Monroe !! The Pleiades also known as The Seven Sisters, Messier 45 is an asterism and an open star cluster. Our galaxy never fails to fascinate me.
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It’s the very best poem about a nightly starry sky I’ve ever read.
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That’s so kind of you to say , Michael..thank you.
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👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼… 💕💕💕…
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Thank you.
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Exquisite
“S”
Stellar
Sisters 👯♀️
Seven
A natural and inspiring alliteration “Seven Sisters” in the sign of Taurus.
So softly spoken stargazing starshine striking, soul celebrating.
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Superb , Ka Malana.. an epic thought from your beautiful soul.
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Beautiful poem!
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Awwww thank you , Bella 🤗
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You’re welcome!
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lovely ❤
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Thank you, Hana 🤗❤️
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Most lovely Feelings are in your rhythmatic poem,dear Yassy!! I feel- you are telling my feelings…Oh,how much I am a craziest one.Much love and big hugs,my dear❣️🌠❣️❤️❣️❤️❣️❤️❣️🌠❣️
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Friggin’ amazing, Yassy ❤
~David
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Thanks , David 🤗
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The universe is unsheathed in your words. Amazing write.
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Thank you , Carter.
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