So many blank pages
I let spill on the Milky Way
I feel like a drunk out on a holiday
trying to find the moon
with my head in a cloudy commune
starry eyed , I miss the
short hand of my clock
hiding behind the long hand
of my midnight Knock
may the dreams be with you.
Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you for the reblog , Ned.
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Nice blog π
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Thanks.
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Welcome
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Love it! Merry christmas!
Come over to my blog to request access, if you’d like to? I privatized it last week, but am giving select bloggers access!
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Hey am coming right away. Wait for me will ya
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Just give you access to my site xox
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The imagery and rhythm. You truly have a gift π
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Thank you much much π€β€οΈ
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Love this one so much!!!
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Thank you, Ka π€
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This is very descriptive and excellent.
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Awwww thatβs kind of you to say , Derek. Thank you.
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“May the dreams be with you.” Such a lovely sentiment.
Beautiful piece, Yas. π€π€
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Thanks , Carter. π€
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Beautiful and full of imagine and pictures too,congrats Hestia !:)
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Thank you kindly , Lubomir!
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You are welcome,Yassmine.
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Your words create a vivid image and tug at the emotions. Beautifully written, my friend!
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Thanks , Brad. Quite an honour when you compliment.
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I feel like I’m in a Salvador Dali painting right now. Very vivid imagery. Great job!
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Oh ! That is quite a compliment, Monroe. Thank you even though I couldnβt reach that level of surrealism that he is famous for.
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Idk, blank pages spilling on the Milky Way was pretty close
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I suppose I got to go pick them π.. you helping no π
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My Salvador Dali dream self is…in spirit ;D
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You inspire a Dali poem , Monroe. Dream self away β¦ will see you in spirit β¦ cheers π₯
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Delicious verse Yassy. Don’t drink too much! π
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Hahaha I actually donβt. Never touched one in my life π
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Kudos on not drinking. I was kidding you about your verse about being drunk on stars. π
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I know !!! No worries. Just kidding π
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Lovely rhythm!
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Thank you!!!
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Love this so much!
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Thanks i
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