pearl-like rain
glosses the vista
slip-sliding
gleaming plops
borne by handmaidens of wind
gushing into brooks
spilling the
leas, meads, and meadows
bubbling bright
crystal fine
tinkling, cruising the zephyr
spate of rhythmic rush
a pouring
from a sky so vast
flimsy clouds
come down fast
dribbling, drenching, drip dropping
gossamer droplets tap.
# shadorma
Wonderful!
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Thanks , Craig.
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Thanks , Ned.
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Your poetry is a …spate of rhythmic rush! ☺️
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Thank you ☺️
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This is beautiful, Yassy. And, Sangeetha, now I know why you sent me a poem about rain!
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David
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Thanks , David 💕
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This is glorious, Yassy. Well done.
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Thank you much much , Roberta.
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Thanks for this poem Yassy. I’m back…. again, and pleased to see you are still posting.
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Good to see you , Tony. I don’t write as much as I used to .. are you back for good ? I hope things are good where you used to do a lot of charity stuff.
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Yes… I’m much more free now in my time, so I start blogging again and reading yours and others. Good to be back!! And yes I still go to Zambia… on my way there in a few weeks.
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That’s awesome!!
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Yasmin ! This Autumn rain is NOW behid my window ! You created him, Hestia ! Poetry is powerful and lovely witch 🙂
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Thank you, Lubomir! Hope you are well !
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A wonderful rendition of the form. Rhythmic and beautifully voiced. Well done, my friend!
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Thanks, Brad.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Rainy days give us feelings as you described in beautiful way.nice one poem,dear yassy!!💞❤️💞
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Thank you , Aruna ❤️😘
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Most welcome,dear yassy!!Bless you.❣️🤗❣️
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❤
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What a fantastic piece. 🖤
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Thank you muchly.
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Like a ghost
I feel the season
No leafs to turn here
But then again
I keep falling!!!!
I miss you poet…
Gratitude (ii)
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Appreciation for your awesome poetry.
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