autumn comes
upon trees
coppery soft
frail amber blooms
gather shadows
north winds stir
rosette twilight
birdsongs hush
the whispering breeze
orange, red maple leaves
ignite a crimson light
October lilts
frosted sigh
pumpkin moon
adorns ebon frilled sky
Lovely.
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Thank you , Syd.
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Creates beautiful images
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Thank you , Dan. Have a nice weekend.
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I do love Autumn and you have captured it — so cool the ‘pumpkin moon’!
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Yes, autumn is so poetic. Well, I am seeing a lot of pumpkins 🎃 lol . Thank you, Mich !
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you always. Grateful!
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Gotta love October— oh how I do!
And I feel the narrator in this poem does too. 😁 xoxo. Blessings
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Yes, yes, Selma .. I love the hues everywhere. It’s awesome beautiful. Bless you .. love 💕
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Gorgeous Yassy.
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Thank you for your beautiful comment , Kate.
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Exquisite truly.
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Thank you !
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You are so welcome!
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Beautiful verse! I love the “pumpkin moon”.
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Awwww !!! Thank you so much.
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Sublime Yassy! 👌❤️ Wonderful; evocative descriptions of Autumn! 😁😁👏👏
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Thanks , Ken 🤗
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Highest praise.
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Thank you !
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Most welcome. Wonderful brush strokes. You’re the goods. 🙂
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Love that closing line!
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Thanks much !
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So visual. I’d love to share this poem on my blog with credit to you if that’s okay.
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Sure !! Thank you, Mona.
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Had that feeling the other day, walking through the trees…
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🍁🍂🥮
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Great word choice, especially “coppery soft”. Well done!
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Thank you, Bartholomew.
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this is gorgeous! Loved it! ❤
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Thank you , sweet Carol ❤️
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Amazing. Hestia, imagine this: You stay in colorful autumn leaves , wind blows and You recitate this wonderfull words of Yours…. That imagine never dissapear….thanks for that!
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That’s kind of you , Lubomir. Thanks much !
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You are welcome, Yassy, be still creative !
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HI Yassy, this is a beautiful poem.
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Thank you , Robbie.
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Very beautiful, Yassy.
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Thank you , Michael.
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Nice! Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you , Shari.
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Reblogged this on Abyssal Dreams and commented:
I love the fall. This poem sums it up quite nicely.
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Thank you so much.. very grateful. Bless you.
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This was a beautiful poem. Loved it!
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Thank you , Lena.
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Finesse ❤️✨
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Thank you.
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I enjoy your multi-facetted sensuous response to nature.
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gorgeous .. i think i’m finally caught up Yassy! 💗
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Stay warm sweetheart.
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Who is this ebon
When I can’t turn the page?
Like rose hued
I squint without a spine
Why my words aren’t there
Even when my ink graces
The only leaf I can pick up….
I miss u poet (ii)
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You write awesome, Michael.
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I don’t even know what to say
Other than u looked at my profile
I’m too shy
But then again
Niether are u
Thanks…
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