once upon a night, I dreamed
a dream that I often thought
went beyond what I deemed
would come true, but came to naught.
an uneasy slumber gave
no reprieve, as I tossed, turned
to drowse I did badly crave
eyelids flickered open, yearned
for bliss of oblivion
attained in night’s dormancy
a quiescent soul shaken
by somnolent truancy.
Beyond of is incorrect. Beyond is enough . Be careful. English is an unforgiving language!
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Okay. Thanks so much. Grateful.
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Welcome 😀😄😄😁
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What is unforgiving
Is the jealous I harbor
Because she’s better than us all…
Greed (I)
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You are good with your poetry.
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Jealous or jealousy?
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This is why we need editors lol!!!!
😆 😆 😆
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Beautiful blog
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Please read my post
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This flows with your usual genius Yassy, beautifully evocative, I always enjoy your poetry.
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Thank you , Kate. So good to hear from you.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you.
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Awesome
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Thank you.
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you’re welcome
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Wonderful to see you here Yassy Ive been gone awhile but Im back with a new account your writing is incredible brings back good memories looking forward to seeing and reading more.
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Oh, what was your old account.. sorry I can’t place you.
Thank you anyhoo.
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Youre welcome I was known as Archangel White Wolf from a couple of years ago now glad you’re still here.
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Oh yes, Archangel white wolf. I remember you. Happy to read your posts again. Take care.
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Thank you so much Yassy please take care look forward to reading more.
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You are very welcome. See you around.
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A very relatable sensation. Hope you sleep well, my friend.
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Yup thanks .. I do actually sleep well thank you. I hope you do 😃
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Glad to hear you sleep well. I’m the same way, especially when I have a kitty curled up at my side.
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Oh .., nice .,
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^_^
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Thanks.
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Sleepless nights, I have them too. I just have to stay up real late to get some sleeping done. Great poem, Yassy.
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I can only say that we have super active brains .. our saving grace .. how late is late, Michael, My late stretches into the wee hours .
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Late is actually early, waking up at 2 in the morning after having slept 3 hours and having the whole day ahead of you without rest. It’s a curse.
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That’s a lot of stress. I am sorry.
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excellent ❤ so good!
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Oh, I’ve endured many a night like that! I’ve been fortunate not to deal with it too often anymore. I hope this isn’t common for you, Yassy!
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I am happy you no longer go through that but I do sometimes. The mind is a worrisome thing.
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Indeed, it is! Hope you find some relief, Yassy!
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If a poet can be put down
Why can’t I look up
The skirt that hides your meaning
All I want is a set of leafs
With answers to riddles
That even Tolkien would need
It’s like vermeil and copper
The weight worth more
Than a ring can advertise
All I want is a solution
For those words I despise
Which you seem to hoard
I’m jealous over
that which can’t be bought…
I miss u poet (?)
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You are a fine poet.
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