thunderstorm-
the sound of rain
on the sea
foghorn lights up
tides curve the
lighthouse path
rain swings over earth
going into the soil
nourishing, awakening
to push touch roots to blossom
taking and making into creation
a silver fountain of
vanilla constellations
waltz out of sight
I dream in a rainy sky.
Oh Yassy this is beautiful, I have fallen out of love with rain lately – this made me long for it again
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Thanks so much, Kate. I hope you get some rain soon.
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Yassy, greetings Hestia 🙂
You hit the spot incredibly…it’s night in the Czech Republic, it’s raining after a long drought, the air has freshened up and suddenly..Your poem, great. Thanks for it!
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Greetings to you too, Lubomir. It’s good to have the rains. It’s a cleansing refreshing delight.
Thank you.
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Gorgeous, Yassy…
❤
David
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Thank you , David 🤗
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💞 Yassy 💞
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🙏🤗
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“a silver fountain of vanilla constellations waltz out of sight” – those lines were my favorites. I dream with you and envision those vanilla constellations! Beautiful writing, Yassy.
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Thank you, Jan. so kind 🤗
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Wow a silver fountain of constellations…
You are so creative the way you blend words together. I can see them waltzing!
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Thanks so much for your awesome thoughts.
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Like Kate, this gives a romantic feel to rain which I’m quite partial to actually. This is beautiful Yasmin, eloquent and concise as always! 👌👏❤️😁
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Thank you 🙏 thank you , Ken 😊🤗
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you.
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interesting poem, I like it
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Thank you, Crystal.
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‘rain swings over earth’ —- great line!
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Thank you 🙏
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Truly lovely dear Yasmin!
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Thanks very much , Holly 💕
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My pleasure!
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Here is rainy season in North India as well.
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Yeah , it’s monsoon time 🌨
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Beautifully visualized Yassy!
💖
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Thank you , kind one ❤️
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Always dear heart! 💖
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💕🤗
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💖
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Nice
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Thank you 🙏
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you’re welcome
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you 🤗
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I, too, am dreaming of a rainy sky. it’s been so long since I’ve seen one. Still in a drought in Texas.
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Awww, you’re making me yearn for a rainy day more than ever. Then again, you pretty much shared it here–so thank you!
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Thank you and welcome, Joyce. Sending you showers of love and hugs.
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Awww, thank you so much. Same to you. ^_^
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Astounding words! You make everything incredibly beautiful with your pen. 🖤🖤
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Thank you so much, Carter.
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‘a silver fountain of
vanilla constellations
waltz out of sight’ – love this image, Yassy.
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Thank you 🙏 so much.
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HI Yassy, I love thunderstorms and you have made me wish for rain even more. It is dry as a bone here at this time of year.
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Hi Robbie, I hope you get rain. What is the weather like where you live?
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Hi Yassy, We have hot summers with thunderstorms. Our average summer temperatures are about 32 to 35 degrees Celsius. Our winters are mild in the day time with average highs of about 23 to 25 degrees Celsius but it is cold over night, occasionally dropping to below freezing. Our winters are very dry and we get no rain at all.
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I just love this! The ending—superb.
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Thank you, Treaves.
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The ending really is wonderful 👌
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Thank you.
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Beautiful ❤ ❤
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Thank you dear Carol ♥️
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perfect. rain poured from the sky whilst reading your piece.
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Thank you, Audrine!
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Beautiful
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🙏♥️
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The last stanza… wunderbar!
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Thank you , Dalton.
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