I succumb to pain
It swirls my nerves
A wild calling of the senses
Burning force wrapped in gossamer
It’s screaming strength
Torches my skin
Nourishing my mind to evade
I cannot overcome
It catches me in my gut
Wrenches my breath
I try to deal with it
It transcends my mortal
I am a survivor till death tears me into vulnerability.
Only way to stop pain is to embrace it. This is CNN lovely. Your pain is shared in a shared embrace.
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Thanks so much. That’s tough actually but we become resilient with time.
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Yes, we do. The trick is to remain sensitive as well. You have accomplished that, it seems. Brava!
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Thank you for some wonderful home truths.
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🤍
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❤️
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Sending love and light xx
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Peace ✌️ love 💕
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Be aliiiiiiiivvvvvvveeeeeeee !!!!!!!!! Don’t succumb to the pain! Fight ,Yasmin!
And love toooooooo!!!!!
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Thank you for your patience and positivity.
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You are welcome, Hestia ! Still fight , every day, YOU ARE STRONG !!!!!
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Thanks , Lubomir.
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❤️😊🤗
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Awwww 🙏🏼💕
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Pain beautifully evoked, Yassy – hard to read.
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A beautifully evocative comment 🙏🏼❤️
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😘🤗
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💕🤗🌹
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Sending you a big hug.
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Hugs 🤗
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Awwww.
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❤️
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Feeling this big time,respect and relate ,peace
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Thank you, Max.
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Sending love to you Yassy. Such pain, so powerfully described.
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Thank you 🤗
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You expressed the feeling of pain very beautifully. Well done!
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Thank you 🤗🙏🏼
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Sometimes pain makes you more stronger…..beautifully expressed!
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Yup what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger 😅
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beautifully written.
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Thanks.
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No pain, no gain 😁 On a more serious note…well written. Suffer well!
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Pain in vain
Because finally one has to die. It’s actually all in vain.
Of course , I will suffer in style
In all my poetic guile
Lol 😂
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😂😂
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Oh God. “It catches me in my gut…”. That’s what this did. Stopped me all the way. And….ack!!! I don’t know if You’re talking emotional pain or actual physical pain….I’m sitting here wordless but loving the laughing faces between You and Poetpas. Life being life? Ack!!! And YES…..do it in style…You ARE!!! I’m sending tons of Love and hoping that if You are physically ill and hurting that things ease up!!! Rock on, Beautiful…..flourish the hell out of it!!! ❤️❤️❤️!!!
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Kate , 😍😘❤️ love you.
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🤣 I love You too, beautiful!!! Miss literal here was worried!!! 🥰🍪🌻
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You are Miss Literary Delight .. I am well thanks to your delightful comment , my dear Gorgeous Girl 💕
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🤣❤️🤗💐🥰!!! Yay!!!
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🤭😘🌹🦋💕🤗🤗
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Beautiful!!!
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Thank you, Pragalbha!
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This is an incredibly heart felt poem, Yassy. I hope it is not based on your own experience.
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It’s a poem that just came, Robbie. Thank you for stopping by.
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I’m glad to know that 🤗
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Hello Yassy. I missed you 💥💥💥💥
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I feel you yassy.. great imagery💖💖
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🙏🏼💕
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💖💖
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💕
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Pain is important to write an amaziNg poem.most lovely wordings,dear yaad!!🌺❤️🌺
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Most welcome,dear yassy!!Bless you with love🌺❤️🌺❤️🌺❤️🌺❤️
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🤗
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This is such a profound description of pain Yassy
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Thank you dear Lorraine 🤗
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The description of pain is vividly poetic and the resilience to overcome it is even more powerful. 🖤🖤
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🙏🏼🤗
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I always wonder what it would feel like not to experience pain. Sometimes it’s just all too much. ((hugs))
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🤗🤗
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I know and I also know that when it comes…. just about nothing helps. Very honestly and powerfully written!
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Thank you, Karima 🤗
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