A personal moment.. Becomes Centre of a personal expression.. But scattered.. No memories.. Just opinions.. What are you weighing? Again it is just my opinion..
Haiku is definitely a great way of trying to gain a deeper understanding of something like love or a heartbeat that is so cryptic in our thoughts later!
your heart.. beating
the whole world your oyster
fill it with your pearls
your every word a jewel
a beat of your heart
a little bit of you
rare red diamonds
no, pieces of your soul
I take the pieces
mould them, a hologram
you, reaching out, writing
painting images with words
landscapes, seascapes,
your escape,
your private world of haiku,
treasures you share
and at times, give the world
write on, precious Lady
Scribbling away, moving about as you can probably see itchy feet a result of having too much time on my hands due to being cocooned but a door never closes than another opens.
This is such a beautiful piece.
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Thank you, Perc.
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You are welcome, Yassy, but you really are a great poet.
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I don’t know , Perc. It’s only that I love poetry and I love to write. Thank you again , so heartwarming.
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My pleasure, yassy. Your love for poetry is quite evident.
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😊😊
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🙂
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what an absolute joy to read i really enjoyed it.
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Thank you, Andy.
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lovely! and straight to the point… i wish i could get everything out in a few words as beautifully as you do!
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You can , just let go. It’s easy. Thank you , B.
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Beautiful Yassy!
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Thank you, Christine , how have you been?
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Got a lot going on right now Yassy and trying to get back in a groove. How are you lovely one?
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Hope it goes the way you want it to go, I am well, thank you. You take care.
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Well penned👍
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Thank you, M!
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😃
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😊
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Ooooohh wow Yassy..
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Oooooh, thanks Michnavs.
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Dhak dhak….. Can hear it in your poetry, Madame Yasmin. Beautiful 💜❤️
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Get your stethoscope out, Dr.Radha.
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Hehe! I don’t need it. The beauty of your words resonate loud and clear☺️
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🤗😘
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This is wonderful. A haiku about a haiku and it is just wonderful!!!
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I think I got inspired with your haikus yesterday. Thank you, Meg.
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Me thinks you are just talented no inspiration needed :):)
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That is so nice and generous of you dear , Margereena.
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Anything generous out of me comes from God. You’re poetry is a gift to you, from you to us all 🙂
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God has blessed you with the purest of hearts. You honor me greatly with your generosity. I feel indebted to you
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The feeling is mutual my friend. You are a blessing 🙂
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God bless.
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Beautiful, just like the place your poetry resides from……the ❤️.
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Thank you , Freezeeee!
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Yassy is soooo cool
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Ice maiden
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From the movie Frozen. 😁 ❄️
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Yup.
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Nice with a capital ICE! 😁
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A personal moment.. Becomes Centre of a personal expression.. But scattered.. No memories.. Just opinions.. What are you weighing? Again it is just my opinion..
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Ah! You are a deep one. You get me to think. Will catch you later.
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Haiku is definitely a great way of trying to gain a deeper understanding of something like love or a heartbeat that is so cryptic in our thoughts later!
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Lol. Haiku is a wee bit like love , it’s the moment , the cutting edge, the keriji. You said it , Sherif.
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Really awesome!
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Thank you, Nic.
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Lovely, Yassy. I am really enjoying haiku.
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Happy that you do, Robbie. Hope your week is going well.
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ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਏ ਜੀ
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😊
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your heart.. beating
the whole world your oyster
fill it with your pearls
your every word a jewel
a beat of your heart
a little bit of you
rare red diamonds
no, pieces of your soul
I take the pieces
mould them, a hologram
you, reaching out, writing
painting images with words
landscapes, seascapes,
your escape,
your private world of haiku,
treasures you share
and at times, give the world
write on, precious Lady
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Thank you, Precious! You make poetry beautiful! And poetry is beautiful because of you.
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You are the spice of life
Your words flavour the world
A taste of your imagination
Write on precious Lady
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Thank you, kind guy.
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You do have a way of catching the beat of hearts, and those calm points in between. Together, they can shape your world.
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😊😊🙂
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Beautiful words yassy. I am spending time again with Basho so I was excited to read this.
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I am reading a lot of Japanese verses and haiku. It’s amazing. I feel so inspired.
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Ah — So beautiful…
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and enjoy Yassy’s emotional “Sound Of Your Heartbeat”
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Thank you 😊
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Love this!!! 🙂
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Thank you 😊🙂
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💖
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💖🙏🏼
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Most lovely collection of beautiful feelings.nice piece,dear yassy!!💞💞💞💕💕💕
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💕
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💞🎼🎶✍️💞
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Ooooh, this is soooo Nice!!💖
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Thank you , Zelda 🤗
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My pleasure!💖
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I love it
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Thank you 😊
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That is so beautiful!! So heartfelt and creative. Love it🌠
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Thank you , Jahnavi 💕
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Beautifully expressed, Yassy!
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Thank you, Brad.
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Gather, then, your haiku in your memory, and you have a silent witness to your thought and heart.
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there is liberation
A sense of gratitude
like a silent witness
Letting my spirit free
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Your spirit was free.
You had but to remember
to extend your wings…
(Sorry, couldn’t resist a little haiku of my own!)
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That’s a nice haiku.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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How lovely, Yassy. Sweet.
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Thank you sweet Selma.
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Hi Yassy, great to catch up again this lockdown/virus thing has changed the whole aspect of communication hope you are keeping well 😊
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I am okay , thank you. Good to hear from you. I hope all is well with you too.
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Scribbling away, moving about as you can probably see itchy feet a result of having too much time on my hands due to being cocooned but a door never closes than another opens.
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Be well, Chris.
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Thank you, you also Yassy.
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Welcome 🤗
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How beautiful ✨
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Thank you, Navin.
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You’re welcome Yassy.
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Sound of your heart beats in your words and poetry – thanks for sharing!
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I am so grateful to you for reading ❤️
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I am grateful for your writing! Thanks for sharing. 🤗
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Always a pleasure to see you 🤗
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You write haikus with an unmatched skill. 🖤
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Thank you, Carter.
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Beautiful words ❤️
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Blessings sent to you 🤗💕
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your few words make my heart grow fonder.. lovely Yassy! 💖
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Thank you my dear soul sister ❤️
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It’s a pleasure for sure my soul of the heart friend! 💖💖
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This is really great! Your style is very admirable. Keep on being awesome!
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Thank you for your awesome comment, Ben .
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Of course. We must be supportive in the creative world 🙂
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Of course. I totally agree.
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