war zone
deathโs heartbeat
regardless of spring
people cry each other
into bomb shelters
sun crashes on bloodied walls
some screams live in the throat
some never survive to live
reading the news
I feel the fear
between broadcasts
no deadlines
for destruction
where leaders buy time
with destruction
bloodied peace offering
the dead become the dehumanization of war.
๐ข Yassy ๐ข
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“some screams live in the throat” powerful!
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Yassy! Wow! ๐ฎ๐ข These few lines really got me in the gut! :
“people cry each other
into bomb shelters
sun crashes on bloodied walls
some screams live in the throat
some never survive to live”
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Thanks kindly , Ken .
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Yes, living with lots of fears for the people over there.
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Yes.. itโs terrible itโs horrible what people have to go through. War is unfortunate and unforgivable
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Thank you Yassy, for expressing the sadness and fear that has engulfed the world.
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We all feel the same so itโs easier to express when you know you are going to be understood. Thank you ๐๐ผ
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And all the horror is caused by one madman! Even Putinโs own generals are calling him unhinged.
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Exactly my sentiments. What a brute! Heโs on a killing frenzy. I hope someone stops him. Please please.
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Simply wonderful!
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Thank you, Luisa.
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Itโs well deserved praise! ๐
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“some screams live in the throat
some never survive to live”
“the dead become the dehumanization of war. ”
Your poem tugs deep at the heart.
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Thanks , Pragalbha ๐๐ผ๐ค
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Heart felt, brutally honest, realโฆ I think thatโs really what poetry should be. Thank you.
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At least we can express ourselves through poetry. Poetry gives us that freedom ..
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Painful truth penned well, my dear โค
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Yesss ๐thanks , Baby Zelda.
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You’re welcome…”old baby”–soon to be 70 ๐ Much love to you dear heart โค
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You are ageless , you are champagne ๐ฅ โค๏ธ
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Oh my goodness, oh my goodness! I’m swooning–you’re always so sweet to me!!๐๐๐
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I cherish you dear friend โค๏ธ
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And I YOU…cherish is such a wonderful word<3
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A powerful piece, yassy. In times like this we need to dive into words and search for hope. ๐ค
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Thank you , D. Good to hear from you. Are you still on your beat ? Sleuthing ?
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No, I’m retired now and able to spend more of my time writing. Nice to be reconnecting with some old writing friends ๐
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Glad to see you here, Davy.
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Wonderfully written, Yassy! Taut, dark, and foreboding. Loved this piece!
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Thank you, Brad.
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Stunning poetry. ๐๐๐
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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A hard hitting poem, Yassy. Well done.
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Thank you, Roberta ๐ค
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Woah that’s literally the best
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Touching poetry from the depths of darkness. This senseless destruction of humanity wrings he heart. ๐ข
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Thank you, Sumi.
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cuts to the core dear Yassy! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Always Yassy!!
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“The dead become the dehumanization of war.” Powerfully penned, and it’s devastatingly true.
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Yess. Thank you ๐๐ผ โค๏ธ
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The evils of war so beautifully and sensitively portrayed! God bless you!
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Thank you so much .. bless you much much ๐ค
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Thank you ๐๐ผ โค๏ธ
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This resonates with the blog I posted today. Well written.
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Dear Yassy, The figurative use of language is much admired.
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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