Time is a word, time is many a moon They say time is the greatest healer This fourth dimension that moves life Irreversible sequence That writes into our soul Moving through our hearts It takes and makes Past, present Future To Take Charge of To create A now that comes Calibrating life A fleeting unstillness Touching a kind of open Living, breathing the act of being The before, the after, and maybe The instant and the constant that is time. # Double Etheree
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Thanks, Ned.
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Clever! As usual.
Hope you’re well ❤️
(We are on a brief holiday while Darrin has a break from chemo. It is late here, but I just saw your wonderful post and wanted to say hi.)
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Just remembered you yesterday and wondered where you were.
Thank you, Venessa. I am okay. It’s good to hear from old friends. It’s just not the same anymore , you know.
Wishing Darrin and you all the best . Have a safe holiday.. love ❤️
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No, it’s not the same… but it’s so great to see you and your beautiful writing still here!
Thank you for your well wishes, I really appreciate it.
Love and blessings ❤️
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Love n blessings
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So lovely. I love this form. You did it perfectly. 👏
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Thank you, Selma. Gratitude 🙏🏼
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Well done!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Welcome
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Time heals indeed
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Oh yeah , of course 😊
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I’m going to read this more carefully but right off I want to say it is good to see your name pop up. I’ve missed you?
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Thanks, Dan. Good to be reading you too.
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Now I’m contemplating time – living breathing being time – the reality and unreality of time- lots to contemplate here. Your poetry caught your interest again?
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Yesss.. Time has me .. yet again contemplating.. poetry caught my interest in a more intellectual way.
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“Irreversible sequence That writes into our soul Moving through our hearts It takes and makes Past, present, Future”
*A fleeting unstillness”
Such eloquent and beautiful descriptions of time and how it operates Yassy! 😁👌❤️👏
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Time is all we have and it flies no
Thanks for your fabulous feedback , my kind friend Ken. Too kind 🤗🙏🏼
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It sure does fly by Yasmin! 👍 Keeps moving forward not back. Which is why we have to make the most of every single day! 😁❤️
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Yup 👍 yeah yeah I hear you .. make the most make hay while the sun shines but where art thou the horse 🐎 I likey them am deviating from the topic no
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Nice play of words.
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Thanks, Latham 🙂
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Now I’ve read
Timeless poetry
In my time 🙂
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Priceless
Timeless
The Sum
E
Cogito
You write ✍️
My timeline
Spellbound
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Spellbound trance
My chance to break in
For a dance 🙂
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We will whirl
We will twirl
Trip the light fantastic
Dancing is classic
And ecstatic
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Classic dance
Clock stops for romance
Not on snooze
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Twinkle toes
Forget my woes
Crank up the music 🎶
Loose the blues
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You two are really flying here!
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Beautiful poetry with an essential message. ❤️
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Thank you, Holly 💕
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this is awesome yassie! I love it! ❤
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Thank you, Carol 💕 so sweet of you.
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I’m so glad to see you! As always, your poetry leaves me speechless. Much love, Z
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Thank you, Zelda. Good to hear from you. Hugs love peace
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Thank you dear heart💖
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You are very welcome dear one 🥰
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💖💖💖
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💕❤️
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🤗
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“a fleeting unstillness” how vivid. Love this poem
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Thank you so much 😊…
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Hey there Yasmin. I know I’m a little late but still this poem was too good to pass up the chance of showing my appreciation. I absolutely love it, it is so beautifully worded but the last line, ‘The instant and the constant that is time.’ were my favourite. :))
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Hey , Tanya ., I appreciate you reading and commenting..
yes, that last line is my fav too.. it came to me as I was posting on WP.
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An unique poem on connection between the time and life with Witty mind.weldon,dear Yassy!!💕💕💕💕
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Thank you, Aruna 💕
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Dear Yassy!! Do you know to read Hindi/Urdu?Plz reply soon.xxxx
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My Hindi is atrocious 🤭
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brilliant Yassy “The before, the after, and maybe
The instant and the constant that is time. 💖👏👏
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Thank you, Cindy 💕
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You’re so welcome Yassy!❤️💕
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Brilliant beautiful poetry on Time – I love the form you wrote it in.
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Thank you!
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This is so amazingly eloquent and deep. I love the form and depth of the lines. Beautiful.
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Thank you for the motivational comment.
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💕
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❤️
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Absolutely gorgeous thoughts, the form brings out the beauty.
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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This is beautifully done, Yassy. I have never tried this form and it looks challenging. Your words match the inversion splendidly.
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Thank you, Robbie. If you do this form , you will do it wonderfully well.
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Just perfect thanks 🙂
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful ❤️
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The time continuum taking charge of our lives and its ramifications so aptly put into words! Kudos to you!
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Thank you for such an insightful comment.
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The time, yes. That other naive illusion necessary and precise to be able to calibrate the lapses of movement, between the… also imaginary, necessary and precise… two specific points, referents of its course: The observer and the observable bodies or events.
Illusion after illusion, in an orderly stealthy cadence… is how worlds, phenomena, events and the illusory separate entities that inhabit them… are generated.
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Your writings inspire countless different and distant readers who feel benefited from the balsam of your serene narrative pulse… that, not only propagates beauty, but also wisdom.
So, from here, I feel the necesity of emitting a very sincere toast for feeling me another ilusory point of reference in the midst of all of them… in order to attempt to preserve the tissue of space and time that allows the continuity of the flux of movement and cycle of perpetual change.
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Thank you.
Thank you for sharing your wisdom on the matter of time.
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