His sneakers would squeal on him if they could talk
Groaning under his weight as he took a walk
They felt all worn out
Carrying a man so stout
He went places where he shouldn’t have been
Them shoes, literally let out a scream
So they gave him shoe bites, sore toes
Adding to his list of woes
They stuck evidence on his sole
He fought barefoot to salvage his soul.
This is different yassy. I have such a vivid image coming to mind. Great poem
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Thank you, Lorraine.
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You are welcome yassy ❤️
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❤️❤️🤗🤗
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Lovely.. Can almost visualise the shoes 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thanks, Ned.
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Oh. If only shoes could talk. Lovely.
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Yesss if they could talk , they would talk their sole away.
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I can really get into your clever wordplay and amusing storyline, yassy. Might he be a real heel in need of healing?
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A real heel heheh 😈..
thanks , Tom. Heels don’t want to get healed ..
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So true… so true… I’ll try to toe the line.
You’re welcome, yassy.
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You toe the line
Your toes seem fine
It’s such a crime
When peeps don’t know where to draw the line
Battle lines drawn
I stopped smiling
Now I only frown
Thank you , Tom … for hearing me out .
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You’re Welcome!
Wow, my “toe” prompt played a small role in your creative process.
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Hahaha 😛 thanks for the laughs and the positive energies..
thanks for the wow toe .. I may just tiptoe into my next po
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You’re welcome. Looking forward to your new poem.
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Sneaker fete
Stout merman flipper
Slippers by ; )
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Sneaking away
Sneakers give way
Giving the slip
Coming under the whip
Slippers rip
Dog poo dip
Fallin a non grip
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Wow,my dear yassy!! It is so much unique type poem.sole talks to that guy about it’s disturbance.Last line is most amazing” He fought barefoot salvage his soul”.this line reminds me the famous painter of India”Maqbool Fida Husain.” Who was exiled by Indian Gov.because of his nude painting of Goddess Durga.here many Hippocratic Hindu’s organization protested his Painting.damn that hinduism. But your poem is awesome to me.love it.❤
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Thank you , Aruna.
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You are most welcome,my amazing friend!!❤
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Bless you dear heart ♥️
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Same to you🤗
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Take good care of yourself.
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Plz ,dear yaasy!! You too have to need of take best care of your self.bless you with love ,my dear!!🌹🌹🌹
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I am okay my dear .
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🤗🤗🤗with love.
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🤗❤️♥️
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❤
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Why you send emoji of black heart?my dear yassy!! Any thing wrong is there.love you,dear!!and bless you always.🤗😇🤗
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By mistake sorry 😚
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You are beautiful by heart.🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘
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❤️
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❤
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Very nice, Yassy. This gave me a good giggle.
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🙊🐒🐣
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This one is interesting.
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Bless you for reading .. my work.
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You’re welcome! It’s excellent.
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And though they were tied to each other, the shoe would have rather “knot” been attached to one another. This poem had soul Yassy!!!
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Yup what knot 🪢 hahaha 🤪
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Haha!!😂😝
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Silver streak golden
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I’d walk a mile to read your poetry Yassy😉.
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That’s so sweet 🥲
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As are you🌹. Thank you for your kindness.😊
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😄😄😄 Loved it. 💕
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Thank you, Sumi ❤️🙏🏼
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Brilliant take, this piece. 👏
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Heheh 🙏🏼
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