I hear sirens in the 2 a.m sky, red lights revolve into reflections. I blink ....my eyes vermillion in the shadows of sleep. I walk the streets under flickering neon lights. Fog settles on hunched figures ...slumber bent. A quick wind rustles dust, leaves in umber. Hoodwinked owls cry Stalking trees Where bats fly Smog stalks the streets...weed ridden breaths wheeze in a sleep concocted by social discrepancies. Dreams fancy themselves behind eyelids too dreary. ..sleep's stillness brought by little things that slide down throats. Moon shines dowbn: Stores with drawn blinds Blank stares Empty faces I am bemused by the muteness of sleeping figures. Rats crawl out of nowhere and slip into hidden crevices...scurrying across yellow lit pavements. .cold bitter...impersonal Social imbalance A requisite for life? Poverty unsolicited Sorrow irrevocable
Wonderfully complex images and metaphors. And I love the unique style and from. Another beauty, my friend!
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Thanks , thanks Brad , thanks so much for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts.
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You’re very welcome Yassy! 😁 Some wonderful imagery in there. 😁♥️
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🙏🏼🙂.
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There’s so much in here Yassy but for now, I just want to say WOW!! 😮😮👏👏
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Thank you for a wow some comment..thanks Ken
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yeah – I’m sort of at a loss for where to start complimenting Yassy on this piece…
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David
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Agreed! It’s mesmerisic and takes you along a journey with him! 😁❤️
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Mesmeric, hypnotic thoughts on this journey ..
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Your loss is my gain haha 😂
Thanks , Ben .. you win big with me
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Most lovely” my eyes are vermilion in the shadows of sleep..”most beautiful poem by using amazing metaphors like gem.gorgeous, dear yassy !! I love it.💕💕💕💝
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Aruna 🤗🙏🏼❤️
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Yeah.my dear yassy!! Most welcome.much love and big hugs,dear!!🤗🤗🤗❤❤❤❤
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Hey dear yassy!! If you like,can you send your photo to me?🤔
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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Layers of beauty in this one, exquisite beautiful poetry!
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Thanks.
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I wonder who else really saw this without the imagination of just reading —spooky shit; what has it all become. I’m at a lost of, humanity. Beautifully written.
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I wrote this exactly the way I saw it .. still gives me the jitters .. in some part of the world in one of my travels I seemed to have lost my way and stumbled upon an alley ..
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You’ve soaked up a lot of happenings around you and delivered your view in such eloquent and profound verses. Absolutely stunning.
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Thanks, Carter. Thank you for your awesome comment..
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You’re welcome, Yas.
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great piece, Yass!
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Thank you, Jay.
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wow nicely packed poem Yassy!👏👏
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Thanks 🤗
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❤️❤️💕❤️
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