Those eyes…the color of dawn
Carrying the warmth of sun’s heartbeat
That smile…… like blossoms that purl a slow-dance
Like the scarlet breath of butterflies
Gloss of honey on lips
That skin… like blushed sun rays
Upon glens and meadows
Soft silken spring flowers on gossamer skin
That hair…carrying stars’ glow
Diamond shining
Brushed by flames
Murmur of luminance
Your speech …. sets the blood running in my veins
Setting the ink on light
Your aura… the rainbow that paints the sky
Filling my eyes with color
The night holds me and the stars tell me they are mine
But I am just a poet with a lost cause…
Ah, that elusive idyllic bliss….
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Yup .., elusive
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Your poem….like a sunrise for heart ❤
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Thank you for your warm thoughts 🤗
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Some exquisite imagery and evocative lines here Yassy! 😁❤️ Beautiful! 👏👏❤️❤️😁😁
“That hair…carrying stars’ glow
Diamond shining
Brushed by flames
Murmur of luminance”
Your aura… the rainbow that paints the sky
Filling my eyes with color
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Thanks, Ken.
How are you doing ?
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You’re so welcome Yassy! 😁👍 Doing good thanks. 😁 Just working on my blog and looking after my 2 girls.
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Happy to hear that. I hope your girls write too !
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My youngest likes to take my notepad and scribble all over it in her own unique style while my oldest likes to paint and draw. 😁
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Niceeeeee artist fam eh !! 👍
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Definitely dude! And my wife’s quite the artist too! 😁 My dad & my mam in particular always encouraged myself and my sister to be creative and follow what makes us happy.
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Yay !! That’s great. Hope to see your missus post something here, Art , music, poetry ..,the works… looking forward
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She’s not really into blogging herself Yassy but always supports me in my writing 😁 Here’s the link to my latest poem which I wrote and published last Wednesday: https://kenhume31.wordpress.com/2021/11/03/the-scene-is-set/
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Best poem I read today. Thanks for sharing, Ken.
Awesome writing from you.
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Wow Yassy, thanks so much! 😁😊 That’s high praise indeed! 😁
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Welcome indeed 😁
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Can’t find your blog dude
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Kenhume31 gotcha
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What a beautiful and vivid imagery you have created with this poem, Yassy.
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Thank you, Roberta.
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Lost and found
Setting ink on light
Poet’s cause
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MIA quill
On a lost drill
Had it’s fill
A lit ink
In ten shakes of a duck’s tail
Poet’s cause can never fail
Hail Cogito Sum
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Beautiful words
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Thank you ❤️
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Amazing. Very descriptive and paint a picture.
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Thank you , Derek.
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beautiful ❤
(you’re lucky you’ve only got one lost cause, Yassy!)
-David
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Thank you , Davidoff 🤗🙏🏼
Lost cause is a cause for concern no
Lol 😝
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 😊
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So beautiful to read and be with.
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Thanks , P.
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Another masterpiece! Such stunning imagery and wonderfully magical lines as always. Delightful poem 👌💗
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Delighted with your comment.. thank you girl 🙏🏼🤗
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You’re always so good yassy! 😍
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Thank you , Maria oh Maria 🤗🙏🏼
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Beautifully penned.💛
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Thank you 🤗
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I am always amazed at the magic you spin from a moment in time. Your imagery and metaphors are powerful and compelling. Well written, my friend!
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Thank you very very very much much , Brad 🙏🏼🤗
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A wonderful piece.😊👏
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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😊 The pleasure is all mine.
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Awesome 💯👍
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Thanks!
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This is stunning!
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Thank you!!
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Hello everyone can you please review my work at thatsweetdurre.wordpress.com please it means a lot to me
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Awesome 👏
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Lovely! You are a gifted romantic!
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Lol 😂 thanks .. no one said that to me before .. gifted romantic … niceeee thanks , M.
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Wow!
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Yippee 🙌🏼
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Most lovely poem.having comparison with beauty of nature of your love but feel as something missed…..marvellous.unique style of poem ,dear yassy.
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Thank you, Aruna.
How you doin
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Fine,dear yassy!! Most welcome.xxxx
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Oh yeah
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Most welcome,dear!!xxx
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🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🪴🍁🍂
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🍁🍁🍁
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Good one Yassy !
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Thank you, R!
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You used a beautiful imagery.
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with pleasure dear.
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Your Eorfd….. the light to my soul, tranquility
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Peace ✌️
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like n follow my blog
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Loved your poem so much hope you all will like my today’s interesting blog
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Thank you 🙏🏼
Sure
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Oh my, so powerful and evocative.
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Thanks, Jude.
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More than a pleasure.
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Smile, skin, speech, hair and aura…words that anyone would fall for. Such beautiful words Yassy, a poet with a lost cause but a poet who found a way to affect the heart.♥️
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Lost and not found. How’s the Sona one.
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I’ll always find you🌹. The Sona one is very good from what I hear.😊
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Yesss. Love and blessings to you both.
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Thank you so very much.🌹😊
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Yassy, this is beautiful poetry, breathtaking!
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Thank you, Holly 🤗
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So my pleasure!
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Wow!!! Beautiful lines 💯💖🥰
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Thank you, Rifa ❤️
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These beautiful lines evoke the softest of feelings. 🖤🖤
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Thank you, Carter.
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Amazing lines…nice poem😊🙏
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Thank you
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful style and theme….the ending line is perfect:)
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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You bend my mind in ways sublime then bind it in tender twine everytime i read your evocative and gifted insightful writes – so adore the words you score – thank you Jasmine for sharing freely here – I’ll pay to listen and read for your poetry. Anyday.
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Ah awwww ❤️thank you so much, Heather .. you are the best. Your comment makes me so happy 🤗
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awwww you just filled me with joy ❣️❣️
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🤗❤️ I am happy too dear one !
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