I Fall

Those eyes…the color of dawn
Carrying the warmth of sun’s heartbeat

That smile…… like blossoms that purl a slow-dance
Like the scarlet breath of butterflies
Gloss of honey on lips

That skin… like blushed sun rays
Upon glens and meadows
Soft silken spring flowers on gossamer skin

That hair…carrying stars’ glow
Diamond shining
Brushed by flames
Murmur of luminance

Your speech …. sets the blood running in my veins
Setting the ink on light

Your aura… the rainbow that paints the sky
Filling my eyes with color


The night holds me and the stars tell me they are mine
But I am just a poet with a lost cause…

123 thoughts on “I Fall

  1. Some exquisite imagery and evocative lines here Yassy! 😁❤️ Beautiful! 👏👏❤️❤️😁😁
    “That hair…carrying stars’ glow
    Diamond shining
    Brushed by flames
    Murmur of luminance”

    Your aura… the rainbow that paints the sky
    Filling my eyes with color

    Liked by 6 people

      1. My youngest likes to take my notepad and scribble all over it in her own unique style while my oldest likes to paint and draw. 😁

        Liked by 3 people

      2. Definitely dude! And my wife’s quite the artist too! 😁 My dad & my mam in particular always encouraged myself and my sister to be creative and follow what makes us happy.

        Liked by 2 people

  2. You bend my mind in ways sublime then bind it in tender twine everytime i read your evocative and gifted insightful writes – so adore the words you score – thank you Jasmine for sharing freely here – I’ll pay to listen and read for your poetry. Anyday.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a comment