Sister, I wear your skin
I feel your unspoken pain
The anger of a simmering flame
I feel your fears
I see unshed tears
You have to fight to belong
You have to be strong
Sister, I feel the rape of honour
I feel my skin crawl at the destructive macabre .
Brother, I wear your skin
I feel the words in your throat
I feel you speaking bright, colored
I feel your heart beating
I feel your hope fleeting
I feel you tear inside
But then, you have to decide
Youβd rather explode
And feel the inner applaud .
I wear your skin
I wear all the metaphors for pain .
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Thank you, Ned.
Gratitude ππΌ
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I wear your skin and feel the inner applause
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Thank you ππΌ, Veronicah.
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Oh my, Yassy, this is exceptionally compelling.
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Thanks, Roberta. π€
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Beautifully expressed and heartfelt.
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Thanks, Rosaliene ππΌπ€
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This is so inspirational π
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Oh , thatβs so nice of you to say. Bless you π€
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Yes, so beautiful ππ»
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Yessss π
Thanks , Nick.
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Talented writer
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soooo powerfully delivered Yassy.. l feel ya sisterβ£οΈ
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Thank you , sistah π€β€οΈ
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of course my friend!πππ
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Damn. I’d crumble under the weight of so many metaphors.
-David
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Lol π like a cookie hahaha π€ͺ I thought you are stronger than that , D.
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πͺ Yassy πͺ
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Yummy π
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Compelling read.
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Thank you, Pranab.
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Yassy…. the line….. ,, I feel the words in your throat ” completely got me….. You have strenght and power of millions sunrise, beautiful and truly and scary Your words are, …everything at once…, bravo bravo BRAVO !
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The words are the pain of the common man .. heβs tired of hollering.. now he/she canβt even keep up the voice.
Cheers to you , Lubomir. Thank you for your awesome comment. I am grateful π₯²
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Exceptional. .. how beautifully you express the present. Awaiting a peaceful future with less pain and suffering for all inhabitants of this beautiful world.
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You said it, Sumi. Peaceful future is what the world needs. Hopefullyβ¦.
Thank you for your comment, Sumi. Love the insight in your words.
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Masterpiece! So powerful. I must say how effectively youβve conveyed what you wanted to- perfection! May all suffering end!
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Thank you for supporting my work , Sahana.. your appreciation means the world to me.
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Powerful and well-crafted, Yassy! Well done!
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Thanks, Brad.
Be well.
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Powerful stuff Yassy.
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Thank you kind one π€
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I wear your skin. Goodness. Powerful and lovely.
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Walk a mile in my shoes stuff , I guess.
Thanks , Selma .
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Such deep care. Love that touches the other truly with being seen. You write with so much heart and beauty, it moves me.
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Thank you, Pragalbha.
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You are welcome π
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Wonderful.”….i wear all metaphors of pain”.all poem is having a touch of pain and love for all.beautifully written ,my dear yaskhan!!
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That’s inspirational
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Wow
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Thank you π
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This is beautiful. I love this so much. π
Coincidently I wrote a poetry last year which resembles with this piece.
I hope you would like to read it.
https://shreyasharmasite.wordpress.com/2021/09/28/a-living-ache/
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Yup will check it out. Thank you , Shreya.
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You’re welcome.
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Intimate and deep. I feel heard.π
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Thank you π€
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Superbly evoked
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Thank you ππΌ
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You’re very welcome to
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You’re very welcome indeed!
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such a deep poem @yassy
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Thank you, Man kun.
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wow! Powerful poem yassie! xo
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Thank you dearest β€οΈ
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Powerful words expressed with profound emotions. This is a great piece, Yas.
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Thank you so much, Carter.
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Nice post
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Thanks
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How far are you doing
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I am okay π
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Nice
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Thanks
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You are welcome
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Good
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Thanks
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You are welcome
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