On the wrong side of destiny
I was born
In the silence of a teardrop
On the edge of a breakdown
Learning to fall
Learning to unlearn
Chrysanthemum
Hope
That writes itself into words
I touch the words
As the sun fires deep in my belly
Making me into my quintessence
Made into me.
I was born
In the silence of a teardrop
On the edge of a breakdown … great GREAT lines. ❤️
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Thank you, Jay 🙏🏼
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Welcome, Yassy 🙋🏻♂️
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Oh wow, “I was born in the silence of a teardrop.” Just WOW! ❤️
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Thanks , Lorraine ❤️
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You are very welcome yassy xx
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Oh lord, Yassy, this is gorgeous.
xoxo
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You are very kind , G 🤗
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And you are very talented.
Hon, I hope you are ok.
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Your talent is rubbing off on me, sweetie .
I am okay 👍
Be well.
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What Gabriela said! ❤
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Thank you, Susi ❤️
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❤ You're welcome, Yassy!
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Wow, this is just too gorgeous! Hard to pick a favourite line. So intense and heartfelt. Very powerful! 👌
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts 🙏🏼❤️
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Omg this is stunning!!!
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Thank you, P.
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You are very welcome 🌹
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I love hope writing itself into words!
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Yesss thanks .. that is poetry , I guess.
Happy weekend, D 😊
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Thanks Yassy. You too, though I’m sometimes not sure what day it is…..
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My pleasure dear friend..
It’s Saturday morning here and the time is Eleven fifteen.
Noisy hot morning lol 😝
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I read this yesterday. I was moved beyond words. Sending love and hugs. ❤️🤗
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Thank you, Holly .. sending hugs hugs love love back .
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Missed you . I hope you are well and doing great,
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I am well , thank you, Rene.
Take good care of yourself.
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I will, you do the same !
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🙏🏼🤗
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Me too yassy, very well expressed, me too. Thank you
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Thank you 🙏🏼 very much.
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Wow Yas, this is so heartfelt in so few words with lingering essence! Phenomenal! 💖
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Thank you ever so so much , Cindy ❤️
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you’re so welcome Yassy!💖
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You are so kind ❤️
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it’s easy with you my friend!💖
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I am honoured. 🤗
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🤗😘😘
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🤗🤗🌸
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This is one of my faves from what I´ve read of your poetry 😀
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Thank you so much. I am delighted and honoured.
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Beautiful✨
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🙏🏼❤️
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Unique poem,my dear❤
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Thank you, Aruna ❤️🤗
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You are most welcome,dear yassy🤗🤗🤗🤗❤❤❤
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🤗❤️
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❤
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❤️❤️
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❤❤❤
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Oh, Yassie, this is delightful! ❤
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Thank you
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Thank you for the reblog 🤗
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Two stanzas that represent reality, healing and hope. Fantastic piece. 🖤
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Thank you 😊
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Nice blog..
Do visit to my blog and follow it if you like…
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