Moving through darkness
A copper, periwinkle fire
On a threadbare wind
Sky meets sea
The whispering sounds of mists that lacquer dawn’s hush
The fish world dreams
Boats languor on oyster tears
Moving through darkness
A copper, periwinkle fire
On a threadbare wind
Sky meets sea
The whispering sounds of mists that lacquer dawn’s hush
The fish world dreams
Boats languor on oyster tears
Dive into the flow
Deep sparkling light refracting
Off of Yassy’s dreams
💓
David
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Deep blue
Velvet wind
David says
Shimmering words
Yassy can only dream
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“…a threadbare wind” — love that line, and it really sets the mood.
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Thank you, PP 🙏🏼🤗
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Hey, thanks.
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This is very beautiful, Yastrzemski.
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Oops, predictive text Yassy 🙈
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Oooooops 😜🙊
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Yastrzemski ooooooh 🙈☺️
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I’ve no idea how predictive text came up with that name.
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No worries, Roberta 🤗
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Works well with and without the images.
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Thanks so much, Latham.
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👌👌👌✒🌹
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🙏🏼🌹
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Beautiful words, beautiful pictures
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Thank you, F🙏🏼
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So beautiful!! Well penned💕
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Thanks very much 🤗
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Beautiful
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Thanks, Shashi.
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Nacre mist
Luminous layers
Oyster tears
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Mother of Pearl
Nacre whirl
Mist illumined
Tears shined
Lobster 🦞
Mobster
Wined
Dined
A mermaid
Got her tale
Refined
Aquarium
Aquamarine
Fins
Wins
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Fish world dreams
Boats with mermaid fins
Lobster traps
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I wonder
Do they close their eyes
When they sleep
The fish 🐠
And mermaids ?
Do they really live in the deep?
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Fish eyes wide
While mermaidens wink
gimlet eyes
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Blink blink
Mermen 🧜♂️ wink
Mermaidens blush
In ocean rush
Aquamarine crush
Starfish starry eyed tide
On sparkling waters ride
On dolphin 🐬 astride
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Mermaid taps
Aquarium glass
Merman laughs
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Two molecules of hydrogen
One molecule of oxygen
Breaking even
Mermaid
Merman
Enthusiasm
Taps into
Moments stolen
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Molecules
precipitating
as poems
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On the breath
Of a poem :
ocean thirsts
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Goodness, this flows so beautifully… 🙂
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Thanks, Mike.
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Beautiful scene. Peaceful
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Thank you, Daninmaya..
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This is stunning! I love every line! And great photos.
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Thank you kindly. So happy with your comment.
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Very very beautiful!!
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Hey, thanks 😊
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Wow, isn’t that a fantabulous piece! Lovely pictures too…
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Thank you for your fabulous comment ❤️
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I love this one!
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Thanks 🙏🏼 🤗
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A wonderful verse, Yassy! I love the description of a “threadbare wind”. Such beautiful language!
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Thank you so much, Brad. 🙏🏼
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Epic🖤🖤🖤
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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🙂
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It would certainly be difficult to express even more beauty in so few words.
But surely Yassy will achieve it very soon, since she is an expert in such dreaming challenges.
-[ Amazing, sister !! ]-
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Thank you bro 😎!
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http://gamemania254.wordpress.com
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Beautifully penned and imbued with such wonderful imagery.
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Thank you, James 🙏🏼
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Pleasure. Have a great day.
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You too.
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Cheers.
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Cheers 🥤
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🤙
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https://youbehopeful.wordpress.com/2020/08/29/comfortable-in-what-makes-us-happy-%f0%9f%98%87/
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lovely
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so beautiful Yassy! 💖💖
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Thank you dear Cindy❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You’re welcome dear Yassy! 💖
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🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🌷🌷🌷
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The tranquility in these words is skillfully expressed, Yas. 👏
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Thank you , Carter. Always happy to see your comment 🙏🏼🤗
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That makes me incredibly glad, Yas. 😊 It’s a pleasure reading your work.
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Bless you , Carter .
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Beautiful ❤️ Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you , Lisa 🙏🏼🤗
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love this, yass
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Thank yuuuuuu !
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I will share this with my young sister🤟✨thnkyou
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Most impressive and lovely poem by using amazing metaphor,my dear yaasy!!gorgeous.👌xxx
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Thank you 🌹
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You are most welcome,my dear!!🌹
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