Blue velvet night
Blue velvet night
A sapphire moon
On a lustrous viridescent sea
Sail away with me.
Under a bowl of sky
Under a bowl of sky
That has turned upside down
A cerise wind cries
Spilling white stars
Defying gravity
In ether’s immortality.
Tasting autumn
I ate a persimmon
It tasted of autumn
Tangerine’s last bloom
Auburn russet luminescence.
Silk orb-weavers
In the cobweb
I found a spider
Hanging by a thread
Barely clothed
In liquid silk
Soaked.
Sky run
Whisper of sapphire
Zephyr sequinned
In eagles’ cry
I see
Hues of dawn sky
A blue wind blows through
My heart
Skips a beat .
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Wonderful!
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Long time??
Thank you , Afzal. I hope all is well with you.
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Thabk you! All is well, thanks and hope all is well with you too 🙏🏽. I’ve been keeping insanely busy with work and home stuff, which never ends 😂
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Welcome! Good to see you back.
I am well, thank you.
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Great to be back and great to hear that you are well. Warmest wishes, my friend
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👍🙏🏼
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What a splendid writing. Under your pen words become precious jewels 🌺❤️🌸🌹
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Thank you, G❤️🙏🏼
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Wee wonders
as in heat lightning
cool thunder
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Cognitive sum
Works wonders
Lightening storms by
Into cool thunderstorms
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you for the reblog, Ned.
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beautiful! ❤ love these! ❤
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Thank you ❤️, sweet one.
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Thesecare so beautiful, each and every one a gem!
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Thank you, Holly ❤️
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My pleasure! Missed you! ❤️
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Missed you too. Just catching up on your posts.
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❤️
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❤️❤️
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🧡🤗
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I love these! Such beautiful writing. The first two are my favorite although all are amazing.
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Thank you very much, Isabelle.. I am so delighted with your appreciation. Thank you 🙏🏼
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Tasting autumn!
Magic
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Thank you ☺️
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Wow. This is so descriptive and wonderful.
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Thank you for your awesome comment, Derek.
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You’re welcome Yassy!!!!
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Loving the last stanza especially… dreamy. 🤗💎✨🙏
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Thank you, Lia ❤️
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so genius…. “Blue velvet night”. love it.
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Thank you, Jixi.. I thought of the red velvet cake 🍰 😂
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So beautiful and heartfelt! Well penned!!
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Thank you so very much, Jahna ❤️
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👌👌👌✒️🌹
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Thank you ☺️
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How you use language – the taste and feel of words! Bring to life – your vision?
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It’s just that I like poetry. And I have fantastic readers like you who inspire, support and appreciate.. I am blessed. Thank you 🙏🏼
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What a masterpiece! Just brilliant piece of writing with beautiful imagery. Ethereal lines 👌
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Thank you , dear Sahana. ❤️🙏🏼
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Wow… beautiful
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Thanks ever sooooo much 🙏🏼🤗
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I think these are all beyond my imagery skill set – gorgeous writing, Yassy ❤
This is my favorite:
-David
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It is also mine favourite 💐
Thank you,,David.
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So melodious ! Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you , Brittny ❤️
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You’re welcome, Yassy 🙂
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Beautiful❤💞💕💯.
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Thank you ❤️
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a gorgeous lush yummy poem, yassy…and i love persimmons 😉
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Thank you, Poet_Jay ..
your thoughts are rare and nourish my creative energy.
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You’re very welcome, my friend. :))
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Most lovely.gorgeous.🌷
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Thank you, Aruna. Any news of your Dew 😊
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No,I have no any news of dew.do you know about him? If yes,then reply me.🤔
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No, Aruna dear , I have no news of Drew. I hope he is fine.
You take good care of yourself, dear Aruna.
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May God bless him.
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All our prayers and best wishes are with him.
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Yeah.Indeed.he is included in my prayers🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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🙏🙏🙏🙏
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You know how to paint a picture. Very nice verse, Yassy.
Art
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Thank you, Loujen 🙏🏼🤗
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Hey yassy!! Dew is on Twitter🌹but not do most work.he is enjoying his life by tours.
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Oh yeah
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💐💐💐💐💐💐
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💐❤️
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😊
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I really enjoyed these poems, Yassy. They are all beautiful.
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Thank you, Roberta 🤗
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Personifying sky as “a bowl upside down” is what I have searching for a long time. Simply wow.
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Thank you ☺️
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sailing away with you Yassy with your yummy poem. love it!💖
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Thank you dear Cindy 😘
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I’m eternally spellbound by your enthralling words. 🖤🖤🖤
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Thanks, Carter. So kind ❤️
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Epic🖤🖤🖤
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Thank you ☺️
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Most welcime
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Great job
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Thank you.
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Beautiful as eternity. Learnt new words. ❤❤❤
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Thank you , Shreya ❤️
Thank you for reading
Thank you for your awesome appreciation ❤️
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My pleasure. 🌼
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Beautiful writing!❤️
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There really are no words to describe my admiration for these little poems. They are a work of art🤩😍
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Thank you so much 🙏🏼🤗❤️
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Great work, I love Blue Velvet Night.
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Thank you, Annette 🙏🏼
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I really love the lines, under a bowl of sky, and silk orb weavers.
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Thank you for the reblog ❤️
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So colourful, I can almost taste the sky!
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Thank you, Daninmaya 🙏🏼🤗
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I like both of these 🙂 Be well.
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Thank you.
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Unbelievable
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on attis.
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These are so nice…heart and the world, bite-sized..
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Thank you, Jazmine.
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Wow.. amazingly written… makes a dreamy scene come true!!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Hi! I loved this poem and I was wondering if I could feature you on my podcast? If so please reach out to me and I would gladly talk to you! ☺️
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Thanks. How does this work?
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Well I have a podcast which is on my site. (I posted it here today!) I would read your poem, and try to dissect it, see if I’m close, and then I would ask you to interview for the next podcast where you would talk about your poem, the work, and possibly read it on my show if possible. Would you be interested?
Get back to me when you can! ☺️
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Yes.. it sounds very interesting.. Would love that.
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Great! So I will read your poem next week, but I would like if you could send me your email and phone number? Please email it to me at nicolereneewilliams27@gmail.com I’ll also send you some questions. Thank you so much!
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Just emailed you.
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