I feel
The touch of your smile
Like Cello Suite No.1 in G major
Rhymes hang heavy
In translucent tears
Eyelashes tickled
By star visions
Orion and Artemis
In sky’s eternity
From trauma
I make poetry
Dreams are like
Scattered leaves
On an autumn wind
There’s hesitation
In my thoughts
Like a broken melody
I listen like birds listen to the sky
My fingers wrap their
Aquamarine wisdom
Blossoms quiz the sun
Wild flowers burn the horizon
Meteors burst in the hills
My page waits
For the rawness of my words.
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Very beautiful, Yassy… but 😟 it doesn’t sound like all is well…
-David
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Thank you, Davidoff ., all is well sweet guy 🙏🏼
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From trauma I make poetry.. the entire piece is gorgeous yet.. I hope everything is well hon ❤️🌹🥰🌺
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I am fine really , it’s only poetry sweetheart 🤪
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I am glad to hear that. You and your gorgeous poetry… I love you both.
xoxoxo…
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🤗🙏🏼💕❤️
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This is the best I’ve read this year, decade even, century.
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Thank you very much , Clive. Too kind 🙏🏼
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Hippy tone
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Thank you ☺️
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Saline smile
Crystalline vision
Cello suite
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Picasso framed
One salty tear
Symphony sellout
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Framed light show
Avalanche of tears
SRO
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On the wall
An avalanche tall
SOS
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This is such a beautiful poem. 💕
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Thank you ❤️
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My, what a gorgeous poem! Beautifully brought to life through fantastic words and imagery… Lovely! 💕
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Thank you so much , Samsahana.
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My favorite part is
“From trauma
I make poetry
Dreams are like
Scattered leaves
On an autumn wind” (yassy).
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Thanks , Em. Have a gorgeous Sunday.
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You’re welcome, Yassy! Have a great day too!
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🙏🏼🤗
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Brilliant Yassy! 👏👏 2 lines stand out for me: “From trauma I write poetry” & “there’s hesitation in my thoughts like a broken melody.”
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Yes, thank you , Ken. Grateful for your comment 🙏🏼🤗
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A true classical masterpiece, Yas. 🖤🖤
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Thank you, Carter 🤗🙏🏼
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Wonderful poetry, Yassy! Each line and word are perfectly placed and delivered in a way that demands the reader feel the words. You have an amazing gift!
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Thank you very much, Brad.
Have a safe and happy weekend.
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‘dadt’s right, yu poedt! Really nice, Yassy.
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Thank yuuuuu ❣️
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Don’t have words to describe how beautiful this is.
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Thank you, Sir. How is Kunal. He’s been MIA.
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Kunal is fine. Thank you.Despite my urging,refuses to pick up a pen, says it should come from within. Is right. Hope all is well at your end. Stay Blessed.
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Thank you, Sir.
Be well. Peace .
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Oh my…. this is sublime. Perfect poetry, ethereal, real… lovely… 👌✨
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Thank you, Lia. How have you been?
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Surviving while attempting to be thriving, Yassy. ;)) Muddling fairly, or fairly muddling, as someone dear to me likes to say. :)) How about you?
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Oh , I will survive lol 😝
Good to hear from you. Missed reading you. Glad your fine.
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Haha awesome. :)) I believe it for sure. 🙌😊👍🌷 Missed reading you too. 🤗Thanks and likewise. 🙏💗
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Oui oui , Mademoiselle Lia. Welcome 🤗welcome and thank you 🌞
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Fantastic, Yassy. 🙏
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Thank you , Flesch.
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You’re most welcome.
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Blossoms quiz the sun
Wild flowers burn the horizon
Meteors burst in the hills –
magical lines… 👍🏼 ❤️
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Thank you , Jay 🙏🏼🤗
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You wrote: “Like Cello Suite No.1 in G major” Who is playing the cello? Do you mean Bach by Fournier? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WShgQkaFlV4
I love only Fournier translating Bach! Lovely inspiration!
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Yo-Yo Ma
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Hmmm…. well, give Pierre Fournier a listen and I am sure you will agree he rules in translating Bach Cello Suites. I realize Mister Rogers introduced Yo Yo and all, so remain smitten by all means, but once you hear Fournier, you will be transformed by the No.1 in G major. I promise! Again, lovely inspiration! And thanks for your reply. 🙂
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Lovely .. Pierre rules now I am truly smitten 😍
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So glad you feel the same way! Your poem is truly moving. And inspired. 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙏🏼🤗so welcome 🤗
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Ah…Bach
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Yesssss🙏🏼
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So pretty, Yassy. I really like the second stanza.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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so lovely, and I listened to Cello Suite No.1 in G major while reading, a great pairing
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Thank you so much , Mark.
Take good care of yourself.
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There’s an indefinite pain in your heart when you read the poem, it’s like like listening to Yoyoma while looking at Gauguin Arts
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful post
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Thank you, Pratik. Bless you 🤗
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Marvellous composition on shattered dreams
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Thank you very much for reading and for your comment.
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This is breathtaking
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Thank you , Lestyn.
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Your first line is so awesome. Smashed it
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful as ever. ❤❤
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From Yasmin, “Yassy”, Yaskhan The Superbest of poets and capturers of sublime moments woven into myriad tapestries. So glad I had time today to visit. Thanks, Lady ‘Yas’.
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Thank you., Lord Rich.
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I love your reflections here Yassy and especially these line
“From trauma
I make poetry
Dreams are like
Scattered leaves
On an autumn wind “💖
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Thank you for reading. Means a lot to me 🙏🏼🤗
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It’s my delight to read you always💖
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🙏🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️
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💕😍🌹
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𝙸 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚕𝚒𝚗𝚎
“𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚖 𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚞𝚖𝚊 𝙸 𝚠𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚎 𝚙𝚘𝚎𝚝𝚛𝚢” 𝚊𝚗𝚍 “𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎’𝚜 𝚑𝚎𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗 𝚒𝚗 𝚖𝚢 𝚝𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚊 𝚋𝚛𝚘𝚔𝚎𝚗 𝚖𝚎𝚕𝚘𝚍𝚢” , 𝚒𝚜 just brilliant✨
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Amazing poem
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Thanks , D. Btw, you are one amazing 🤩 poetess.
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💜💜
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Thank you for the reblog.
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I think this is the best I’ve seen till now.
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Love it so ♥️
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Thank you 🤗
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Welcome
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I liked what you said about the broken melody. Your a great poet.
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Thankx.
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Stunning and very moving and enriching
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Tremendous! Beautiful! Your voice is so imbued in your work! Love the way the imagery and cadence and the texture of the words all folds in so well together.
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Thank you so very much, Mike.
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Important poem Yassy. Important creation.
Narayan x
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Thank you, Narayan.
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Wonderful.”my page waits the rawness of my words”Weldon,dear !!😊
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Thank you kindly 🤗
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You are most welcome,dear yasmin🌹
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The Lonely Author is on Twitter’.my dear!!🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍
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Yeah, I know. I follow him and also you on Twitter.
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Thanks,dear!!
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Amazing…
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Thank you.
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