sticking a injection of feelings
in my cold veins :
my body becomes
another cripple
Sorry, when now i read your poem, first thing that comes on my mind…im in statistic too…
I’d rather be in the statistics of poets. How many of us are there. Poetry vaccination works on all viruses, on life in particular, if the words are a virus, so what is life?
Just another place for the infection, which we will prevent with poetry.
Yassy, your poems are bullets that strike with infallible accuracy, great.
Yes, I like your idea about the statistics of poets. That is fantastic .
Poetry vaccinated.. I would be the first to get that jab.
Poetry helps to alleviate our pain and anxiety..
I thank you for reading my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Itβs good to read you.
Be well, Lubomir.
Sending you flowers π my dear good friend. Take good care.
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I must add this to my seeming Luddite bag of tricks when asked why I want an everyday common influenza shot – which they do not have and do not intend to have just right now…and, no, we do not have any TESTS for that other thing. So I just go have a shot of 21-year-old single malt Bushmill instead.
I’ve never metadata before. π
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I have lost my copyright status π
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lol π
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Your Shot Counts
The point of a needle
on a gauge with a red line
in a lifelineβs arm
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two counts of shot
eye of the needle
a lifetimes doze
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shot one plus shot two
statistically injected
sing data’s duet ;^)
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Two shots armed
Fired into the body
A data duet ready
Immune system harmed ???
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Thanks, Ned.
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The tracker jacker π
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Yes !! Exactly!!!
You are
Spot on
π
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As are you Yassy dearπ
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My my myβ¦.
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Hi , hi , Pp ππ
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I felt like that getting my shot in the drive thru.
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More like a shot in the dark, lol π too much hype .. for a hardly doze .. got over before I knew it heheheheh
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Ha! ha! Aptly pointed out. : )
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Lol π yes. Thank you, Sπ€
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Yassy… today i heard news in hospital…
sticking a injection of feelings
in my cold veins :
my body becomes
another cripple
Sorry, when now i read your poem, first thing that comes on my mind…im in statistic too…
I’d rather be in the statistics of poets. How many of us are there. Poetry vaccination works on all viruses, on life in particular, if the words are a virus, so what is life?
Just another place for the infection, which we will prevent with poetry.
Yassy, your poems are bullets that strike with infallible accuracy, great.
Send roses across the sea!
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Yes, I like your idea about the statistics of poets. That is fantastic .
Poetry vaccinated.. I would be the first to get that jab.
Poetry helps to alleviate our pain and anxiety..
I thank you for reading my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Itβs good to read you.
Be well, Lubomir.
Sending you flowers π my dear good friend. Take good care.
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Self is lost to the sea that is humanity. Loved this!
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The sea of humanity is lost to the virus
Self help is needed to the self.
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2 words: bodily autonomy!!!!!
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An autonomous body of body parts.
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Well said :))))
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Thank you ππΌ
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A landmark on the path to where you are
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Thank you, Daninmaya ππΌπ€
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sci-fi data, star trek
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Space sweepers
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Brilliant take, as usual. π
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Thank you, Carter.
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Had my second jab, now bullet proof?
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I have to have my second jab yet.
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It is strange times so stay safe π
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Yeah and I am tired.
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Better days over the horizon, so chin up.
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Wow this is *chefs kiss*
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π©βπ³π
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Nice
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Thank you ππΌ
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I’ve been loving your poetry on tech and modern society lately, Yas! It’s so good.
We’re all just statistics waiting to happen. Beautifully written and said. Waiting on my second jab as well in the next few weeks. π
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Thank you so much, Lu π.
I had my first shot on may 31st. We wait 84 days for the second shot.
Good luck with yours.
Bless you lovely π
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Amazing
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Thank you ππΌβ£οΈ
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Well, something like the matrix. To be data. Interesting. That might be what we’ve become. Sad.
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More like Wordtrix now that we are on WordPress lol
On a serious note, yes we may have become just that .., a number
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Scary to think of this. But the world will go on either way. Stay well!
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I must add this to my seeming Luddite bag of tricks when asked why I want an everyday common influenza shot – which they do not have and do not intend to have just right now…and, no, we do not have any TESTS for that other thing. So I just go have a shot of 21-year-old single malt Bushmill instead.
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Great π
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Reminds me of alllll the hustle.
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Yessss .. I got my two. Lol π
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