Two souls dance In twilight rain Their heartbeats' divine A sweet refrain Cradling stars While the mist bathed Their spirits Adorned with blooms, A fired breeze Robed their skin Soft elixir Across glade To serenade A flamed tango Gliding under Gloaming hues Song of the blooms A medley swayed Savoury Handmade brew Honeyed harvest Nectar splendor To the dancing souls Bonne-bouche woven Fragrant feast A rhapsody Ambrosial.
Oh, so nicely done: “Gloaming hues”.
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Thank you , Ben.
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Welcome!
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That’s intoxicating like the powerful scent of a tropical flower ❤️
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Thank you 🙏🏼, Gabby girl ❣️
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My pleasure sweetheart 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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❤️💖💝
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Yassy..it is a whisper of the Goddess…magical, great!
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Goddess Hebe whispers magic 🪄
Thank you , Lubomir.
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Thee i worship now:) She is the best.
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Yay 😀
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Nice to Meet You, Hebe…is it You, on paint francouzského malíře Ch. Duranda ? Everlastin love a youth, YES👌👯👯🙋♂️😊
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Very eclectic 😂
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Indeed ☺️
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Arsenal just won and now I read this, Yasmin. A perfect day. Thanks ~ George
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That sure calls for a celebration, George .. coke cheers ⚽️ best Sunday news made the weekend happy happy , thank you ~~Yasmin ~~
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Spellbound by these beautiful, ethereal lines. 🖤🖤
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Thank you, Carter ..🙏🏼
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Wonderfully written. The tempo is steady and beautifully studded with colorful alliteration and language. Bravo Yasmin!
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Thank you , Brad. Thank you for a wonderful comment. 🙏🏼😊
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Lovely! A palatable word feast that left me feeling like I was there.
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Thank you kindly , Soul. 🙏🏼❣️
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“”YOUR WORDS”” are Ambrosia!! ♡♡
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So are your words, Mitali 🙏🏼❤️
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You truly managed to work a lot of emotional imagery in such limiting lines. I love that sort of expression – squeezing out every drop of art through the framework proposed by our artistic ancestors.
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I like the challenge of a form. A poetic form that makes up a creative piece ., like building blocks of syllables to incorporate the essence of the matter. It’s what I fail creative discipline..
I am happy that you like it. Very honoured with your comment. Thank you.
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Thank you for the reblog , Ned.
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A feast for the senses. Packed with passion and description, your dancing lines make me want to move my dancing feet and make my dancing heart skip a beat. 💃💓
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Well said , my beautiful Ballerina 🩰.. your words elegant and eloquent, they dance 💃🏽 nimble and swift to convey in the air that permeates our cosmos , to warm my heart .. ❣️
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Your words warm my heart and soul, making me want to releve and saute before spinning on my toes. 🩰 Merci beau poète. 💕
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Bienvenue, ma petite fille.
You are a heaven sent sibling sent to warm my soul and heart.
Take good care of yourself ❣️
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I will soul sis. 👭 You too. 💕 🤗
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Oh Yassy, you are a magical weaver of words, warping and threading yours loom. Creating a beautiful pattern always.
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Thank you so much , Eob.. I have missed your posts.
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You’re most welcome. I’ve posted quite a few new ones. Also I’m starting my 3rd year blogging so I’ve been posting some of my really early ones. I’ve missed yours as well. WP when it updated last for some reason erased many people I was following, but I have them back and you as well on my list. 😊💙
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Yes, I am so happy to be reading you once again. WordPress acts up sometimes . Lol 😂 anyhoo , we are family once again.
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mixed in win win
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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And… I’m lost within your magic. The imagery is beautiful. As always you have mesmerised us with your profound poetic perfection ❤️🌹
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts, you are too kind and generous to me , Amirah. I am so grateful 🙏🏼❤️
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You are so worthy of all the praises… ❤️🌹🙂
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🙏🏼❣️💃🏽
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Yassy, this is wonderful, and I so love how you always broaden my poetry horizons. I’m very glad to have you in my life.
Yours,
David
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Thank you, David .. I am sorry I haven’t been around much. Been some human demons lol 😂 it’s taking a toll on my poetry but the WordPress community including you my dearest friend have been so supportive that I always bounce back .. this is my family , like they say best things in life are not seen but felt.
Sorry for rambling
Yours in poetry yours in whatever lol 😂
Yasmin
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Love the opening line of two souls dancing, it was the perfect opening that kept this poem twirling, spinning, and leaping into the hearts. Your words danced hand and hand with beautiful emotions Yassy, and in the twilight setting made for a lovely dance floor.🌹
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Thank you , JoWo joweats jokeats jopoetwild , Wilde Jo 😂 always happy to see your beautiful comment., am smiling , writing a berserk comment .. just for laughs.
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Your berserk comment has me smiling from ear to ear from there to here! Simply amazing you are Classy Yassy, and your writing is just like you🌹😊. Lovely!
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Your berserk comment has me smiling from ear to ear from there to here! Simply amazing you are Classy Yassy, and your writing is just like you, simply lovely!🌹🌹
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🙊smiling grinning from ear to ear. My sassy friend, Jo , now sparkly Jo. 🤣
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Versed so beautifully
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such beautiful imagery in your words Yassy! 💖🤗🌷
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Thank you so much, Cindy ❣️💗🤗🙏🏼
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Exquisite beauty in your verse and words
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Thank you, Pragalbha 💗
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Hey guys my new blog is out do check it out on https://jagritiblogs.wordpress.com/2021/02/27/keanu-charles-reeves/. Do follow, like and comment down below on which topic you want me to write on.
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Gosh. So beautiful. Can’t get over that imagery!
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Thank you, Ish 😊
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An elixir of love and wine! Great imagery as always – definitely a fragrant feast, a rhapsody and definitely ambrosial! Thanks for sharing your talent 🙂
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Thank you, Tigres23 ❣️
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Most welcome 🤗
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Very nice
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Such a magical piece!! Incredible .
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Thank you, Rosida 💗
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So sweet. I can feel their heartbeat.
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Thank you kindly, Maja 🙏🏼🤗
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♥️
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I really enjoy reading your poems, would you like to collaborate on a project together?
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Ok.
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Cool, do you have an email address?
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Khan.yasmin7@gmail.com
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I emailed you, thank you.
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Yeah. On it
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Stunning imagery and truly magical! ❤️
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Thank you sweet Eugenia ❣️
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Lovely lines🧚🏼♀️
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Thank you kindly 💗🤗
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I Love it
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Thank you 😊
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Your welcome 😊, nice to meet you
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Very pleased to meet you too.
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😊😘
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🤗🙏🏼
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I like your writings😊
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Your welcome 😊
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This is beautifully descriptive, Yassy.
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Thank you kindly , Robbie.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Reblogged this on Wordweavergrace007 and commented:
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Dear Yassy, Beautifully Written. Your weave magic with words.
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Thank you so much my dear , you are too kind , too generous 🤗
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Wonderful. Petrichor comes to my senses as I read it.
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Thank you ☺️
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