The dotted page Hush of your dewdrop eyes The stirring in your fingertips Giving shape to my thoughts Luminous Your eyes Wrap 'round Woven hues To lush a page Eyes aglow The ardent need to read A heart to bare Glossed by emotions Eyes streaked Turquoise tasselled Breath sparkling like the Ocean when the moon hits It at night Your eyes A vignette Etching Blazing, sparking The dotted page.
Gorgeous little thing. What inspired you Yassy?
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Thank you , Drew. I really canโt say. Just happened to read about it on the internet and viola ๐
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Love when that happens.
Have a god one. ๐น
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Yup .. thank you , Andrew. You take care. Good to see you tweet ๐ฃ
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Have to get more into the tweet stuff
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Yeah , definitely looking forward to that. Ciao
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Toodles
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Yippee yay ๐
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Beautifully expressed…loved your words…
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Thank you, Piyush ๐
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nice one, I love
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Deft and imaginative use of word.! Beatiful composition โค
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Thank you, Mousumi ๐
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Yassy …. you speak the language of my tribe, is there a word that could capture the feeling I had while reading your poem? No … this was a clean and undiluted feeling … I read it with my own eyes … maybe differently than you intended … but … thanks, you’re amazing.
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Thank you, Lubomir..
you are way too kind ๐
I appreciate your generosity.
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You write three-dimensional poems, Yasmin. A skill not many have ~ George.
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Three dimensional.,, wow , never thought of it that way , George. What a thought !!!
Thank you.
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This is a lovely poem, Yassy.
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Thank you, Roberta.
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sweet!
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Thanks, JayMoraShihadeh !
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Beautiful. You inspire all of us โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you very much, G ๐๐ค
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My pleasure sweetheart ๐น๐ฅฐโค๏ธ
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๐๐ผ๐ค๐
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Lovely ๐๐๐๐
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Thank you, Asthaisha. ๐
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My pleasure ๐ค๐ค
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Holy f’n shamoley, Yassy.
Amazing.
-David
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Toda raba , Davidoff !!
Yasmin ~~
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I donโt need Braille. I need glasses tho. But not for reading ๐ Nor for writing โ๐ป
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You donโt need Braille
You need glasses
Not for reading
Nor for writing โ๏ธ
Nah ???
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Nah
And not for talking
Only for walking ๐ถ๐ป
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You need glasses ๐ค
For walking ๐ถ no
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For walking ๐ถ๐ป yes
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“The stirring in your fingertips
Giving shape to my thoughts” Your words come alive without fail. ๐ค๐ค
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Thank you so much for a wonderful comment, Carter.
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Beautifully penned, Yassy.
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Thank you, Nikki.
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You have been busy writing, I see, with my hazel eyes that are now glossed by emotions evoked by your sparkling words. โจ
Another poem to add to the Yasmin moon-poem folder. ~
“Breath sparkling like the
Ocean when the moon hits
It at night”
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Hey, Hazel eyes โค๏ธ
Thank you, My moon princess. ๐๐ผ๐
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My pleasure, moon Queen, swimming in the sparkling turquoise sea. ๐๐๐
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We can be a pair of mermaids swimming in the turquoise.
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Ooooh, yeah, let’s go! It will be a playful and porpoise-ful day. ๐ฌ
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You truly are my sibling.. what a good sport ๐๐ผโค๏ธ
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Yes, mermaidpoetsis, catch you in the expansive blue bliss. ๐งโโ๏ธ๐งโโ๏ธ
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To my mermaidpoetsis ๐คโค๏ธ
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Beautifully expressed….
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Thank you, Navin ๐๐ผ
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You’re welcome, Yassy โจ
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Hugs, Charles. Hope you are well.
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I survived the ice age, but only because the electricity didn’t go out and the furnace didn’t quit.
Fuck this shit I’m ready for some spring so I can go to the park and shoot hoops.
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Yeah ., I will join you in the park , Charles ๐๐
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A thoughtful and wonderful look at a oft forgotten communication. I love your incorporation of imagery and simile. Beautifully written, my friend!
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Yes, Brad. Thank you for your comment. Thank you for the appreciation.
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You are from somewhere else my dear… Beautifully written, very lovely words stitched together in poetic perfection โค๏ธ๐น๐
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We poets are of the same ilk..you , I and the blogging community of poetry .. stitched together in poetic perfection, I do so love your poetic thoughts. ๐
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Beautiful dear yassy โค๏ธ
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Thank you ๐ค
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This is very relatable in recent times.
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It is indeed. Thank you for your sharing your insight , Garrett.
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Love this. It, so appropriately, feels like what it describes.
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Thank you for your awesome comment, Mitch๐๐ผ๐
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I really love your writing style, Yassy. It’s a pleasure for me to read ๐
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Thank you so much. I am so delighted with your comment .
Thanks again ๐๐ผ๐
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Gorgeous ๐งก
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Thank you, Jude ๐ค๐๐ผ
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A real pleasure
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โThe ardent need to readโ, the world is full of wonder when the mind is opened, glowing is all about discovery! โA heart to bare, Glossed by emotionsโ. To unlock new words with the fingertips is a beautiful thing, that is poetry in motion and you described it so vividly that it takes my breath away. You are simply amazing Yassy, I absolutely love this piece!โค๏ธ๐น
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Blindly happy with your comment , Roy. Your comment is pure poetics poetry with a dash of a lot of heart.
Thank you, thank you ๐๐ผ๐คโค๏ธ
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Always welcome Yassy dear, as you can see I clearly love what you do.๐๐พโค๏ธ๐
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Very tactile, nice!
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Thank you, John !
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Well… dotted page it is
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Oh Yas such perfection in your poetry!~โค๏ธ๐๐๐๐
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Thank you very much, Cindy ๐ค๐ค
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Never sure where you words will lead me but it’s always somewhere worth traveling to! I trust you poetry completely to take me there!
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You are kind. Thank you very much ๐๐ผ
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Welcome!
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The ending note did it for me:
Your eyes
A vignette
Etching
Blazing, sparking
The dotted page.
It takes us all the way in, without a trace of sin.
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Thank you, Jason ๐๐ผ
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The Internet creates us creative
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Stupendous writing as always!
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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I very much enjoyed this as I sipped my warm coffee in this dungeonessly frigid corner of my room. โจ
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I thank you very much for your kindness as I sip my coffee in the pungency of a tropical climate.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Narrating idea provide me a great impression
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Thank you
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Welcome
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Wow. I am glad I followed you to your blog. Thank you for stopping by on mine. Love your poem – looking forward to reading more.
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Thank you very much. And you are welcome ๐
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I sincerely love this. The words, the power in it, everything is really good.
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Thank you so much ๐
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Well… Simply great work
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Passion rules reason.
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Yessss thanks.
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