Somewhere on a page There is a poem... Language needs a page to hold A poet frames the page With his words. Pain pressed into words Becomes a poem That's when language Comes undone In its rawness Organic, abstract, artsy even My dusky breath embraces Thoughts of you... Inside my dream.. The night makes a verse once more And all I know is that The pain makes me Not the happiness..like A shrapnel scraping my soul Like a machete wound In an oil painting My warrior nerves flame As poetry inscribes My electrified soul That is mine to keep A breath of gold Brings me home In the red rush Of unfinished dreams Stars' heal The fevered nerves Of my hushed frame . The Oriole sings in my solstice. .
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Bravo! Excellent write.
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Thank you π
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Welcome!
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Bravo! True words….
You are AWESOME, Yassy… and…
and the love that embraces us in its gentle arms
becomes a poem TOO
and breath of love,
brings HER home π
Nice day!:)
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Thank you , Lubomir .
And your comment on Ars Poetica becomes a poem, a poesy..dulce , melodioso, azucarado ..
Safe day πππΌ
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Not bad
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Thanks sooo much , Poetpas!
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Welcome π
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Very expressive and it is interesting to read ‘pain makes and not happiness’.
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Yes, itβs your perception all through way.
Thank you for reading.
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pain makes me *
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I appreciate, Lakshmi. Thank you for your time.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thanks, Ned.
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That’s like a passionate speech no one before had ever thought of delivering. Brilliant as always, Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, George ~~Yasmin
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This is definitely one of my favorites of yours, Yassy – I love poetry about poetry π
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Yes, David ., thank you for a very poetic comment., poetry about poetry .., how nice is that π
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Yasmin
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“Language needs a page to hold
A poet frames the page
With his words.”
Just beautiful!!
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Thank you , LNaut π€ππΌ
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lovely Yassy! β€οΈ
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Another lovely creation Yassy! Your phrasing is always so stunning. I find myself reading lines and thinking, “I wish I had written that”. Bravo, my friend!
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That is so kind, Brad. You are the sweetest person, makes my effort worth the while. Thank you π
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I could read this forever, Yas. Incredibly stunning use of words and fantastically scenic. π€
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A comment becomes a poem. Thatβs what you just said. Thank you for your wonderful eloquence
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Just absolutely gorgeous exquisite use of words! Such piercingly meaningful. Pain indeed brings out so much beauty from within…
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Thank you for your absolutely gorgeous comment of a poem on my poem. Thank you, Beautiful ππΌπ
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I enjoyed the poem but this part definitely got me differently :
In the red rush
Of unfinished dreams
Stars’ heal
The fevered nerves
Of my hushed frame
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I look up
At the sky
To where the stars lie
I blow my tears to dry
They comfort and heal
For the wisp of my frame, a feel good feel
Thank you dear blogger friend. Your comment is beautiful.
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No No, Thank You!
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Yasmin, I am lingering here for a while, to return later, to take in these words once more. Each stanza leaves me in awe, only to be drawn further in to a place that feels familiar, yet I know I have never been. Each stanza is also a stand alone story that becomes poetic perfection when woven together. π
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I love it when my exotic soul sister visits. I am truly in awe of your golden perceptions. You draw into the soulscape of poetic integrity with your wisdom. I feel truly blessed and honoured and more than delighted when you grace my page with your elegant eloquent finesse.. π
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Oh, my lovely lady, I do share in the delight and blessings that our mutual visits bring. My mind and heart are enriched by your poems and your loving spirit. β πΌ π
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π€π€ sending you warm hugs ..big smiles and a happy heart .. my poetic sibling π
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This is really lush β lots of poetry goodness.
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Hey, Syd
Thank you .. goodness gracious me .. I love your comment.
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Stunning yassy β€οΈ So much beauty in poetry about poetry!
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Thank you for your wonderful appreciation of my poetry post π
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Gorgeous and tender like the poetess.
Hope you are well. πΉ
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Thank you.
Missed you !
Now I go check on you eh
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Beautiful poetry Yassyπ
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Thank you, Jude ππ€
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Such a pleasure π
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Merci! You allowed the Oriole to sing ever so wonderfully.
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Oh! Thank you, Jason. Your comment is as sweet as the Oriole song.
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Wow ππ»π€©β¨π«
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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Amazing piece! Bravo!
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Thank you, Eugenia π€ππΌ
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You’re welcome! π
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No words to describe:)
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Thank you π
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Outstanding! This is super nice: “In the red rush / Of unfinished dreams”. Think you put all the words in the right place.
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Thank you, Ben ππΌπ
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Welcome π
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Your ability to elevate poetic language as both consoling and engaging captured my attention. Simply great!
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Thank you, Henry.
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This poem is like a calming whisper in the night. I love it. Itβs the kind of poem you want to hear when you are walking home alone ππ½
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Thank you so much., itβs the best thing that anyone has ever said here. I keep reading your comment and a sense of peace pervades.
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Youβre most welcome, you deserved every word I said ππΉ
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Lovely post π.
I also noted someone said “not bad”
I think he does comedy
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Oh , he is witty he is Poetpas clever wit.
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My pleasure π
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Let me look for him, in that case ππ
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Here you go..
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Thank you
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My pleasure dear poetess.
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Very nicely penned. Each words strong and beautiful! πππ
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Thank you, Sussh ππΌπ€
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If I only could love thy who’m turn against me, then I know love for sure.. JT
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Hello there
Its Gunjan Rathor this side.
Author of βThe First Stepsβ book and co-author of two more books. Presently in 12th standard PCB student. From Raipur, CG India
Right now we are preparing for an anthology and came to Know that you are a good writer. It will be great to see you joining usΒ
If you want I can send you more detailsΒ
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No, thank you.
I am already working on my own book of poetry.
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Ok
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Exceptionally well written! Can’t remember the last time I read one as deep and as beautiful as yours. Kudos!!
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Thank you so much.. what a beautiful wonderful thing to say. Thank you ππΌ
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My pleasure π
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Love this poem of, for, and by a poem, poem born of a poem coupling within another poem, and giving birth to yet another..poem! Not a single superfluous word! Celestial music masquerading as a poem. Brava!
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Thank you so very much, dear Rachel. Your appreciation made me cry and smile at the same time. Bless you. ππΌπ€
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Hey yassy, Nice piece! Solstice, are you pagen too??π
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Nope.
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The poem stopped me. I liked it very much. Would you let me reblog?
greetings
agnecha
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Thank you ππΌ
I am honoured.
Delighted too.
Of course, you can reblog.
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I just found your blog. Your poems, haiku, are simple, concise and deep at the same time. I do not know English well. Google translate helps;) Hope it does it well. I’ll add the rest π
Kind regards
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I am so happy. Thank you my dear. Happy blogging. Welcome to my family here. Very pleased to connect.
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Simply amazed by your work!
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Wow! π
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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Thank you, John. β₯οΈ
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MAY THE BEST WIN.
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