My angst roams in
The nothingness of
Shadows long gone
Melancholia becomes
A souvenir
In my quill
In the sky's silence
I hear the whisper
Of falling blossoms
Butterflies loiter
On quivering leaves
Luminescing
Tangerine
Honeydew scents
My blood rushes red
Pushing effervescent
Into pages framed
A keyboard becomes
A lifelong friend
My fingers could
Never get fatigued
From writing
Tears become words
I won't know if you have heard
I breathe into a
constellation born
In the blue of my quill.
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The symbolism and visuals in this poem is mesmerizing.
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Thank you ππΌ..
I am grateful to you for reading and commenting.
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Ah, Yassy, what a marvelous poem.
“Tears become words
I won’t know if you have heard”
Oh, sweetheart…
xoxoxo…
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Thank you, G π
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Very nice!
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Thanks, Brandon.
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Melancholia becomes
A souvenir …….this verse is…amazing…beatiful…sad……but true….Great,Yassy
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Thank you, Lubomir .
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So poignant and powerful, Yas. You never cease to amaze me. ππ»ππ»
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Be still my heart with the poetic stories you tell with your enchanting quill. π
Even when the light shines, shadows can still creep and sneak behind or over us. I have learned to turn and shake hands with mine. My hand is brave, only because it first holds a pen β writing in, over, and through, what would otherwise overpower me.
You capture the healing power of writing, so beautifully, my soul sharing sister. π
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Thank you my beautiful wonderful friend . Your words enchant and comfort.
I love your perceptive soul. There is nothing that your kindness cannot attain. The power of your wonderful soul spills forth in the thoughts that magnify my page. ππΌππ€
Thank you for giving me the comfort of telling my story my way and listening me out.
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Enchanting and comforting words you have so kindly and generously shared with me. I am grateful for our poetic shares and for your beautiful words that expand my perceptive soul. π You are welcome friend.
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My exotic soul sister from across the heavenly cosmos , sleep well π΄, dream lots. I send you an angel to watch over you while you sleep.
Always always grateful to you for being here.
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Good morning! Or should I say, good afternoon! Thank you for sending a sleeping guardian angel to watch over me, or should I say a guardian angel to watch over me while I was sleeping. π She was not sleeping on the job, because I slept very well. Thank you kind, caring, and creative soul sister. π Enjoy your evening.
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A very very good morning to you , Lee. And while you slept I saw to it that this very special angel that I had sent to watch over my sister while she slumbered , did her job well.
Good to know you slept well. You look all fresh and ready for another beautiful Sunday.
Itβs half past ten in the night where I am .. I am watching Cobra Kai on Netflix ., kicking ass there , karate moves huh π€
So long , Lee. Take good care.
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She was a special one who did a fine job. π₯° Sheβs hired!
Haha Enjoy Cobra Kai and kick some ass!!
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Yay π§‘β£οΈππ½π₯°
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I can actually feel this poem, wow. Great workπ
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Thank you , Charkie.
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Amazing! Yassy I love this poem
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Thank you , Benjamin.
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‘Tears become words’ knocked me sideways. Beautiful poem, beautiful words ~ George
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Thank you so much, George.
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This is so beautifully written, so filled with a melancholy passion that is so moving! A lovely lovely poem dear Yassy! xoxoxo
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Thank you, thank you so much dear Holly.. β£οΈπ€π
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Sending bushels of hugs and hearts! π€π
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Back at ya π€π€π€π€π€
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Ahhh, caught them, put them in a basket!!
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If I may…
Tears become words, Yassy,
You won’t know if we have heard
Unless we share with you
That our cheeks too are stained.
As mine are.
Yours,
David
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Thank you , David
I feel comforted by your words
Let me wipe away your tears
Here, I lend you my shoulder !!
One good turn deserves another.
Yasmin
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βMy fingers could never get fatigued from writing poetryβ, words of a true poet indeed Yassy. The light never burns out from something one loves. βTears become wordsβ, so full of emotion in that line because emotion speaks volume and tears are emotions. The title screams emotion, this was beautiful to read.
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You understand so well,, Roy.. spoken like the true poet that you are.
Thank you my friend of the Sparkling Freeze fame. π€ππΌ
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So welcome Yassy, your words are just a joy to read…they soak into the soul.πΉ
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My heart mind loves lingering in your beautiful poem, for it feels heard and so beautifully reflected β¨
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My dear Yasmin, we definitely hear your beautiful words…. And your tears I feel. This is such a beautiful heartfelt poem, pouring emotional and spiritual depth from each piece of your heart and soul. Your tears cry powerful words and you make pain beautiful. You have touched my heart. Such a deep poem, so healing, so amazing. Your quill spills profound beauty. Thank you for sharing such intense parts of your wonderful soul. Lots of love β€οΈππΉ
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Thank you, Amirah. You hear because your heart is pure, your soul is beautiful and your mind , the epitome of all that is noble and kind. I feel lucky that I am able to share my deepest thoughts with people who can empathize. That indeed is an awesome thing. Canβt thank you enough.
Stay safe, healthy and happy. πππΌπ€
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My dear, thank you ever so much for your heartfelt words. I am so forever grateful. You are very much appreciated. Thanks for the love and comfort. Lots of love β€οΈ
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You are always so welcome, Amirah. Good to connect with you ππ€ππΌ
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I have just heard
Your tears becoming words
My feelings got stirred
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When I felt bereft
I heard your words comfort
Thank you for listening
My spirit is happily beaming
Happy Sunday.
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2021 has begun well for me – just published my first book – 4 Pillars of Abundant Life
I wish and pray that 2021 is great for you too. Do check out the book π
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Good luck with your book. Will definitely check it out.
I hope to publish too.
You got a good thing going .
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All the best to you too Yassy.
Thank you so much π
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Thank you, Ashok.
You are welcome ππΌ
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Pleasure Yassy
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We see you, we hear you, and through your beautiful words, we feel your heart. Your words, like stars in the sky, coalesce into a heavenly vision. And there we look up, struck in awe, by the beauty you have painted in the sky. Well done, my friend!
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Thank you for the comfort of your words. Fills my soul with heartfelt happiness.
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Beautiful ending. And love, love this stanza:
“Butterflies loiter
On quivering leaves
Luminescing
Tangerine
Honeydew scents”
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Yesss I love that stanza too.
Thank you, Benji π
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You’re welcome. Glad to have been able to read it.
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Fantastic! My favorite verses,
I breathe into a
constellation born
In the blue of my quill.
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Thank you , LifeooNaut.
I so appreciate ππΌπ€
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An excellent piece
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You are most welcome
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These words are very beautiful, Yassy. I can feel the emotion.
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Thank you, Robbie π€
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This is so beautifulβ€β€β€
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Thank you, Shreya.
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Beautiful…
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This was so deeply beautiful.
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Thank you π
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Of course. Thank you for sharing. π
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much.. I so appreciate you reading and commenting π€
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You’re welcome!
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You’re most welcome, Yassy.π
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Wow !
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Thank you π
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Thank you for writing this.
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Thank you ππΌ.. thank you for reading.
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Such powerful and emotive expression. I really felt this. π€π€
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Thank you my good friend.
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If only I hand the magic to erase the fatigue when my fingers reach for the keys…
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I wish too. But we all try , donβt we???
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Thank you π
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Great Poemβ€
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Thank you ππΌ
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Wow
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Thank you π
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Wow, 3rd and last stanza especially. Beautiful πΈ
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Thank you ππΌπ
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What a poem what a poet what a post perfect timing keep it this way
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Thank you so much βΊοΈ
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so im all good Thankyou soo much β€οΈβ€οΈ
Oh wow!! So beautiful and stunning β€οΈ
So wonderful, congratulations. ππ
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Hey guys I’m new…be kind and welcome me…
P.s I do great…and I mean great poetry…. Maybe we can collaboration? Hit me up…
“The beauty, alas, our hearts are by love affected”
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Well…I thought we were friends but you choose a keyboard over me damn am I that bad?great poem
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We are friends π»
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Lovely piece, dear.
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Beautiful, lyrical, tender, and poignant.
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Thank you very much π€
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Love it… making me wanting to do a hakui
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Thank you… you should π
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Good to know Yassy that your fingers will never become fatigued
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Thank you, Chris. Missed you.
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Angst spilled in words so well done.
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Thank you π€
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Youβre welcome, π€
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Yassy… I can read your writings over again and feel feelings well up from within. I appreciate you sharing so very much. Thank you
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Beautifully written π
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Thank you ππΌ
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COSMIC THOUGHT IN WORDS!
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