You carry silver stars in your hair I love the feel of your hair on my fingers bare I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes You leave me breathless, my soul soars to the skies. Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow Where I bask in the warmth of your inherent glow. Your smile, the charisma of a promise untold Sparking the air like sparkling gold. Your voice soft in its gentleness Falling like whisper upon my skin Leaving my senses on a roller coaster spin. Your quill spins a spell A spelling from the soul The embrace of imagination In the creation of poetry. # Lyric
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Thank you for the reblog , Ned 🙏🏼
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So so beautiful Yassy “ Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth ”, absolutely divine!
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Thank you, Holly .. your comment is absolutely divine🤗
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As is your work, lovely poignant verse.
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🙏🏼❤️🤗
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🙏🏼❤️🤗
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This is simply so magnificently written, Yassy….it reminds me of a beautiful being
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Oh yesss thank you, Navin.
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Thank you actually ✨
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Welcome 🙂
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An absolute gem, Yas. 🤍🤍
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Thanks, Carter.
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Art and love. How beautiful is this.
“Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.”
xoxoxo
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Thank you, Gabriela ❤️💕
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My pleasure 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Beautiful Yassy
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Thank you, Kate.
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Beautiful poetry Yassy. Well written!
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Thank you.
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Lovely.
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Thanks so much , Latham.
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Every line a single story, together they make a book. You’re on fire, Yasmin ~ George
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Nothing to it actually , just words out together to make a rhyme.. just happened
Thank you , George —-Yasmin
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Such beauty and silky flow in your poem and then I found this line incredibly beautiful – Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
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Your quill spills a thoughtful comment , Pragalbha.. there is a profound beauty in the detail of your thoughts.
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Absolutely beautiful words 💞
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Thank you very much. Gratitude 🙏🏼
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Beautiful yassy, each line spreads deep purity and beauty…. Perfectly expressed 😊❤️🌹
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Thank you, Amirah ❤️🤗🙏🏼
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So welcome, thank you for sharing ❤️
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❤️🤗
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Your quill spins a spell.
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😊🙏🏼
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I am basking in the warmth of your beautiful sensual poem. 🔆💖
“A spelling from the soul” ~ Divine!
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Ah! 🤗💖 , Lee, thank you sweetheart 🙏🏼💖
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Thank you! 🥰
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You are sooooo welcome 💕
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Wow
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Dear I can write like this
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👍
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Awesome and so so good! I just love this one! ❤
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Thank you so much, Carol 🤗🤗❤️❤️
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So beautiful!
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Thank you ☺️
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You are welcome! 😊
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🤗
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The silky flow of words are mesmerising. Amazing comparisons. Loved every bit of the poem.
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Thank you, Sumi. A beautiful comment that transcends the barriers of boundaries ❤️🤗
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Deep! Deep! Deep!
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Thank you ☺️
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Beyond beautiful, of course ❤
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Just happened. Am surprised too lol 😂 it’s something like a brain wave that comes unexpectedly, but I am happy I wrote this. Feel better . How have you been?
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“A brain wave that comes unexpectedly”–I LOVE IT!!
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Thank you ❤️💖
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Most welcome, Dear💖
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I love this Yasmin! A lyrical concoction full of alliteration and nuanced metaphor. The form is seamless in the flow and pace. I found myself reading quickly in a rush to get to the next succulent line. Well done, my friend!
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I love the way you appreciate my work , Brad. You are somebody who enjoys poetry to the fullest. In fact you one of that few who feel the words , it’s like a heartfelt thing . Thank you thank you ., am happy happy 😊
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My great pleasure, my friend! 💖🌹
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🙏🏼🌺
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“Your quill spins a spell” and surely so does yours. This is a lovely and romantic piece of writing!
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Thank you, Scrunch .
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Oh my GOSH… this is lovely.
-David
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Ahhh!!! Thanks ❤️
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“Your smile, the charisma like a promise untold. Sparkling the air like sparkling gold.” I love the poem and I love that verse Yassy, the rhyming sequence in the verses drew me in and the words itself painted the perfect picture of togetherness.
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You write love poems beautifully, Roy.
Always the poignancy in your writings fills me up with wonder.
Thank you for your awesomeness always ❤️😊💕
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Your incredibly delightful odes are out of this world Yassy! You are simply amazing, and your words leap off the page only to paint the brain in poetic colors.🖊🌹😊
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Thank you soooooooo much , Jo. 🤗🙏🏼❤️
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Soooooo welcome🌹🌹
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Beautiful poem 🌹
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Thank you ☺️
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Stunning! There are so many beautiful lines in this.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Another Khan masterpiece..
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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This is phenomenal, glad I had the pleasure of reading it.
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Thank you, Charkie.
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so lovely.
Thanks for the kind follow… I am now following you as well! ❤️
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Thank you , Cindy.
Delighted 🙏🏼💖
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Oh Good.. i thought we already were! me too
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Oh wow! I love this. The feel of the words in my mouth (I love to read aloud to absorb), the rhythm, the pictures it’s painting – a whole experience! Thanks for liking one of my poems, as it brought me here to your beautiful work.
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Thank you and you are so welcome 🙏🏼
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Hi Yassy, this is awesome!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Flows through my heart thank you
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Hi, thank you for liking my post.
You are a very good poet.
I can compose music and sing but I can’t play piano 😦
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Thank you and welcome, Mohammed..
Great 👍.. that’s a talent I cannot boast about.
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sublime! 💕
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Thank you 🤗
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Yep… way better than mine B-)
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Oh ! my !!! Thank you kind one.
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hahaha!
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Gentle is the whisper when the spelling brings love to an awakening that embraces the poetry of two who imagine.
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🙏🏼👍
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ink i think
if i blink
ill miss you again~
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Don’t then 🤔
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indeed. living in this world.
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Do check out my blog too!
I’m really enjoying all your poems! ❤️
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So lovely: “I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes” And the ending. Cool to read this another time. Like it even more.
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😊🙏🏼
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i think i meant the straw stirrin the drink from ya think tank yassy sassy and fine poet and ya know it
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Saucy John.
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Beautiful piece, yassy. Thank you for stopping by and reading on my blog. :~)
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Thank you, Elaine.
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Hi!
Thank you for the like on my blog. Your poem is beautiful 🙂
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Hey
Thanks 😊
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Wonderful Words
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Thank you
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What a beautiful poem!!
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Thank you ☺️
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Reblogged this on Commentary, Outrages, Prose and Poetry and commented:
So glad I am back – and biblioteca allows me three hours daily now so I may dose on you and a few. This’un particularly captivating, m’dear Lady Yas!
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