You carry silver stars in your hair
I love the feel of your hair on my fingers bare
I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes
You leave me breathless, my soul soars to the skies.
Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth of your inherent glow.
Your smile, the charisma of a promise untold
Sparking the air like sparkling gold.
Your voice soft in its gentleness
Falling like whisper upon my skin
Leaving my senses on a roller coaster spin.
Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.
# Lyric
Like this:
Like Loading...
Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you for the reblog , Ned ๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 2 people
So so beautiful Yassy โ Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth โ, absolutely divine!
LikeLiked by 5 people
Thank you, Holly .. your comment is absolutely divine๐ค
LikeLiked by 2 people
As is your work, lovely poignant verse.
LikeLiked by 2 people
๐๐ผโค๏ธ๐ค
LikeLiked by 2 people
๐๐ผโค๏ธ๐ค
LikeLiked by 2 people
This is simply so magnificently written, Yassy….it reminds me of a beautiful being
LikeLiked by 4 people
Oh yesss thank you, Navin.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you actually โจ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Welcome ๐
LikeLiked by 2 people
An absolute gem, Yas. ๐ค๐ค
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thanks, Carter.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Art and love. How beautiful is this.
“Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.”
xoxoxo
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you, Gabriela โค๏ธ๐
LikeLiked by 3 people
My pleasure ๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น
LikeLiked by 3 people
๐ท๐บ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful Yassy
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you, Kate.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful poetry Yassy. Well written!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks so much , Latham.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Every line a single story, together they make a book. You’re on fire, Yasmin ~ George
LikeLiked by 3 people
Nothing to it actually , just words out together to make a rhyme.. just happened
Thank you , George โ-Yasmin
LikeLiked by 2 people
Such beauty and silky flow in your poem and then I found this line incredibly beautiful – Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
LikeLiked by 3 people
Your quill spills a thoughtful comment , Pragalbha.. there is a profound beauty in the detail of your thoughts.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Absolutely beautiful words ๐
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you very much. Gratitude ๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful yassy, each line spreads deep purity and beauty…. Perfectly expressed ๐โค๏ธ๐น
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you, Amirah โค๏ธ๐ค๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 1 person
So welcome, thank you for sharing โค๏ธ
LikeLiked by 2 people
โค๏ธ๐ค
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your quill spins a spell.
LikeLiked by 2 people
๐๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am basking in the warmth of your beautiful sensual poem. ๐๐
“A spelling from the soul” ~ Divine!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Ah! ๐ค๐ , Lee, thank you sweetheart ๐๐ผ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! ๐ฅฐ
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are sooooo welcome ๐
LikeLiked by 2 people
Wow
LikeLiked by 3 people
๐๐ผ
LikeLike
Dear I can write like this
LikeLiked by 2 people
๐
LikeLike
Awesome and so so good! I just love this one! โค
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, Carol ๐ค๐คโค๏ธโค๏ธ
LikeLike
So beautiful!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you โบ๏ธ
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome! ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐ค
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐ค
LikeLiked by 1 person
The silky flow of words are mesmerising. Amazing comparisons. Loved every bit of the poem.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you, Sumi. A beautiful comment that transcends the barriers of boundaries โค๏ธ๐ค
LikeLiked by 1 person
Deep! Deep! Deep!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you โบ๏ธ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beyond beautiful, of course โค
LikeLiked by 3 people
Just happened. Am surprised too lol ๐ itโs something like a brain wave that comes unexpectedly, but I am happy I wrote this. Feel better . How have you been?
LikeLike
“A brain wave that comes unexpectedly”–I LOVE IT!!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you โค๏ธ๐
LikeLike
Most welcome, Dear๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this Yasmin! A lyrical concoction full of alliteration and nuanced metaphor. The form is seamless in the flow and pace. I found myself reading quickly in a rush to get to the next succulent line. Well done, my friend!
LikeLiked by 3 people
I love the way you appreciate my work , Brad. You are somebody who enjoys poetry to the fullest. In fact you one of that few who feel the words , itโs like a heartfelt thing . Thank you thank you ., am happy happy ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
My great pleasure, my friend! ๐๐น
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐๐ผ๐บ
LikeLiked by 1 person
“Your quill spins a spell” and surely so does yours. This is a lovely and romantic piece of writing!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you, Scrunch .
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh my GOSH… this is lovely.
-David
LikeLiked by 3 people
Ahhh!!! Thanks โค๏ธ
LikeLiked by 1 person
โYour smile, the charisma like a promise untold. Sparkling the air like sparkling gold.โ I love the poem and I love that verse Yassy, the rhyming sequence in the verses drew me in and the words itself painted the perfect picture of togetherness.
LikeLiked by 3 people
You write love poems beautifully, Roy.
Always the poignancy in your writings fills me up with wonder.
Thank you for your awesomeness always โค๏ธ๐๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your incredibly delightful odes are out of this world Yassy! You are simply amazing, and your words leap off the page only to paint the brain in poetic colors.๐๐น๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you soooooooo much , Jo. ๐ค๐๐ผโค๏ธ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Soooooo welcome๐น๐น
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐๐บ
LikeLiked by 1 person
HEY GUYS,
I’M A WRITER AND NEW TO WORD PRESS. I PROMOTE HUMANITY AND MENTAL HEALTH THROUGH MY WRITINGS. I REALLY NEED YOUR SUPPORT TO ACCOMPLISH MY GOAL OF SPREADING LOVE AND HUMANITY. KINDLY SUPPORT ME BY FOLLOWING MY WEBSITE. I WILL BE GRATEFUL FOR YOUR SUPPORT. DO NOT FORGET TO LIKE, COMMENT AND SHARE MY WORK.
MY WEBSITE – http://wwweknoorr.wordpress.com/
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful poem ๐น
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you โบ๏ธ
LikeLike
Stunning! There are so many beautiful lines in this.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you ๐๐ผ
LikeLike
Thank you ๐๐ผ
LikeLike
Another Khan masterpiece..
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is phenomenal, glad I had the pleasure of reading it.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Charkie.
LikeLiked by 1 person
so lovely.
Thanks for the kind follow… I am now following you as well! โค๏ธ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you , Cindy.
Delighted ๐๐ผ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh Good.. i thought we already were! me too
โค๏ธ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh wow! I love this. The feel of the words in my mouth (I love to read aloud to absorb), the rhythm, the pictures it’s painting – a whole experience! Thanks for liking one of my poems, as it brought me here to your beautiful work.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you and you are so welcome ๐๐ผ
LikeLike
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi Yassy, this is awesome!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ๐๐ผ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Flows through my heart thank you
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much โบ๏ธ
LikeLike
Hi, thank you for liking my post.
You are a very good poet.
I can compose music and sing but I can’t play piano ๐ฆ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you and welcome, Mohammed..
Great ๐.. thatโs a talent I cannot boast about.
LikeLiked by 1 person
sublime! ๐
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ๐ค
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yep… way better than mine B-)
LikeLiked by 2 people
Oh ! my !!! Thank you kind one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
hahaha!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Gentle is the whisper when the spelling brings love to an awakening that embraces the poetry of two who imagine.
LikeLiked by 2 people
๐๐ผ๐
LikeLike
ink i think
if i blink
ill miss you again~
LikeLiked by 2 people
Donโt then ๐ค
LikeLike
indeed. living in this world.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Do check out my blog too!
I’m really enjoying all your poems! โค๏ธ
LikeLiked by 2 people
So lovely: “I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes” And the ending. Cool to read this another time. Like it even more.
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐๐๐ผ
LikeLike
i think i meant the straw stirrin the drink from ya think tank yassy sassy and fine poet and ya know it
LikeLiked by 1 person
Saucy John.
LikeLike
Beautiful piece, yassy. Thank you for stopping by and reading on my blog. :~)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Elaine.
LikeLike