You carry silver stars in your hair
I love the feel of your hair on my fingers bare
I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes
You leave me breathless, my soul soars to the skies.
Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth of your inherent glow.
Your smile, the charisma of a promise untold
Sparking the air like sparkling gold.
Your voice soft in its gentleness
Falling like whisper upon my skin
Leaving my senses on a roller coaster spin.
Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.
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Thank you for the reblog , Ned ππΌ
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So so beautiful Yassy β Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth β, absolutely divine!
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Thank you, Holly .. your comment is absolutely divineπ€
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As is your work, lovely poignant verse.
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This is simply so magnificently written, Yassy….it reminds me of a beautiful being
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Oh yesss thank you, Navin.
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Thank you actually β¨
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Welcome π
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An absolute gem, Yas. π€π€
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Thanks, Carter.
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Art and love. How beautiful is this.
“Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.”
xoxoxo
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Thank you, Gabriela β€οΈπ
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My pleasure πΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
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Beautiful Yassy
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Thank you, Kate.
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Beautiful poetry Yassy. Well written!
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Thank you.
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Lovely.
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Thanks so much , Latham.
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Every line a single story, together they make a book. You’re on fire, Yasmin ~ George
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Nothing to it actually , just words out together to make a rhyme.. just happened
Thank you , George β-Yasmin
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Such beauty and silky flow in your poem and then I found this line incredibly beautiful – Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
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Your quill spills a thoughtful comment , Pragalbha.. there is a profound beauty in the detail of your thoughts.
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Absolutely beautiful words π
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Thank you very much. Gratitude ππΌ
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Beautiful yassy, each line spreads deep purity and beauty…. Perfectly expressed πβ€οΈπΉ
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Thank you, Amirah β€οΈπ€ππΌ
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So welcome, thank you for sharing β€οΈ
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Your quill spins a spell.
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I am basking in the warmth of your beautiful sensual poem. ππ
“A spelling from the soul” ~ Divine!
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Ah! π€π , Lee, thank you sweetheart ππΌπ
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Thank you! π₯°
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You are sooooo welcome π
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Wow
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Dear I can write like this
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Awesome and so so good! I just love this one! β€
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Thank you so much, Carol π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈ
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So beautiful!
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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You are welcome! π
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The silky flow of words are mesmerising. Amazing comparisons. Loved every bit of the poem.
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Thank you, Sumi. A beautiful comment that transcends the barriers of boundaries β€οΈπ€
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Deep! Deep! Deep!
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Beyond beautiful, of course β€
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Just happened. Am surprised too lol π itβs something like a brain wave that comes unexpectedly, but I am happy I wrote this. Feel better . How have you been?
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“A brain wave that comes unexpectedly”–I LOVE IT!!
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Most welcome, Dearπ
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I love this Yasmin! A lyrical concoction full of alliteration and nuanced metaphor. The form is seamless in the flow and pace. I found myself reading quickly in a rush to get to the next succulent line. Well done, my friend!
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I love the way you appreciate my work , Brad. You are somebody who enjoys poetry to the fullest. In fact you one of that few who feel the words , itβs like a heartfelt thing . Thank you thank you ., am happy happy π
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My great pleasure, my friend! ππΉ
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“Your quill spins a spell” and surely so does yours. This is a lovely and romantic piece of writing!
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Thank you, Scrunch .
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You’re welcome π
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Oh my GOSH… this is lovely.
-David
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Ahhh!!! Thanks β€οΈ
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βYour smile, the charisma like a promise untold. Sparkling the air like sparkling gold.β I love the poem and I love that verse Yassy, the rhyming sequence in the verses drew me in and the words itself painted the perfect picture of togetherness.
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You write love poems beautifully, Roy.
Always the poignancy in your writings fills me up with wonder.
Thank you for your awesomeness always β€οΈππ
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Your incredibly delightful odes are out of this world Yassy! You are simply amazing, and your words leap off the page only to paint the brain in poetic colors.ππΉπ
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Thank you soooooooo much , Jo. π€ππΌβ€οΈ
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Soooooo welcomeπΉπΉ
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Beautiful poem πΉ
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Stunning! There are so many beautiful lines in this.
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Another Khan masterpiece..
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