You

You carry silver stars in your hair 
I love the feel of your hair on my fingers bare

I see the whole universe in the depth of your eyes 
You leave me breathless, my soul soars to the skies.

Your skin radiant like sunlight on meadow
Where I bask in the warmth of your inherent glow.

Your smile, the charisma of a promise untold
Sparking the air like sparkling gold.

Your voice soft in its gentleness
Falling like whisper upon my skin
Leaving my senses on a roller coaster spin.

Your quill spins a spell
A spelling from the soul
The embrace of imagination
In the creation of poetry.


# Lyric

84 thoughts on “You

    1. Just happened. Am surprised too lol πŸ˜‚ it’s something like a brain wave that comes unexpectedly, but I am happy I wrote this. Feel better . How have you been?

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  1. I love this Yasmin! A lyrical concoction full of alliteration and nuanced metaphor. The form is seamless in the flow and pace. I found myself reading quickly in a rush to get to the next succulent line. Well done, my friend!

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    1. I love the way you appreciate my work , Brad. You are somebody who enjoys poetry to the fullest. In fact you one of that few who feel the words , it’s like a heartfelt thing . Thank you thank you ., am happy happy 😊

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  2. β€œYour smile, the charisma like a promise untold. Sparkling the air like sparkling gold.” I love the poem and I love that verse Yassy, the rhyming sequence in the verses drew me in and the words itself painted the perfect picture of togetherness.

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      1. Your incredibly delightful odes are out of this world Yassy! You are simply amazing, and your words leap off the page only to paint the brain in poetic colors.πŸ–ŠπŸŒΉπŸ˜Š

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