Hued
Sky
Parades
A flutter
Of carousing birds
Warbling syncopated chorals
While waltzing the foliage through sunlight's radiance
The wind comes alive as butterflies, bees orchestrate aromas of petalled blossoms.
Nestling under the aquamarine, marigolds gleefully bob their golden heads teasing, ruffling the air to a symphony of fragrance.
My universe begins with the Milky Way, my head in cloud nine, between me and the December sky, only the scented zephyr with it's bouquet of blooms, where I inhale the day, watch the birds conducting their musical ensemble.
A Fibonacci poem .
# Fibonacci
Oh wow….beautiful imagery
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Thank you, Navin.
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You’re welcome, Y!
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Very impressive Fibonacci, my dear. It sounds like you were having a good day, a bit more up? Sending you LOTS of LOVE, Avia💖
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Trying very hard to get back … I think I may have succeeded a little , if I can write, I feel better. Thank you for your constant support ❤️🙏🏼
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You always have my heart, Yassy. Just remember that grief has its ups and down swings…a lot like love; so some days you’ll feel stronger/better than others–it’s Normal ❤
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Thank you for that, Avia , you make me strong .. grief is there .. it’s a terrible helplessness , only somebody who goes through a loss like this can understand, I wouldn’t wish it on anyone. Thank you for you , thank you for WordPress family and thank you for the poetry. And thank you , You ❤️
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Grief is indeed a very difficult emotion–many-faceted. You are ever welcome, dear heart ❤
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Happy Sunday to you , Avia. Take care of yourself dear one 🤗❤️
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Bless your heart, and thank you!–you make my days/nights so lovely ❤ I'm driving myself a bit crazy…but things will smooth out, they have no choice, haha!!
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Crazy is cool. Eventually you find a way and things get done nicely . It’s good to be busy , me thinks.
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Yes, most of the time I agree, busy is helpful 🙂
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I agree too.
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We could be busy just talking 🙂 ❤
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Oh yes!!!
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Haha, I knew you’d like that!
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Yup 👍🤗🙋♀️
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😊
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I think the birds will send you a Christmas card, maybe a present as well, once they read this poem, Yasmin. Brilliant ~ George
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I hear them singing the Christmas carol, George. Do you do that ?
Thanks, cheered me up , Lord Zoolon , thanks again.
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I think I can hear them singing for you, Yasmin. It’s the Christmas carol called, ‘Hark! The Herald Birdies Sing; glory to Lady Yasmin’ ~ George
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My favorite snippet:
I’m a bit confused though, Yassy… I thought Fibonacci Poetry was:
(https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/fibonacci-poetry-a-new-poetic-form)
1 syllable for first line
1 syllable for second line
2 syllables for third
3 syllables for fourth
5 syllables for fifth
8 syllables for sixth
I’m super new to all these forms so I’m just looking for some clarification for my somewhat befuddled mind 🙂
Yours,
David
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Yeah , I counted all the syllables but i did till 55
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The Fibonacci sequence is a series of numbers where a number is the addition of the last two numbers, starting with 0, and 1. The Fibonacci Sequence: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34, 55…
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Wow yassy ❤️… This is beautiful. Sweet, happy, peaceful words with perfect imagery. Wonderful 😊❤️🌹
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Thank you for a wowsar comment , Amirah .. good to write different stuff most times. Makes the creativity more interesting.
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Very cool, love this on Sunday morn! Have to try it some time. Thanks?
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Thank you, Phil .. happy Sunday morn to you my friend..
I hope you try this ..
Welcome ???? 😂
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Sorry typo should be Thanks!
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What a beautiful picture you have created, Yassy.
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Thank you, Roberta .. your comment cheered me up no end.
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I am glad you gave this unique form a try. I love your composition! Your creativity and talent with the written word is amazing. Have a happy holiday season, Yasmin!
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I have to thank you for this, Brad. I think your post on the Fibonacci form inspired me.
You have a happy and safe festive time, Brad.
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Thank you my firend!
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You are very welcome, Brad.
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Oh yassie I love this! Very nice! ❤
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Thank you sweet Carol ❤️🤗🙏🏼
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Splendid Yassy ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, G. ❤️🤗🙏🏼
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My pleasure sweetheart 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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❤️🤗
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🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
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Wow! Great! It’s difficult, but you have done well.
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Oh, thank you very much.
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Well written Yassy. Beautiful words!
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Thank you, Poetpas.
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Welcome 🙏
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Very beautiful indeed 💖💖
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Thank you 🙏🏼🤗
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You’re very welcome indeed
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Beautiful as always…makes me feel as though I were sitting on a park bench relaxing with all my senses. 💙🦋💐
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Thank you so much for such a delightful comment. Grateful 🙏🏼
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You’re most welcome, yassy. 🙂
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Really beautiful.
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Thank you 😊
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🙂
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You truly are at one with nature. It flows through you. If one is not able to venture outside, they need only read your poems and they are transported to a beautiful natural scene.
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Hey, Lee , thank you so much. Thank you for a wonderfully insightful comment..
I have missed reading you. Caught up with a lot of stuff.
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Hello to you too. 👋🏼 You are most welcome and thank you. You are appreciated and missed, but I certainly understand and hope that you are doing well. 💗 Peace, relaxation, and joy to you this holiday season.
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Thank you , Lee ❤️ a very happy festival season to you . Stay safe.
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You too. 🤗 😘
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Your poem is really appealing to my senses. Thank you for the poetic imagery.
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Thank you, Taru ❤️ Tara , starlight girl.
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I so love your poetry. Gorgeous imagery ❤️
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Thank you, Jude. You are too kind 😊🙏🏼
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It’s my pleasure
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please check my blog on human30artist.wordpress.com
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I will.
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👌🏾👌🏾 thats a great effort
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Thank you, Binnzy
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You’re very welcome
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🤗
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These words are so splendid, Yas. Brilliant form as well.
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Thank you, Carter. I so appreciate 🙏🏼
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I thoroughly enjoyed the progression of this poem – so silky beautiful uplifting feeling.
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Thank you, Pragalbha 🤗❤️
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Thank you
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It’s really mesmerizing… Thanks for sharing
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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My pleasure
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Beautiful poem! 💚
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Thank you sweet Cassa💕
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Amazing imagery as always – love ‘symphony of fragrance’ – different notes of fragrance creating a lovely symphony – well explained! Peace and blessings! 🙂
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Thank you 🤗🙏🏼💖
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🤗
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
“…INHALE THE DAY…” 😀
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