Echoes of childhood~
Death takes away
All the bitterness
c'est comme ça
On the terraced garden
I saw you climb
The staircase to
The stars..
Gone too soon.
Echoes of childhood~
Death takes away
All the bitterness
c'est comme ça
On the terraced garden
I saw you climb
The staircase to
The stars..
Gone too soon.
yaskhan 
This poem stole my heart. You are the morning star ⭐️❤️🌹
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You are very kind, Gabby. Thank you 😊
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My pleasure sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌹
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🙏🏼🤗
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🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🌺🌸🌼🌻🥀
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🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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OMG. This REALLY touched my heart today yassy. Sorry if I don’t get in as often as I should, but my explanation is on my blog. But this piem is just exquisitely
Poignant ❤️
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Thanks, Lorraine. It’s okay sweetie, me not around much too. Sorry buddy 🤦🏻♀️
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It’s okay. I was worried because you once asked if I had stopped following you. But my reasons are on my blog. I can’t follow anyone mych any mire, but your poetry is still as beautuful as ever. ❤️
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It’s all good , Lorraine. No worries.
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Thankyou
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Welcome
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Precious precision language. I love it.
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Thank you, Clive. I so appreciate your comment.
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Oui, it is.
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Merci !
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Beautiful Yassy…. Truly touching ❤️❤️
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Thank you 🤗
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I have really been missing your gorgeous poetry as of late, Yassy. Love this piece, painful though it reads.
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Hey, thank you , Ben. Take good care.
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you too, Yassy. be well! 💚
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Such a fervent piece of writing. Heartfelt 💚
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Thank you, Samreen🤗🙏🏼
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You are most welcome Yassy🤗💚
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🤗🙏🏼
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There’s not a word in the wrong place. Perfect. ‘ALL’ and ‘terraced garden’ make it real life. You’re on a roll, Lady Yasmin ~ George
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Oh thank you , Lord Zoolon.
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Awww…this is so heartfelt..
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Ah!
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This is so deeply beautiful!!
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Thank you, Pragalbha.
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Hmm 😔
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Jay
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Yas
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Hmm
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Right?
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Yup, righty right !!! What? I forgot lol 😂
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Me too 😎
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Such moving poetry, Yassy. You’ve been missed xx
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Missed you too, Holly . Missed reading your wonderful poetry. I will stop by in a bit.
Thank you very much.
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😊🤗
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🤗
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I second this.
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Ben, Ben ..thank you.
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Thank you Ben.
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You both give me the feel good feeling ..
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Yassy, you deserve too feel good! Sending lots of hugs!
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Yeah , thanks Holly , sending you lots of warm hugs 🤗 .
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Baskets back to you. Be sure to catch them 🤗
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Caught them 🤗holding close to my heart .. bless you 🤗❤️
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Blessings to you! ❤️
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This was really lovely~🙈🌸
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🤭🤗🌸
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So dark and so lightning ❤ brilliant 🙏❣🌹
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Thank you my dear Alaedin. Bless your kind heart my friend .
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🤗🌹😘
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The staircase to the stars… Awesome!
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Thank you, Harsh. That’s about going to heaven.
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I got that.
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Yeah
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Movingly evoked…
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome
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The lines touched my heart. There’s a way about your lines which touch the finest feelings.
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The finest feelings come from the most gentlest of hearts.. you have an intuitive instinctive heart that feels and understands pain and joy in equal measure .
Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts, Sumi.
Happy Diwali to you my dear.
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May the lights of Diwali add sparkle to your already illuminated mind. 😊🙏
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Oh! My! What a beautiful message. Thank you ❤️
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💞🌹
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🌺🌸💕
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“I saw you climb
The staircase to
The stars..”
Beautiful in every way possible. Yassy, bravo my friend. Love the poem so much. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie 😊
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You are so welcome, Yassy.
Hope all is well with you. My apologies for not being around much. I officially got (Instagram) account. Big supportive people on that universe. But, I’m still going to post here. 🙂
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Yeah, miss you here , Charlie. I had an insta account too but i didn’t keep up.
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It’s way too much to keep up. Need not worry…I’m still going to be posting here on WordPress. Instagram is a very interesting universe and I got discovered by this one guy who he himself is such a brilliant poet.
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Okay.
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Great writing….almost had tears!!
Thank you for the wonderful writing!
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That is so sweet of you , Bhanu. Thank you my dear.
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These words are truly heartfelt, Yas. 🖤🖤
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Thanks, Carter 😊🙏🏼
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Hugs ❤ so sorry for your loss!
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So beautiful, heartfelt, and touching. ❤ I hope all is well with you.
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Thank the, Lu.. ❤️💕
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Oh, this is so sad, yassy.
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So sad, and so well done! It sings a sad and loving song all too familiar.
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I appreciate.
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Lovely.
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Thank you, Simran.
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This poem is so true! When a loved one dies, it always feels like they have gone too soon…
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Yes.
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Beautiful
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🙏🏼
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Nice blog👍🏻
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Thank you 😊
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Most welcome!
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Tugs at the heartstrings… beautifully written!
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thank you, Leigha🙏🏼🤗
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You are welcome.
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Painful but beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 🤗
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Oh my God. This was so amazing
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Thank you 😊
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You’re very welcome!
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thia is touching.💕
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Staircase to the star 🌟
& you will always be-loved my dear ❤️
Much love n great lines 🙂
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Thank you, Purva.. bless you
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Brilliant!!💜
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Thank you 😊
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There is so much heart in these words!
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Thank you so much, Christy.
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I’m touched and I love it!😍
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Thanks, Flo.. your comment warmed my heart.
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You’re welcome.
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WOW, this is so gorgeous.
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Thank you, Avia.
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You’re most welcome, dear heart…I’m going to try to work on a poem for you ❤
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You are kind , too kind.
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No, not too kind–I just love you from faraway ❤
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🙏🏼
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