You slam-dunk me 'Cus I got this mother mucking around waiting for rhymes to grind She gave me no vision It was like being blind As I played hooky in college Provost made it bondage Less than average, more a bore So lame, I couldn't score My fingers fidget My quill raps Gives me crap A slap Of Ink To pat On Paper mat. I became hell's child Even tho they raised me nice I can get easily riled Let me show ya how I grin, smile I go by the meter When lines are drawn The bottom line Is when I lose my mind If you think poetry is stuffy Then you ain't seen a tough cookie.
Now that’s dope!
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Lol 😂 yup
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It seriously is😂
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I am tripping 🤭
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Let me catch you! On a serious note, a perfect example of impulsive poetry.
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I think that’s what poetry is all about. Just spill it dude 🤓
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Could not agree less. Some impulse, some emotion and leave the rest to serendipity. Wow! I actually love that word.
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I totally absolutely agree.. love your instinctive thoughts on here. Oh ! That word serendipity is awesome cool.
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Likewise my friend. Feels wonderful to have this conversation.
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Wherever you are .. it’s good to know your there.
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Ditto🙏
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🙏🏼🤗
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😅🤗
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Oh ! my ! 🤭🤣
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Love the style and the beat.
Xx
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Thank you.
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I love this!
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Yay !!!
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Yas with the bars! Love it. 🔥🔥🔥
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Thanks, Carter .🙈
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It speaks the beat therefore it works. That’s clever, Yasmin
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Still finding my way around this rap thingy , George. Thanks for the heads up~~Yasmin~~
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❤
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uh-uh! UH!
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w/e 🙊
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🤘
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Love this. It has an awesome flow and the rhythm is perfect. Excellent rap skills!
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Oh ! Thanks. Happy 😃 me .. thanks , Lu 🤗
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I agree. This is wonderful!
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Thank you, Lunie.
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Excellent. And you are a tough cookie!
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Thank you , Nico. Yes, I am.
When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
Be well, you and yours.
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Thanks you too! 🙂
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Very cleverly done indeed ❤❤
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Thank you 😊
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You’re very welcome indeed ❤❤
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I’m en-rap-tured by your rapping skills, Yassy.
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I always thought you were one of the most gifted poet here on WP. I admire your work immensely. Your comment just proved me right.
en-rap-tured.. well, you have me enraptured by that awesome comment. Thank you , Roland.
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So true! I read all of Yassy’s poems rap-aciously!
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Thank you, David.
I love the rap-port I share with you all , it’s made me rap-turous..
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Yassy, you rapscallion, you!
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Lol 😂 hahaha.. tickled me pink .. thanks ..I like that you have a funny bone … 😉
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There’s no end to your talents, my dear!!
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome 🙂
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V good Yas you ain’t got cereal next to me, baby! Take care B
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Thanks, Bruce.
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This was loads of fun, Yassy!!!
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Thank you 😊, Biscotti🤗💕
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💖💖
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💕
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Somebody drop a beat! I love your willingness to experiment!
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Thanks , Brad. Thanks for the support. I suppose that’s why I muster up the courage to experiment.
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🤗🤪Whatever you’re on send me a bucket please 🤗🤗🤗🤪🤪🤪🤪
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Wow I didn’t know you can rap!
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I get the rap if I can’t rap.. so yo I try
I get by
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by and by as words gently cry
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Wipe the tears, let them dry
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don’t be sad cuz tomorrow we die
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Don’t kill me so soon Lassie guy
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hahaha. I said WE
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What will happen to your perfumes?
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They’ll be buried with me.
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A scented grave. What about me? I have my struggling poetry struggling to be shouted out. No flowers no scent.
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ughhhhhh
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Lol 😂 grrrrrrr uggggghhhhh
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ya I don’t think I have any to spare😅😅😅
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Then I will just have to save my L’Occitan.
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Sure! That will smell nice! 😅😅😅😅
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Long live Jay Bleu ..
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And Sassy Yassy
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Saucy Jay will live to tell.
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hahaha Saucy Jay… that’s a new one!
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New and happening.
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We’re always moving forward
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To the future .. to perfume , poetry and flowers and stars.
Be safe , Jay. Adios. See you in your next perfumed poem.
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See you next time Yassy. Looking forward to your next poem B-)
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It’s lit🔥👌🏾
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A great rap love it! ❤
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Thank you, Anne🤗
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Vibe🤟
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Yo 🤛
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Ohh just seen this…. Really cool, love it ❤️
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Thank you 🤗
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This is fun!
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Thanks.
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Welcome!
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Ayyyy !! Nic
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Oye !!
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It’s awesome!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Raised me a hell child my behavior was never mild. Tried to understand the ways I cracked your smile.
Life can cause even a child to be hostile… So riled up it feels like my life was deprived…
Will a new life ever arrive?
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