In the Loneliest tears The soul burns The invaded innocence Fear created Forgiveness hardly Darkness breathes Untold traumas Vulnerability cannot comprehend Rhetoric bent, bruised Self-righteous life's Fatal doze swift. Crumpled stars offer Condolenses on inheriting A broken earth Infinitesimal happiness despairs I try to listen to my thoughts Standing in the cacophony. Death before death.
Love it Yas…. Beautifully written ❤️❤️
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Thanks, S. hugs 🤗
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Wow. Putting aside how wonderful this particular poem is, it’s even more impressive that you can transition from one range of emotions to another so readily (from poem to poem to poem to poem).
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It’s easy to articulate through the medium of poetry , Ben. And appreciative readers like you , wow who wouldn’t want to write. That is my inspiration. Well, I have to thank you. Gratitude 🙏🏼 gratitude..
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Beautiful!!!
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Thank you, Sara !
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Honesty, concerns and reflections all in one place. Epic ~ George
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It’s for every man or woman who feels this way and can’t say or won’t .
Thank you , George. Have a safe weekend~~Yasmin.
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You too, Lady Yasmin ~ George
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❤
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Oye
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WOW…WOW…WOW… I can’t even choose a fave line this time, it’s all too good.
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You are very kind , A. Thank you.
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Oh you know me, always sincere of heart ❤
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Indeed you are and more 🤗
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“Honest, authentic, etc, etc–and silly as the hours grow late” 🙂 🙂
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As read as anyone can get , silly is good sleep 😴 sleep 💤
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This is very sad, Yassy.
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It is ,no
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Wow, Yassy. Incredible. This flows through everything. Just moves in. Crazy powerful….and…..sigh. Thank You. Sending so much Love and hugest hugs!!! ❤️❤️❤️!
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Thank you , Kate .. sending you much much much love and warm hugs warm smiles , thank you so much for the loveliest of comments. 🤗🙏🏼
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My absolute pleasure, Beautiful!!! 💖
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Yassy, sweetheart, you touch my heart every time you write. Such a beautiful poem.
Love
G.
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Thank you, Gabby
Love
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🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
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Another beautiful one, Yassy!
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Merci monsieur 🙏🏼
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daccord
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Très bien
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Your poem enhances the thunderstorm that’s rolling thru my hometown right now; and vice versa.
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Thank you, Tom.
People don’t and won’t change, Tom. They bring in the drowning in the storm.
I only want to enjoy the rain. Your hometown sounds very vulnerable.
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So deeply beautiful. I loved the last line- just took few silent moments there. Went back to see what I loved most, and enjoyed it all over again.
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Thank you, Pragalbha. That is a super nice compliment. Quite warmed my heart.
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Eloquently written!
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Thank you, Heidi.
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Your very welcome yassy!
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Wow! So powerful! Stunning words! I can relate! ❤
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I am glad you like this. ❤️thank you 🤗🤗
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This is so poignantly expressed.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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You’re very welcome indeed
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Such strength and lucid. Beautifully expressed.
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Thank you girl 🤗🙏🏼
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Love the poignancy. 🤍🤍
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😊🙏🏼
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