Somewhere
Between
The silence
And the pause
I try to find the words
I write a love letter to Cupid
My
Syllables
All
Wrong.
Somewhere
Between
The silence
And the pause
I try to find the words
I write a love letter to Cupid
My
Syllables
All
Wrong.
love letter to cupid huh? Interesting๐๐
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He canโt read, heโs blind lol ๐
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WOW. So visceral and heartfelt as always. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thanks, Lu. ๐ค
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genius.
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Thank you, D.
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I call ’em like I see ’em.
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Yesss๐๐ผ
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โค
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lovely.
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This is SO clever. And the way in which younhave areanged yoyr words is just rught, bravo. Xx
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Thanks , Lorraine .. thatโs how why my brain is going doing going on click pause mode ๐๐คญ
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Oh gosh! Mine gets like that too ๐
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Yikes ๐ณ
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Itโll all be alright on the night lol
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I feel like an owl ๐ฆ only my head doesnโt turn that way around
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Oh dear. Something needs doing about that then lol.
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lol anything for a laugh ๐คญ itโs a batshit crazy owl heheheheh
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Hehehehe. Does it hoot?
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Nope, they ping .
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Cupid’s not blind… and Cupid will love your love letter. Write it!! โค
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I may write in Roman or Greek , JanBeekโค๏ธ
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Great idea!! โค
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Splendid!
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Thank you, D. โค๏ธ
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Loved the structure and use of space to heighten the impact of your words. Beautifully crafted and mastery of the art! Well done, my dear friend!
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I Second your nice comments brad.
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Thank you so much,Brad.
I very very much appreciate your awesome take on my verse.
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My pleasure Yasmin!
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The silence and the pause….. Is my favourite part too. So short and sweet, but very deep. Amazing โค๏ธ
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The silence and the pause..
I became silent.
Aren’t they the same? But wait, they aren’t.
It is a wonderful feel between the words..
Rightly said silentpoetry and well written yassy.๐๐๐
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Thank you, Sang.
Your comment is poignantly eloquent. Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Ah!! The words are on my breath โค๏ธ almost.. thanks , S๐ค
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LOVE this!
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Thank you ๐
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Most welcome, my pleasure ๐
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The spacing and line breaks are so well done here.
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Thank you.
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Wonderfully crafted, Yas. Love it. ๐ค
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Thanks, Carter.
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Dear Yasmin..Greetings, Cupid is blind but a love letter written in silence makes sense. And he understands that language of silence.๐
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Greetings, sending you the dayโs salutations , Kamala..yes..the speech of silence is eloquent โค๏ธ
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Honoured.. thank u..
with lots of love๐๐น
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You are welcome dear Kamala โค๏ธ๐ค๐บ
Love and safety to you.
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Very beautifully penned โคโค
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๐ค
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I love your work is so unique !
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Thank you ๐ค
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Cupid will gloss over “The silence
And the pause” and read between the lines.
With him it’s the overall thought that counts.
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The thought of the matter lies in the arrow.
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You do know best re all that’s in the air, here.
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Yeah yeah
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A pleasure to read!
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๐๐ผ๐
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Amazing ๐
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I am certain your love letter will be awesome! โค
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Ooh la la ๐
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Let me know if he answers
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Lol ๐ of course but I ainโt writing to no one , if I do you be the first to know , Sophie. Thanks girl.
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That will be my next blog ๐๐๐๐
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very nice
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Thank you
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rigt
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unique โจ
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Thanks ๐
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In Cupid’s fountain A poet’s fountain pen leaks Pisser syllables
Love god’s reply to Yassy’s letter. ;^)
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Pisser stinks ๐ท
The quiver of arrows leaked blood
So I bleed
Blue
Red
Fountain
Cupid
Turns
Poet
He
May
Write
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It is difficult to put the words together, whether in poem or prose, telling someone you love them. Good poem!
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Thank you, Priscilla.
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Thank you ๐
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Wow!๐
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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What’s in the eyes is sometimes more important than what comes out through the lips.
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Yes, absolutely! Spot on. Thank you, Jorge.
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I like this…….it’s different
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Yeah , I try to write different, I like challenges of poetry forms.
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Different is refreshing…. there’s too much same old same old……
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Yessss indeed
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