In aurora gold Luscious buds enfold Sage strewn Springtime aisles unfold Tranquil skies extoll Lutes tune Spills verdant threshold Kindled pastures roll Glades croon. # Lai
In aurora gold Luscious buds enfold Sage strewn Springtime aisles unfold Tranquil skies extoll Lutes tune Spills verdant threshold Kindled pastures roll Glades croon. # Lai
yaskhan 
I love your crooning glades yassy 😊
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The sound of wind in the trees 🌲
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This paints a beautiful image 🍃✨💞
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🙏🏼🌺🌲🦋
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The rolling motion throughout the verse was intriguing. Great repeated use of “oll” sounds in different words to create a feeling of turning around.
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The Lai is a French verse form having two rhyme schemes.
It’s an interesting challenge to write ..
Thank you for your thoughts on this.
A safe and happy weekend to you.
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Brilliantly done. 🏆 I can imagine how fun it was. 💐👏🏽🧚🏽
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Yes, poetry is always fun.
Thank you.
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Wow.. that is gorgeous ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks, G. 🙏🏼❤️🤗
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Always sweetheart.
xoxo
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😊🌺
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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🤗🤗🤗
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A poetic delight for all the senses! 🥰
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Thanks, Michele. 🙏🏼🤗
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Lovely prose Yassy!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure!
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right
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Thank you
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Hi yassy. Your way with words is always impressive. Does your serene setting exist anywhere outside the realm of imagination? If so, I’ll be packing my bags.
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Hi Tom. Thank you. Unfortunately, right now all I have to hold on to is my imagination..
do you happen to have a magic carpet ?
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I sure do! Alas, it only exists within my imagination.
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I may just rope in The Witcher who also doubles as a super man. Henry Cavill may fly us sans carpet .. I seriously need an Alaedin ‘s lamp.
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Have you tried shopping eBay, yet? But do make sure Alaedin‘s lamp is new, not used.
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Nope, I play around in the Amazon shopping jungle but I decided to ditch the lamp. I have my midnight oil lamp and my quill so that may help me in my odyssey lol 😂
A Donny less utopia
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Words, especially yours, do have unlimited power; can lead you to wherever you choose to go.
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Thank you..i needed to hear that 🙏🏼😊
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Delightful 🤗 loved the form which ofcourse is new to me…
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Thank you, Roshni. Maybe you will do better than what I have done.
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😊😊 I’m not so sure about being better but I hope to try it at some point. Thank you !!!
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Best to you 👍
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome!
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so beautiful. I love this poem! Well done hun! xo
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Thank you 🤗
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Very beautiful images ❤❤
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Thank you 😊
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You are most welcome
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A fine example of rhyming poetry. Love the variety of words you chose to rhyme, without making it sound sing song. No wonder you have nearly 10,000 followers! That’s amazing, great job.
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Thank you, Rob. Thank you for the support.
Good to see you back.
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Beautifully written Yassy, has the lovely sounds of Fall in it….my mind just got engulfed in a blitz of colors as I read this!🌹
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Thanks, Roy 🙏🏼🌺
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Always welcome Yassy dear 🌹
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Yes deah
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🙏🏾
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Tranquil skies. 🤍🖤
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😊🙏🏼
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Sweet
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Thank you
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Peace and love
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Thanks 👍
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WOW, just WOW!!
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Pure loveliness!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Welcome!!
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Could imagine the scene.💯
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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