Wrapped
Slender
Hourglass' curves
Captive embrace
Pulsing a cadence of endless measure
Unhurried cascade of gleaming granules.
Many a moon
The pour of
Moments
Flow
Stretch
Drifting
Infinite,
Odyssey's span
Against a backdrop of life's lattice work.
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yaskhan 
Lovely form. 🤍🖤
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Thanks, Carter.
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mmm… just perfect
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🤔 thanks.
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Splendid!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Takes me there. Thank you.
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Thank you.
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Some lovely words there yassy
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Thank you, Lorraine.
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Your poem makes me want to buy an hour glass. Lovely. 🥰 “Unhurried cascade of gleaming granules” – what a beautiful line. Unhurried until those last few seconds, that always go too fast.
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Yes, time is a fleeting moment.. seems unhurried but you say it beautifully, Michele…until those last few seconds that always go too fast. How very insightful and profound.
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Wow, such wonderful imagery I could imagine the scene in my mind 😊
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Thank you, Hannah. Poetry has to do that .. give your imagination a jumpstart.
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You’re most welcome 😊 and absolutely!!
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🙏🏼🤗
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Delightful! So so good! ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Carol 🤗❤️🙏🏼
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True to form and beautifully written. Well done, Yassy!
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Thank you 🙏🏼, Brad.
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My pleasure, Yasmin!
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❤
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😇
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Very beautiful
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Thank you, Nico.
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😊🌏🏞
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The undeniable passage of time , loved this 😊
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Yup .. thanks , Andy.
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Mighty fine.
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Thank you, Rob.
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You never fail to WOW me with your exquisite poetry, my dear.
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Thank you , my wisest, fairest of heart friend..
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You’re welcome ❤
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🙏🏼🤗
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🤗
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🤗🤗
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Beautiful writing
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Thanks, Jude.
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🧡🌷
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💐
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Thoughtful, pensive …..and refreshing. I felt as if I just had a glass of cold water on a sultry day.
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Thank you.. that sounds refreshing.. it’s sultry and humid here and I am just about my wits end
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Have some cold water or sparkling wine in a slender hourglass 🙂
A spray bottle with cold water for ur face and nape will keep u cool.
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I have Eau Thermale Avène spring water , it’s soothing ..thanks
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Another exquisite piece dear Yasmine~🙈💝
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Thank you 🤗, Ouimama 🤗
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My pleasure dear~ 🌸💝
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Oiumama 🙏🏼
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💝💖🌸
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🤗🤗
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Very beautiful
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome
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Bravo!!!
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🙏🏼
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Sensual and meditative at the same time, every word is perfectly aligned and in it’s place. How do you manage this level of awesome every day?
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Thank you, Scrunch ..I love the perception of your thoughts in this your intelligent and thoughtful comment. When I embrace my restless solitude I feel these compositions rising in my soul.
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No worries, you’re too kind. You deserve recognition. 🙂
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Loved your exquisitely curved hourglass poetry on time capsule. The last few lines are marvellous. 💎
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Thank you, Sumi. Have a safe weekend..
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I don’t disturb the congestion of relations but looking for a heart that he contains me
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😊🙏🏼
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There are people whom don’t deserve any feelings, and even hate not deserve.
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Yes, we are surrounded by such people.
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I had never heard of the form… I do love nocturnal imagery. a bit like a dream
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Yup , thanks 🙏🏼
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A splendid poem packed with exquisite imagery.
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An exquisite comment from you my friend.
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You are welcome, Yassy. Hope all is well.
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Yes!!
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Loved it 😊🙏
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Thank you 😊
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What a beautiful web sit. I definitely will be a follower. Great work. Take care. Bob
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Thank you.. I am honoured and happy.
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Yassy, I enjoyed your poem. Have you ever thought about writing a poem or poems about this horrendous Global Pandemic?.
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I wrote a lot of poems about the pandemic , please read.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Karima 😊
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