yassy in Poetry August 28, 2020 8 Words August Haiku Unfolding an atlas ~~ The Milky Way Between us.. ShareTwitterLike Loading...
Ah !!! Autumn π colors sooooo beautiful.. the gold, the russet , the browns π₯π LikeLiked by 1 person
So beautiful and Iβd love to see the but we have several more months of summer heat. π LikeLiked by 1 person
Have a wonderful day Yassy. πββοΈπ§ββοΈπ£ββοΈπ§ββοΈπ΄πΈπ»πΌ LikeLiked by 1 person
These three lines themselves hold a galaxy to your soul, and from the charm of the poem, I can say it’s very beautiful. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
The spontaneity of it is captivating. In my opinion, it captures the chasmic separation between the living and dearly departed. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Yeah and I also think that you and I and many of us here connect through this myriad medium we call space. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
First, I almost laughed at the two lines so playful Then the poignant third. Clever and beautiful, as usual. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
And the stars as the guide. Beautifully written Yassy, youβre incredible.πΉ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
The stars guide with their light and the moon smiles bright and Wilde spells poetry to delight the senses. Thank you. Wassup with you and Sparkly? LikeLike Reply
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #6: Yassy Yaskhan’s latest haiku! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Absolutely enchanting and beautiful, dearest Yassy. Another amazing poem with such visceral qualities and evocative imagery. Well done. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
So many different interpretations for these few (profound) lines. I love that! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
The stars they count And still no emotion Because you told me not to π A friend to a friend (4) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Beautiful.
xoxoxo…
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Thank you, G. π€
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Oh wow….magnificent β¨
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Thank you, N.
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You’re welcome, Yassy.
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Space is a vast place π
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Yup and weβre space surfing ..πͺπ«π
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Nice, Yassy. I haven’t heard about an atlas in a very long time.
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Yup ., we should rediscover ourselves and our vocabulary time and again
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Beautiful Yassy! Three lines they say so much β€οΈ
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Thank you, Holly. π€
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Ah !!! Autumn π colors sooooo beautiful.. the gold, the russet , the browns π₯π
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So beautiful and Iβd love to see the but we have several more months of summer heat. π
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Enjoy the summer , Sunshine. ππ
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I will do my best. πππβ€οΈ
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Have a wonderful day Yassy.
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These three lines themselves hold a galaxy to your soul, and from the charm of the poem, I can say it’s very beautiful.
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An awesome compliment, Shanyu.. thank you .. am bowing ππ½
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Dreamy. π€©π€
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Space 2.0 dreams., itβs nice to see more of you here, Carter.
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Loving it immensely. π€π€
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I am glad, Carter.
You take care. Ciao.
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The spontaneity of it is captivating. In my opinion, it captures the chasmic separation between the living and dearly departed.
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Yeah and I also think that you and I and many of us here connect through this myriad medium we call space.
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Beautiful β€οΈ
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So beautifully expressed in so few words π
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Thank you, Hannah π€
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Itβs a pleasure, Yassy β¨
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Not normally a haiku person, but the image is in my face, and I like it.
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Thank you very much π
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A metaphor for so much more. Classic stuff, Lady Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, Lord Zoolon ~ Yasmin
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Oh WOW, succinct loveliness, Bravo!!
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Thank you, Avia π€
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You’re always most welcome β€
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First, I almost laughed
at the two lines so playful
Then the poignant third.
Clever and beautiful, as usual.
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Thanks , Von. That πis a great verse ..
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Not quite a “uni – verse”;)
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Mini verse
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;);) exactly
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And the stars as the guide. Beautifully written Yassy, youβre incredible.πΉ
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The stars guide with their light and the moon smiles bright and Wilde spells poetry to delight the senses.
Thank you. Wassup with you and Sparkly?
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Beau……tiful β€β€β€
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Muchas gracias π€
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Mon plaisir π
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Wow ., now you leave me speechless
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Yassy Yaskhan’s latest haiku!
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Thank you for the reblog, Frank ππΌ
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Absolutely enchanting and beautiful, dearest Yassy. Another amazing poem with such visceral qualities and evocative imagery. Well done.
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Thank you sweet Lucy πππΌ
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So many different interpretations for these few (profound) lines. I love that!
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You are very perceptive, Michelle.
Thank you π
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What an interesting haiku. How mysterious and awe inspiring.
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Thank you, Crystal.
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Dear Sis Yassy, Beautiful words of wisdom. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks bro ππΌπ
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Hi! This is beautiful! β€
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Thank you π
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This is so beautiful yassy. It warmed my heart. β€οΈ
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Thank you so very much β₯οΈππ€
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You are welcome my friend β€οΈ
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The stars they count
And still no emotion
Because you told me not to π
A friend to a friend (4)
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Great π
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Count the way
In which my sleeve
Has everything hid…
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No way
To hide π«£
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In play sight
I can only wear
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