Come to me in the wild blue yonder Come to me in the azure twilight Come to me when the stars are bright Come to me with passions thunder. Come to me on wings of cupid's dove Come to me under a teal canopy Come to me in a symphonic fantasy Come to me with a potion of love. Come to me in this rendezvous Come to me, my shining knight Come to me with loves's allure. Come to me till dawn flies on wings of colored light Come to me, walk my destiny through Come to me, beguile me, light me up like dynamite. #Italian Sonnet
A beautiful siren song of beckoned call, Yassy! Rhythmic and sensual like an enchanting whispered spell. Well crafted and delightful!
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Thank you , Brad. Took me a fortnight to write lol 😂
Thank you. Hope you are well.
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Ohh hiw beautiful:)
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Oooh thanks , D.
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Just wanted to share my book is finaly out on kindle for now:)
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Thank you, D. Will check it out.
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Take care , you!:)
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You too sweetie 🤗
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Thunder and dynamite! Awesome!
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Potent , no?
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LOL, Atomic, thermonuclear supersonic!
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Wowo , I like those words.. sounds celestial and scientific..
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How romantic
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Oh yeah
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The lull of heartbeats…
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Splendid Yassy. Passion, love, beauty. Sweetheart you made my morning beautiful.
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You made my weekend too, with your awesome appreciation.. thank you sweetheart
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My pleasure. Enjoy your weekend. Your love verses are splendid 🤗💕🌸🌹❤️
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You look after yourself. Missed your poetry. Will do in a bit 😊
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Thank you. Take care of you sweetheart.
xoxo
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Yup 👍
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Beautifully passionate Yassy.
I can feel the yearning.
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Thank you, Holly. That’s the stuff poets are made of 😇
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So true and you express it all so beautifully!
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Thank you once again. Hearing from you always makes me happy.
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Reading your words make me happy and humbled as a poetess, you are awesomely gifted.
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🤗🙏🏼💐💖
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🌹🎨❦🌹🎨
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Nice
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Thanks
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A beautiful and very temptation vers, your style reminds me of a Persian poetess Forough Farrokhzad 😊🥰 at the command I’d want to say 🤗👍💖
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Alaedin, I am going to check out this poetess that you speak of ..well, I am honoured that you thought of me like that. I just try hard 🙏🏼😊
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You tried well my dear friend, this style (feminine Style) is the main poetry style, I think. you are an artist and a creative poetess. this is the link for this fascinating woman https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forough_Farrokhzad
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Thank you very much , Alaedin. I will read her work in detail. And btw, I so enjoy Iranian cinema. Some very fantastic directors in your country.
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I enjoyed the style of this poem, Yassy. Well done.
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Thank you, Robbie. Ah! Don’t I like a challenge !!!
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Beautiful stuff, Yasmin. It sing as it reads ~ George
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Yeah , I thought of it as a song in my head, although I am no musician ..
Thanks , George ~Yasmin
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. 👏👏
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❤
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🙏🏼
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Awww Yassy…this melts my heart
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I know . You are quite the queen of romantic poetry , yourself.
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😍😍😍 you know me well..
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Poets are kindred spirits so we understand each other perfectly.
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I agree..😍😍😍
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Indeed. Take care, Mich. safe weekend and safe rest of the week.
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You too..Yassy.
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Love, passion, sensual, beautiful…..”Come to me, beguile me, light me up like dynamite” ❤️🔥
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Thank you, Navin.
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You’re very welcome, Yassy.
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Thank you, Ned, for the reblog.
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Your beautiful poem makes my heart ache, in a good way. 😊
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Thank you, Michele. I guess that’s what happiness is. If you know pain, you automatically know joy.
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I really like this. There is a real balance of command and longing. Decree and desire.
A wonderful read.
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Thank you very much.
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Strong ending!
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Thank you , B4😊
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Light me up like dynamite. Lovely poem. Such a beautiful sense of romance in the poem and the rhyme? Ah, uniquely beguiling.
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Thank you , Shanyu. What a beautiful comment!!! You are wise beyond your ears and that is so enchanting.
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It is my pleasure friend. Thank you for the kindness.
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You’re very welcome 😊
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Swoon swoon swoon and a true pleasure to read… wonderful Yassy 😍❤️🙏🥰
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Teeeeheeee thanks 💃🏽🙏🏼💖, Lia Lia bless you 🌺🤗
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😄😁😚🌷🌷🌺🤓🤩
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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This is such skillfully crafted format and a beautifully voiced poem
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Thank you 🙏🏼.. gratitude
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You’re welcome
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Wow, Yassy! You never fail to our-do yourself. This poem speaks volumes of passion and it bought a smile to my face 😊✨
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Thank you, Hannah Montana .. your comment always makes me smile.
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Hahah it’s always a pleasure, Yassy! I know I’m doing something right then, if it makes you smile 😊😊
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Take care, my dear sweet friend.. am still smiling. 😊🙏🏼
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Aww you too lovely. Sending love and light your way 🌸🌺
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Love light peace hugs to wherever you are stay safe and happy 😊
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💖💖💖
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👍❤️
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Stunning, but I would argue that with poems like this you won’t need a potion of love 😉
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A potion of love to enhance romance..
Thanks , Ben. I like your insight. Have yourself a wonderful weekend. Safely 😊
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So beautiful Yassy!!🌹🌹
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Thanks. Will check on you later.
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🌹🌹🙏🏾
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😊💐🌻
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Utterly brilliant! 🖤
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Thank you, Carter. 🙏🏼
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The imagery in this poem is beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you, Cadence. I am happy you enjoyed this.
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Oh it’s nice seeing you on the my feed again~🙈 Have a great week Dear~🥰
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Thank you.. I miss all your posts. My feed is erratic lol more errant ugh
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Oh myyyy~ just take your time 🥰
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👍eeeeeeee
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🥰
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Oumaima love to call you 🤗 sweet soul sister ❤️
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Haha~ so so sweet of you dear~ 🥰🙈💝
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🤗
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WOW-WOW-WOW, Yassy this is 5-Star Wonderful!!
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Thank you Gorgeous 😊🤗
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You’re so welcome, sweetie🍬🍬
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💖👍😇
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“…till dawn flies on wings of colored light…” Lovely.
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Thanks, Syd.
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Dear Sister Yassy, You rekindle the spirit of Romanticism. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you , brother!
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yaskhan – I have written a piece of music inspired by this poem and would like permission to place the poem on my blog (with links back here, of course). Please let me know if this is possible – George.Smyth@gmail.com
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Delighted …
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https://racketinmyhead.wordpress.com/2020/09/11/come-to-me/
Thank you so much for the inspiration!
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Awesome
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