When bombs fall from from wailing skies
And bloodied feet mourn as earth cries
Cerise soil turns its trembling roots
To bury human ashes burned to soots
When bullets pierce the deep of your heart
When life ebbs flowing out your veins depart
Still, men gang around tables and, plot
Them miscreants, the fires of unrest fan
Their guns and rifles treat human life like trifles
Down here there are no dreams to be dreamed of
I just hope that when death comes, it's going to lay me soft.
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oh wow… just lovely it is.
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Thank you π
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Touching YassyπΉ. Your words reaches the soul my dear.
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Thank you, Roy .. hope you and your diamond π doing well.
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Youβre always welcome Yassy, your words are beautiful as is your heart.β€οΈπΉ
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Hugs and smiles and warm wishes sent to you both.
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This is REALLY good yassy. Very moving and oh so sad
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Thank you, Lorraine. π
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Isn’t it a shame, Yasmin. Everyday of every year this stuff is happening somewhere in the world. An important poem, that’s for sure ~ George
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It certainly is, George. Everyday , every minute so many atrocities..is it ever going to change.
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WOW. This is amazing. Awful facts of war… but so well-written and true. Much love to you β€οΈ
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Thank you my good friend π€
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Beautiful Yassy
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ππΌπ, Ashok.
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My pleasure π
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It’s brutal and your words pierce the heart Yasminβ₯οΈ
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Thanks, Radha β€οΈ
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Touched my heart. There’s too much cruelly in this world.
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Thank you, Sumi.
Yess..the world is a cruel place.
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So much hate in the world. Why can we not all love each other? It is such a simple yet powerful emotion. Easy to do. It takes so much energy to hate, be mad, be angry, and it never feels good.
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You are right , Maggi. Itβs all so complicated, no? And yes, love is easy , as you say and it is draining when all these negative emotions take over.
I wish your words could be read by people all over the world β€οΈ
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One would think that people would know this from their own feelings/experience. Even if they only felt one moment of love in their life they would know the peace, joy, happiness it brought. One would also think that we would do everything to feel that all the time. On the other hand the hate is misery, and why would we want to feel one second of that? Yes anger gets the best of me sometimes. Not trying to make out like I am love and light ALL the time. BUT when it starts creeping in I do everything possible to drown it out. For I know it will bring me nothing but pain, sadness, nothing productive, nothing prosperous, and it never ends well for any party involved. Wrapping you in big hugs my dear, dear Sister π
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I totally agree, wholeheartedly in tune with your words.
So beautifully said.. sweet wisdom from a heart so pure.
Thank you my soul sister from across the cosmos β€οΈπ€π€sending you so many hugs π€
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Yassy, this is a masterpiece. The pain and the truth cannot be ignored. The way you verse them here is beyond beautiful. The poem is a classic.
Sending you love. I hope you are well, sweetheart.
xoxoxo
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Only pain shows you the truth , I suppose .. putting it bluntly but your words are a comfort ..
sending you warm smiles warm hugs π€
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Hon, take good care of you. Sending you plenty of love and blessings.
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This is a beautiful piece of writing, bleak but beautiful
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Thanks , Paul π
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You have written a beautiful poem about this tragic topic, Yassy.
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Thank you, Robbie. Great to hear from you.
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Wow, you hold such an incredible talent within you! Keep up the incredible work π«β¨
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Thank you, Hannah π€
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You are most welcome, the pleasure is mine π€π
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Beautifully written Yassy….deep words….wonderful message…it reminds me of the song Zombie…
Hey I need your help,
I’m requesting you to check the below link & please write your comment. Previously I had contacted you to re-follow me after I migrated my site as my followers (including yourself) weren’t receiving the notification when I was publishing the post. Unfortunately, the issue hasn’t been resolved yet & this is my last try.
Please do mention in your comment / feedback that you did not receive any notification (if you haven’t) and I’ve personally contacted you with the link to read my post, such that WP can read & hopefully troubleshoot the issue. Your feedback will help me in taking the decision.
Thank you kindly in advance πβ¨
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No, Navin I donβt get your posts on my reader ..
Thank you for updating me on this problem you are facing. I hope the WordPress team handles this fast. Itβs very irksome if something like this happens.
Donβt you worry, Navin. At some point or the other most of us here have faced these issues.
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Very eloquently versed
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome
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I have missed your poetry. Only a poet with your talent can find and create gentleness from something violent and destructive.
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What a beautiful wonderful thing to say , Michele. Your comment warmed my heart. Thank you , thank you .. gratitude ππΌ
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That is my hope for us both, Yassy. You write so beautifully, piercing the heart’s depths. I don’t want you to be sad…but you may notice my last post indicates I’ll soon be leaving the blog world. I will not stop praying for you, and thinking of you–you are dancing in my heart forever. Much love, Rhen β€
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You have turned off comments on your post so I have to beg you to change your mind.. I respect your thoughts about leaving the blog , whatever the reasons so maybe I too will leave .. I am so tired of everything.
Where can I catch you after you leave here? You canβt just not be in touch anymore .. you could mail me at khan.yasmin7@gmail.com
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I don’t have Twitter, sorry. Much love β€
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No worries π€
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Death comes to anyone young and old. We just can’t know when. With the issues of today, I can smell survival for all of us.
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You are spot on !!
Death can take anyone..
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The last lineβ€β€β€
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Sombre but beautifully written. Loved the rhythm too.
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Thank you, Judei π
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My pleasure Yassy. *Jude or *Itakali
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Itakali π
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Sometimes outside death
Remains as shadows of fear
Inside death is sure
First hard to believe
Symptons begging denial
Until they can’t be
Grabbing bits of life
Chewing them then swallowing
Leaving less each time
Many witnesses
Smile stiffly and hold your hand
They see you going
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Great π Brilliant piece of writing.
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you always inspire me, see?
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You have it in you , Von.
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don’t we all? π
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We do , eh π
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The topic and how you touched it just Wow~π₯°
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Thank you, Yiena .. .so sweet π€
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My pleasure dear~ π₯°
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GETTING READY FOR THE END…POETRY? π
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As ready as ready can be lol π
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Its brutal and futile. Well said!
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Yup ..thanks.
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My pleasure π
I too wrote a poem on war called So much for glory, so much for freedom.
Do check it outβ
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Well done , Akshita.
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Thanks!
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This is really sad and brutal..and you captured it so perfectly well..
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Thank you, Michny..
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interestingly, “lay me soft” feels a bit sensual to me.
well done.
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Thank you.
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I’m counting on “Soft.” Peace, Yassy.
Art
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Aye aye..I am also counting on that.
Thank you π
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This is a very powerful and emotive amazing π
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Thank you ππΌ
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Wow, can I borrow your mind?
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You can keep it π
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You see the world in such an amazing way. In these few lines you’ve convinced us of its futility so influentially, and then as the finale slowly creeps in, you leave us gasping for breaths. That’s how breathtaking and awestriking and dumbfounding this poem was. Wow Y! You’ve left my jaw dropped. I wonder if it’ll ever go back where it used to be.
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Wow! In just a few lines, I see and feel so much. Great piece!
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Thank you, Monroe.
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Very touching!!
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Whoa! You hit this one right out of the ball park! Stunning.
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Thank you, Elouise π€
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Cool π
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A marvelous Portrayal of human suffering. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Loved it!
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You use “it’s” twice in this poem. “It’s” is a contraction of “it is”. Therefore, “it’s going”, but the other instance should be “its roots” for the possessive form.
I did, however, enjoy the poem.
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Thank you very much. I will do the needful. I am grateful to you. ππΌπ
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Another strong ending. Really impressive stuff.
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Thank you π
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Welcome π
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wonderful
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Thank you ππΌ
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So powerful!
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Thank you π
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Nothing to say. Just crying.
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Take care of yourself π€
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Lay soft but belly thin
This death won’t stop
A friend to a friend (vi)
I hope you’re okay…
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All is well.
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