As my fingers trace the line of your cheeks I see the wonder of your precious face Your gorgeous ebony eyes blaze Like stars that call in the night's grace When I look up at the endless sky My breath opens to a fever high Your lips taste like moonlight Nurturing cravings of warm delight I feel the fire in your heartbeat That's the way you make me feel complete My senses have been held hostage Teasing a rapture that cannot be silenced Flowering a yearning exquisitely nuanced The appeal in your voice as your lips speak I sigh at genuine love's intrigue Love is chaotic and bittersweet A magical storm one cannot defeat. # Lyric
“Love is chaotic and bittersweet
A magical storm one cannot defeat.”
WOW! So really splendid❤❤💕💐
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Thank you, Ishita 🙏🏼🤗
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❤💕
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🤗
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❤
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Hey
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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Most welcome 😊
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😊
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I like your rhyme schemes. Nicely done. 🙂
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Thank you, Ramone.
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nice
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Thank you.
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welcome
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😊
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WOW, the ending is especially amazing!
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Thank you, thank you 😊
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You’re welcome-welcome 🙂 ❤
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🤗🤗
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That is so well written, Yasmin. ~ George
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Thank you, George.
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Lovely lines!
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Thank you, Miss Ray 😊
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Felt like a short trip! 💝🙈
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Like Xanadu 🤩💖
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Such passion, and truth. I could feel my heart fluttering 🙂 New love, old love, and blessed if we feel it all in between 🙂
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Dear sweet Maggie, love the sensible, intellectual and compassionate viewpoint that you always bring forth in all the sincerity of your generous heart. It’s metaphysical in its intense meaning. Bless you 🤗❤️. Stay safe.
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The whole verse is quite lovely, but I was struck most by “Your lips taste like moonlight” and “Flowering a yearning exquisitely nuanced”. Well written, Yassy!
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Thank you, Brad. Somehow this was easy to write. It just flowed.
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Miss yassy lassy
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Mister Mango Tango
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I did not know that my day needed a flowing love poem, until I read your poem. 💗
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Thank you, Michele .. what a sweet thing to say. That is so very nice of you.
Thank you 🤗. Be well.
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Wow! Wow! Wow! Yassy, this is incredible. I love it.
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Thank you so very much, Robbie. Your appreciation means a lot to me.
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Ah, this piece is heavenly delight my Queen of Poetry.
“Your lips taste like moonlight
Nurturing cravings of warm delight”
I am under the spell of your words. I’ll stay there the entire day.
xoxoxo
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Thank you my good friend.. my poetess. Good to see you. Be well.
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My pleasure sweetheart. You too.
xoxo
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Beautifully written. Full of passion. A pleasure and breathtaking pleasure to read.
Hope you are well my dear friend. 🌹
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Well, thank you for that very nice compliment about my work , Drew.
I am well, my dear .. I am happy to see you back.
Poetry sure is a special instrument of true friendship 😊
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It truly is. I see you haven’t lost your inspiring touch.
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Muse keeps playing peep a boo but but it’s all good Drew. Read your latest post .. you are one spirited one .. that inspires.
Thank you.
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Well timed words in my life, inspiring me to write a little something for my love
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Oh yes 🤩 write away.
Thank you 😊
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Wonderful Writing… Truly Inspired
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Thank you so very much 🤗
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Very romantic! And I like the flow of your writing ✍🏻
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Thank you , Poet. I can tell you the inspiration was good so the flow 😊
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Awesome 👏
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The inspiration is truly awesome.
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Lovely words for a lovely couple. You and your man must feel blessed
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Thank you, very kind of you.
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