78 thoughts on “Life

  1. This is a beautiful rendition of the form. It evens includes an unpunctuated pause linguistically at the caesura. A part of the form that is often missed in the examples I have read. Well written, Yasmin!

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      1. There’s never too much kindness–and you already know I don’t waste time on flattery–you sparkle with brilliance!

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