Liquid luminescence of a robin-egg sky fills the air with bouquet of efflorescence,
The morning chimes to sounds of a sparrow’s song..
I wake to the tangerine taste of chimera on my pillow
Dreams fade into the morning mist..
My breath pauses on a goodbye...
And all the journeys I should not have taken...
Oh you beautiful poet.
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Ah, Thank you , D. You are awesome 🤗
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♥️♥️
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🤗🤗
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So great. I always wondered how Chimera tasted. . .
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Chimera tastes like delusion 🙂
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Must be, I love tangerine 😉 Don’t forgot I sent you a start to Part 3 if you’re interested 😉
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I kind of like playin hooky .. s
So bear with me
Bleu Bleu
Eau l’eau
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hahaha!. OK just seeing if you got it. Hope you are staying safe, healthy and sound. !!! Ms Hooky
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Sorry for not writing back , Jonathan.
I am safe as safe can be ..
What’s cooking ?
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Pho. How about you?
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Eggplant casserole
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Mmm yummy. Sounds delicious
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The delicious digested lol
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Did you have dessert?
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On a Toblerone binge 😇
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molto bene I didn’t know you were Italiana 🙂
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Toblerone is Swiss .. Danke 😊
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Doh, you got me there!!!!! Goes with my swiss cheese then
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Der Scharfe Maxx 😊
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I never heard of this before. Now I’m intrigued 😉
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Lol
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This is so beautiful Yassy
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Thank you, Kate 🤗💕
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Beautiful as ever, and the last line grabbed my heart. Are we supposed to be able to listen to you say the lines? I don’t know how this works, please forgive my ignorance ❤
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Thank you, Avia ..
I hear you and I am sure you can hear me too..
🤗❤️
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So then, is the little bar beneath the poem not an audio feature? That’s where I’m confused–I thought if I clicked on it, I’d hear you reading the poem… No??
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No, I did not record the poem , even though I had put my mind to it , I keep putting it off ..too lazy 🙃, no..
You have to hear me in your head , Avia ..🤗
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That’s fine, really!! I LOVE hearing you in my head, you little Sweetie!!!💕🍬🍬🍬
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You are a very kind, Avia.
You know, as I read your comment , I can almost hear you. The cosmos carries your voice across to my heart.
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Ohhhhhhh, you’ve blessed me SO MUCH–thank you, darling!! ❤
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So welcome, Avia.. it’s heart warming talking to you my dear.
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I’m soooo glad to hear that!! ❤
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😊🤗
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So beautiful yassy
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Thank you 😊
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This reads like a prologue to an Oscar winning movie Yasmin. Smooth words ~ George
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Thank you, George. You say the nicest things.
Yasmin.
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Deserved ~ George
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Beautiful Yassy! A robin egg sky, I love that. ❤️
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Thank you, Holly 🤗
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So welcome!
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😊
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Thank you, Grant .
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Doing OK tonight? Saw you online. -GT
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Just hanging in there lol 😂
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I enjoy our chats!
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Me too. Good to have you back.
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Tell me what it is , Grant. Not opening here.
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Unable to piece together the context. The price of juggling too many threads is that sometimes one is dropped. But, as some people I know say, “It’s all good.” 🙂
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It could be worse , Grant ..
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Agreed. Things can always be worse. That is one of the sad truths of life. Tearing down tends to be far easier than building up.
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We have to console ourselves 😀
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The world can be a lonely place sometimes.
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It’s always been a lonely place, Grant.
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What have your experiences with that been like?
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Oh! Long story. But we will survive 😊
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These don’t open, Grant. You have to send me the name.
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That’s odd. Opened for me just now. Did you try “right click -> open in a new tab”? (It really is the kind of humor that is not funny if it must be explained. Otherwise, I would clarify… …let me know if you still have problems with it.)
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Okay
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Ok it did
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😉 A bit of magic…. 🙂
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Yeah 😊
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Loved it. I so enjoyed 😊
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You good, no?
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OK, but since my last session had to wipe a hard drive and re-install on one of the machines I use for blogging. Up all night working on that, so very little or no work on the blogs. I can always pick it up later in the day or tomorrow.
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Okay. Hope it’s all good now.
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Just pickin’ up the pieces. You know how it goes. Re-installing the operating system is never enough. All those gadgets and gizmos we use to make our work flow smoothly are missing and they have to be re-installed, also. Always takes a week to a month (sometimes much more) to get the machine “right.”
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Just a matter of time , Grant. It will get done ..
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Yes, your insight is a good one. Given gentle nudges “in the right places,” things have a way of unfolding in their own way.
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Yup 👍.. relax , Grant.
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You too, my dear, you too!
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Yeah. Of course. Stay connected 😊
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Very poignantly written . Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks, Anand.
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This is where your mastery of poetry becomes so obvious. This verse holds such emotion and power within your words. They are woven beautifully to create a place for the reader to reside. And in the world you build, we find ourselves. Well written, dear friend!
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment, Brad. Have a nice weekend!
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Silky and beautiful poetry. Not sure about the “should not have taken” part
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Thank you, Jude. Stay safe.
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You too yassy
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I love anything tangerine :🍊) Tyvm for causing an explosion in my mind!
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Welcome, W 🍊
Tango with the tangy😊👍
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Reading your poem made my heart full of happiness.
Also, this song is dedicated to your beautiful poem.
Avicii – Feeling Good (Lyrics Video
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Thank you, Charlie… beautiful song, meaningful lyrics and a wonderfully shot video.
I so enjoyed. Very thoughtful of you.
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You are welcome Yassy. Glad you enjoyed the song and the lyrics themselves. Perfect for your incredible poetry. 🙂
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Yessss😊
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🙂
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This line speaks to me,
” My breath pauses on a goodbye..”
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Thank you, Ali !
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Beautiful words!!!
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Thank you, Luisa.
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How lovely!
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Amazingly beautiful Yassy
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🤗thank you very much.
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You ended this lovely piece in a beautiful retrospective way. Bravo.
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Thank you , Drew .. how you doin ?
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I am okay now. Thank you for asking.
How are you? Staying safe I hope.
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You welcome, Drew.
I am fine , safe as safe can be.
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Good. Stay that way. And stay inspired too.
Words will wake with whimsy.
🌹
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Great … staying inspired whimsically fired. Ciao
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Ciao
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Take good care .
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You too Beautiful
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The video that shows up is Dr Pimple Popper.
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lol
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Liked above all Dreams fade into the morning mist: it’s a beautiful picture!
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Thank you 😊
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Great job. You can also check out my poems.
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