My muse becomes my poem My poem becomes love- A rainbow hugging the sky.. In the silence in my mind-- The poetry of your voice Stirring the fire within. I walk towards you Holding the shape of my words- My breath opens with your name. The sound of syllables falling In my heart and on my lips; Even the things I cannot say Breathing into love..
Adore. ❤
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❤️❤️
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Like a divine… Muse 💖💖
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Ah! Yes 🤗
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It just gets better and better doesn’t it. What a beautiful expression of love, or the possibility of love. Your words are so pure in this poem…who has not flet like this before? As always a blessing to read Yassy 🙂
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Thank you sweet Maggi. Live is a beautiful wonderful thing. My idea of love is almost utopian. I guess that’s because I think love should be the perfect pristine emotion.
I love your comment 🤗❤️love your thoughts on this sister soul 🤗
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Beautiful. ❤️
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Thank you ❤️
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The anthropomorphic connections here are wonderful. “Holding the shape of my words”, “breath opens”, and “sounds of syllables” are beautiful images. I love this a lot! ❤
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Anthropomorphic wow that’s a new word for me.
Thank you 😊
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Lovely
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Thank you, Jason.
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Awesome writing.
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Thank you, K🤗
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🤗
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I think you own the side of life most people hide from. Beautiful words, Yasmin ~ George
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Yes, and that side of life thrives on imagination 😎
Thank you, George.
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Muses simply amaze just like you Yassy. Inspiration becomes poetry and poetry is love🌹. Beautiful writing.
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How is your muse, btw.. love and hugs to you both.
thank you ☺️
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😊. She’s doing good, she’s been very busy prepping her students for exams and she’s getting a book together. I’ll give her your love🌹🌹
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Beautiful words Madam.. 😊
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Thank you, Sir 😊
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And my Muse is my Love …
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Indeed 🤗👍
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😀
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😊
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Oh your lovely words
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Hey , D. Long time no see , missed you ❤️🤭
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Yeah, i know..but I am back i guess.♥️
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Great 👍🤗❤️❤️
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Pure magic!
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Thank you ❤️
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Love this! Great writing & imagery
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Thank you, Liz ❤️
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Your muse is busy… and oh so creative. Is s/he available on loan?
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You can loan him to me too if and when you find him lol 😝
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you, Nico.
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Blessings. 🙂🍃
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Peace and blessings and happiness 💛
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Amazing, indeed.👌
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Thank you, A.S.
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Lovely ❤
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Thank you ❤️
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You are most welcome
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😊🤗
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Every line is perfection, and this is my fave pick: “My breath opens with your name”.
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Oh 😊❤️ thank you ☺️
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My pleasure always 🙂
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Oy 😊girl atta girl 🤗
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😊
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💛
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👏🏼
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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😊🤗
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So beautiful~ 😻
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Thanks.
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Yassy, this is divine!
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Thank you 😊, V.
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I have probably said that a lot on your blog, but I mean it. You harness such gorgeous thoughts, it’s so beautiful ❤
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❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗
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🌼❤🤗
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This is sooooo preeettttttyyy❤️
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Thank you 😊
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The use of punctuation and grammar works really well in this 🙂
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Lovely!
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Thank you ❤️
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Very nice indeed, I love this.
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Thank you ☺️
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So beautiful Yassy!
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome.
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😊🤗
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My poem becomes love-
A rainbow hugging the sky.. This is gorgeous.
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Thank you so much, Robbie .., hugs
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Beautiful verse.
Art
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Thank you, Loujen😊
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That last stanza is so amazing. Took my writer’s breath away, for sure.
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Thank you dear poet.
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Always welcome.
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😊
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Beautiful tribute to your muse.
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Ah ! If only 😊
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Smiling. What did that mean?
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I think my imagination runs away with me most times 😊
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We are very alike. lol
xo
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Pleased as punch .. gimme a high five 🖐
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High five
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Your a good sport 😊
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xo
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Yesssss!
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Oye!!!
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Lovely. 🖤
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❣️💝
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‘my breath opens with your name’. I die, I die. You write beautifully.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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beautiful poem
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Thanks.
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Explosive writing. Beatific.
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Thank you , Dalton.
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