When I close my eyes, I see your face In the starlit night, only dreams I chase. I feel the tears run down my cheeks Down to where my poetry speaks. I say your name in the silent night Like a poetic rhyme that I hold tight. I walk a tightrope in this hourglass of time This overwhelming feeling is so divine. I succumb to this love and let my soul glow I feel on course and can't say no. To pour out this love is like healing, In poetry and love, I feel the freeing.
Wow, you have found words for me! This is perfect! Beautifully written.
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Thank you , Stine 😊
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Totally connecting to every single word.
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Ah! Thanks 😊
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Divine! I fell in love with your words. 💕
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Oh! Thanks , Brad 😊
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A happy poem in a world that needs ‘happy’.You’ve another song in the making here, Yasmin
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Yes, the world really needs ‘happy’ ..
Thank you,George ~Yasmin ~
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I love how this poem is written. Can you perhaps give me a some advice to someone hoping to write poetry on my blog and in the future (career)? Thanks ~ A.
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Just write from your heart , Amal.
Good luck with your career.
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Thank you
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Welcome
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Wow, look who is Ms Romantic!
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Hahaha 😂 really, Joey !
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Somebody remembers my old name 🙂
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Indeed 🤓
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This is the WOW line: “I walk a tightrope in this hourglass of time”! One of those, “wish I’d written this” ones 🙂
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Thank you, Avia. Always happy to see your beautiful thoughts on my work. I so appreciate, sweetie 😊
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You’re always most welcome 🙂
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🤗❤️
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Your poem reads so well, Yassy. Its smooth flow strengthened by the aptness of both images and rhyme.
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Thank you, Roland. It really means a lot to me when you comment 😊
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Don’t fight it, let your poetry speak! Lovely!
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Absolutely 😊. Thank you!
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Blessings!
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Peace blessings
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you got me, I’m hooked on this, saving it. beautiful wholesome poetry
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Thank you, Jude 😊I appreciate 🤗
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Amazingly beautiful
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Ah! Thank you 🤗
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Beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
FINE FEELINGS!
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Thank you 😊
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I am in awe of your romantic poetry, Yassy.
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Thank you ☺️
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Amazing…. im reading it again and again ❤
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Thank you 😊
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❤❤
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Reblogged this on Mehfil with inder raikot and commented:
Nice words from My friend
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Thank you
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