Along came a spider An eight legged rider. In her web, I espied a fly Other insects came to say goodbye. The spider's sting operation Causing pain sensation. Spidey's silken seduction Makes no cause for affection. An intrepid with her labyrinth Her stealth is her fingerprint. She never trips in her net Her web is her bayonet. She walks and stalks a silky trail Rigging a web to catch the frail. Spiders are seen and never heard They wield a most unlikely sword.
So amazing. I love the rhyme scheme. This is so beautiful and the imagery is fantastic!
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Thank you thank you π, Lucy. So happy you enjoyed this.
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I like that the spider is a ‘she’. Only a ‘she’ could match the the story behind the poem. I like this a lot, Yasmin ~ George
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I know what you mean , George.
Thank you ~Yasmin ~
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Reblogged this on Fae Corps Inc.
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Thank you, Patti π
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Glad to. π
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Can almost feel my eyes bounce in time with the words Yassy – beautifully spoken.
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Ah , Kate, thank you π
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Hello yassy, you keep popping up on the likes on my blog and I finally have time to follow your name back to see who you are! Love this and definitely following so I can keep an eye on what proper writers are like! π
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lol thanks. Like your work. Way out of the ordinary.. I dig dark humour π€
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What a smooth poem you have spun here, the way you worded every verse was carefully put and meticulously placed. I was so entrapped by this read that I read it thrice.
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That my dear friend is an awesome thing to say ..canβt thank you enough π€
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Very welcomeπΉ
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You have weaved your words as delicately as any gifted spider. Leaving a web of thought impossible to avoid or escape. And, there we sit, waiting to be wrapped up in more of your words. Well written, dear friend! π·
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lol π thanks, Brad eeeeew there goes my spider man π€
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This is so cool, Yassy! We have SOOOO many spiders about here! Your words will come to mind the next time I’m almost caught in a web! Cheers!!! π
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Yes, arenβt we just about caught up in this web π€
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*hairy laughing spider blowing kisses emoji*!!!
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Lol daddy long legged 𦡠spidey blowing π
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Spiders creep me out BUT if I can watch one from what I consider a safe distance I will watch. It is amazing to see them making their webs. They look so delicate but you can tell by the other insects they capture that they are not delicate at all. And to see a spider wrap up its “meal” is another mesmerizing thing. I always feel sorry for the poor prey but then remember, it is food. It’s not like the spider is doing it for meaness π
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Lol yes sweetie , spiders π· heheheheh π
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
NO WHEY! π
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Oh Yeah π
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WOWZA!!!
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I’m impressed by the excellent way with which you play with words. Can’t wait for your next piece.
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Can we get in touch so I get a few coaching tips from you.
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SOULMATES
Didn’t you know that we were made for each other,
That we wouldn’t be complete without each other,
No two people were as compatible as we,
Our chemistry was so great that my day just didn’t feel right without you,
But instead of looking no further and accept what’s truly yours,
You chose to bond with one who did not love you like I do,
With one who never understood your wants and needs,
He took you for granted and made your love feel hopeless,
You complained,I listened,
You cried,I wiped your tears,
But you still didn’t see that I was the one for you,
The only one who can love you the way you want to be loved,
And you looked elsewhere for the love only I can provide,
How long will you give your heart out to be played with?
How long will you give it out to be stamped on?
What you need is an undying love which will keep you fulfilled at all times,
And I’m right here,
Where we all began,
To provide that love for you,
Cos we are soulmates,
With our destinies intertwined forever.
Kindly give your thoughts on this
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This is so good , I am so impressed. You are very talented, more ink to your quill. Write on ..write on.
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Thank you very much
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You welcome.
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You are very good π
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You have spun a masterpiece! Your words are woven into a rhythmic and amazing piece. Bravo!
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Thank you sweet Eugenia π€β€οΈ
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Most welcome, Yassy!
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love the rhythm in this yassy. such a smooth enjoyable read
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Thank you π, Judeπ
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always a pleasure, love your writing π
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I am honoured π
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Trying out new stuff? Whatever, it works!! π
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Yeah, you do know mecπ
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“She never trips in her net is a beyonet” dammmmmnnnn!πππππ
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The title caught my attention……nice rhyming….
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Thank you , Don.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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What a witty poem on spider menπ
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Lol π
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