I walk through the night looking at the stars They sing to me with their galactic guitars. I feel you stirring inside my soul I hear whispers of your dreams as I stroll. Butterflies carry my tears across the sky They turn to purple clouds up on high. I drown in an ocean of lavender tides Where I daydream my way on celestial rides. Touching my soul in a way that I can write Hoping to get all my words right. I walk into the sunshine and feel you bright Hand in hand, from darkness to light. # rhyming couplets
These are lovely, each stanza could stand alone! 😊
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Thank you, Holly 🤗
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You’re welcome 🤗
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❤️🤗
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❤️🌼🌻
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💐💐
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Thank you, I’m putting them in water! ❤️
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Awwwwww 🥰
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Very nice x
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Haroon.
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You should sing this one, Yasmin. It reads like a great lyric ~ George
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You are the singer, George. I , I am just a struggling writer lol 😝
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Marvelous…and soulful! Dripping drops of meloncholy and then, walking into light. Superb! Keep it up! 🙂
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Thank you, Kind Sir😊
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You’re welcome Yassy! Stay blessed and enjoy your writing. 👍
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Thank you again, Ashokji. I so appreciate 😊
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🙂🙏
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😊🙏🏼
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You write so Beautiful 💟 🦋
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Thank you ☺️, G. ❤️🤗
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🤗 💖
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❤
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Wow, a wonderful Rhyme with the whole universe in it. 👍🙏🧡
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alaedin 😊
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It comes automatically as I read your poem, I hope it’d be valuable for your nice piece 🤗🙏🧡
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Indeed 🌞🤗, I appreciate your generosity towards my work.
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i am much honoured 🧡✌
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And I am much delighted 😀
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so am I 🥰💖
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Stunning and beautiful. So lovely. ❤️
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Thank you, Lucy. You always say such beautiful things ❤️🤗
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“galactic guitars” — great.
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Awww 😊, thank you 🙏🏼
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Lucid lyrics. Loved every bit of it.
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Thank you, Sumi❤️🤗
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Beautiful just like you ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, where have you been ???? Missed you 🤗
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Life got pretty crazy! Between moving to the west coast and a lot of recovery work… been trying to write when I can, and make when I can more happen more frequently. I’m trying to make Saturday’s time to sit on WordPress and do some reading and commenting 😘😘😘😘 you were first ❤️❤️❤️❤️ how have you been?? Your writing gets more and more exquisite.
Want a laugh? You and I started talking a few years ago yesterday. I saw the post I wrote – the very first one you commented on – and it was 2 years ago, so happy anniversary, twin!! 🤣🤣
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Omg , has it been two years , we can pick up where we left off , we can and we will and I can’t tell you how happy I am to see you here , happy anniversary to you my twin ❤️😍🥰, wow, wow wow ..
Your pretty crazy means you got madly creative , I just know how you are. Ah! You can write .. fabulously wonderful..❤️❤️❤️
Well, more ink to your pen and long long long live you, My Lioness My brave-heart
Let’s celebrate 🎉 .
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Hehehehe I have found the secret to staying sane is to write crazily and live happily.
And thank you!! It’s honestly people like you who keep me motivated to keep writing. I read your words and I just could weep with how much beauty your pen can paint! To know your words are only half as beautiful as your soul… you are the 🦁 and the ⭐️ and the 🌝 and the 🌞 rolled up into one. Love you!!!!
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We are twin soul sisters 👯♀️ so we both are sanely crazy 😜 and I absolutely dig your writin. It’s what I think is the best thing in the world is the way your own quivers with emotion. Ah ! I can feel your words , they touch my very being , you are my quintessential sister , it’s almost like looking into my very soul when I read you. 🥰🤗❤️
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Ahhh…this is so beautiful i could hum it into a song..
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Hey, thanks so much , Michny..❤️🤗
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This gave me chills Yassy 🙂 It is so wonderful I don’t even words to describe it
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Expressing yourself through poetry is the best thing and having wonderful people like you reading and bonding and feeling the connection is super inspiring and awesome.. sigh 😔 I am so happy and fulfilled today ! That’s your wonderful thoughts on this that has brought on this feeling of contentment. Be happy , Maggie. Love ❤️
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RHYMING COUPLET HEAVEN! 😀
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Oh! You are so generous, Jonathan. 😊🙏🏼
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FEW WORDS—-LOTS OF PRAISE! YOU DO WRITE SO NICELY I AGREE WITH HOLLY HUNTER—-YOU’RE THE BEST AT THIS!
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I am honoured.
Holly is an awesome writer and so are you , Jonathan.
It’s wonderful being praised for something that you love doing. All I do is put my feelings into words 🌞
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yUP—AND DO IT VERY WELL. ORT-ORT-ORT-!
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😊🌞
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WELL DONE, FELLOW POET!
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*I take a bow* 🙇♀️ Thank you ☺️, am delighted 🙂
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I TIP MY HAT TO YOUR TALENT….:D
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You are a true gentleman 😊😇
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ORT-ORT-ORRT-! 😀
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🌞
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Beautifully versed
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome 👍😊
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😊🤗
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Lovely imagery, yassy!
“galactic guitars” – I love that.
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Thank you, Graham.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you 😊
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Wow, just wow. Love it. ❤️💕💕💕
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Thank you sweetheart 🤗🤗
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Simply beautiful Yassy.🌹♥️
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Thanks Yo❤️
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So welcome😊❤️
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Ah, so pretty, Yassy. I would like to walk with you.
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And so would I, Robbie, thank you 😊
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Fabulous, meri dost, each one!
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Shukriya, shukriya 🌞
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Thank you, Tania ❤️
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thanks to you for the wonderful ideas 🙂
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You are welcome ❤️🤗
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Oh my, i kinda gotta thing for lavender skies, humblebees that sing, rhymes, stars, currents, all those wondrous things. I 💭 i even kinda gotta little thing for you, dearest darling ms poetica. washing|wishes~may your today be what you may – come what . visions of mine maqueen mind, you redesign with every rhyme. Ooh la-lah so re:fine. A whole model you are, my cherished jamsmine blossomings, a rare and rising star. Uart. § now mine mind ~ delightfully blissful ~ my sacred solace, 👁️ retreat 2 you are revered and tenderly sweet. Thanks for the 🧹 off my 👣. I am into your beat 🎼. . .
genuinely wholesome sincerest silly chili’s § deadly seriousness sometimes, a lit’le bout me~ yours truthfully, Heather Habecker 🧎
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🙏🤗❤️
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Thank you.
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