I walk through the night looking at the stars
They sing to me with their galactic guitars.
I feel you stirring inside my soul
I hear whispers of your dreams as I stroll.
Butterflies carry my tears across the sky
They turn to purple clouds up on high.
I drown in an ocean of lavender tides
Where I daydream my way on celestial rides.
Touching my soul in a way that I can write
Hoping to get all my words right.
I walk into the sunshine and feel you bright
Hand in hand, from darkness to light.
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These are lovely, each stanza could stand alone! π
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Thank you, Holly π€
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Youβre welcome π€
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Thank you, Iβm putting them in water! β€οΈ
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Awwwwww π₯°
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Very nice x
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Haroon.
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You should sing this one, Yasmin. It reads like a great lyric ~ George
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You are the singer, George. I , I am just a struggling writer lol π
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Marvelous…and soulful! Dripping drops of meloncholy and then, walking into light. Superb! Keep it up! π
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Thank you, Kind Sirπ
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You’re welcome Yassy! Stay blessed and enjoy your writing. π
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Thank you again, Ashokji. I so appreciate π
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You write so Beautiful π π¦
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Thank you βΊοΈ, G. β€οΈπ€
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Wow, a wonderful Rhyme with the whole universe in it. πππ§‘
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alaedin π
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It comes automatically as I read your poem, I hope it’d be valuable for your nice piece π€ππ§‘
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Indeed ππ€, I appreciate your generosity towards my work.
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i am much honoured π§‘β
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And I am much delighted π
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so am I π₯°π
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Stunning and beautiful. So lovely. β€οΈ
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Thank you, Lucy. You always say such beautiful things β€οΈπ€
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“galactic guitars” — great.
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Awww π, thank you ππΌ
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Lucid lyrics. Loved every bit of it.
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Thank you, Sumiβ€οΈπ€
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Beautiful just like you β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you, where have you been ???? Missed you π€
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Life got pretty crazy! Between moving to the west coast and a lot of recovery work… been trying to write when I can, and make when I can more happen more frequently. Iβm trying to make Saturdayβs time to sit on WordPress and do some reading and commenting ππππ you were first β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ how have you been?? Your writing gets more and more exquisite.
Want a laugh? You and I started talking a few years ago yesterday. I saw the post I wrote – the very first one you commented on – and it was 2 years ago, so happy anniversary, twin!! π€£π€£
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Omg , has it been two years , we can pick up where we left off , we can and we will and I canβt tell you how happy I am to see you here , happy anniversary to you my twin β€οΈππ₯°, wow, wow wow ..
Your pretty crazy means you got madly creative , I just know how you are. Ah! You can write .. fabulously wonderful..β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Well, more ink to your pen and long long long live you, My Lioness My brave-heart
Letβs celebrate π .
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Hehehehe I have found the secret to staying sane is to write crazily and live happily.
And thank you!! Itβs honestly people like you who keep me motivated to keep writing. I read your words and I just could weep with how much beauty your pen can paint! To know your words are only half as beautiful as your soul… you are the π¦ and the βοΈ and the π and the π rolled up into one. Love you!!!!
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We are twin soul sisters π―ββοΈ so we both are sanely crazy π and I absolutely dig your writin. Itβs what I think is the best thing in the world is the way your own quivers with emotion. Ah ! I can feel your words , they touch my very being , you are my quintessential sister , itβs almost like looking into my very soul when I read you. π₯°π€β€οΈ
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Ahhh…this is so beautiful i could hum it into a song..
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Hey, thanks so much , Michny..β€οΈπ€
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This gave me chills Yassy π It is so wonderful I don’t even words to describe it
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Expressing yourself through poetry is the best thing and having wonderful people like you reading and bonding and feeling the connection is super inspiring and awesome.. sigh π I am so happy and fulfilled today ! Thatβs your wonderful thoughts on this that has brought on this feeling of contentment. Be happy , Maggie. Love β€οΈ
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RHYMING COUPLET HEAVEN! π
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Oh! You are so generous, Jonathan. πππΌ
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FEW WORDS—-LOTS OF PRAISE! YOU DO WRITE SO NICELY I AGREE WITH HOLLY HUNTER—-YOU’RE THE BEST AT THIS!
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I am honoured.
Holly is an awesome writer and so are you , Jonathan.
Itβs wonderful being praised for something that you love doing. All I do is put my feelings into words π
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yUP—AND DO IT VERY WELL. ORT-ORT-ORT-!
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WELL DONE, FELLOW POET!
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*I take a bow* πββοΈ Thank you βΊοΈ, am delighted π
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I TIP MY HAT TO YOUR TALENT….:D
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You are a true gentleman ππ
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ORT-ORT-ORRT-! π
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Beautifully versed
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome ππ
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Lovely imagery, yassy!
“galactic guitars” – I love that.
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Thank you, Graham.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you π
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Wow, just wow. Love it. β€οΈπππ
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Thank you sweetheart π€π€
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Simply beautiful Yassy.πΉβ₯οΈ
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Thanks Yoβ€οΈ
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So welcomeπβ€οΈ
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Ah, so pretty, Yassy. I would like to walk with you.
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And so would I, Robbie, thank you π
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Fabulous, meri dost, each one!
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Shukriya, shukriya π
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Thank you, Tania β€οΈ
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thanks to you for the wonderful ideas π
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You are welcome β€οΈπ€
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