Sun flares into the sapphire My canvas rushes to capture Birds flying through wands of gold, grey Language of rainbow wings Strength in wild of day Divine comes through Connecting Heartbeats Sun warms aura of my consciousness Adorning wisdom in my heart I bleed in this odyssey Where tears turn to diamonds A jeweled promise Like a timepiece Holding the Cosmos. #NONET
pretty!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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“A jeweled promise
Like a timepiece”
Such a beautiful metaphor🌸
loved it❤
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Thank you 🙏🏼🤗❤️
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Amazingly beautiful.
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Thanks, Aquib.
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This is a beautiful rendition of the form. The imagery and metaphor are lovely. Well written! ❤
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Thank you, Brad 😊
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Absolutely beautiful! 😊
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Thank you ☺️
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Lively yassy
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Awwww 🥰
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That should have said “lovely” yassy. Duh! Eyes again
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‘Tis okay , my lovely lass. Thank you 😊
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😊
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😊🤗
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May I share this on a poetry site of mine, full credit given? If you have any objections, please keep them to yourself. 😉 JK! all the best.
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No objections, your honour ! Lol 😝 you can share 😇
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Hahahaha, done. 🙂
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Great 👍
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So beautiful. ❤️ This is penned with elegance.
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Thank you, Lucy. I so appreciate 🤗
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❤
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😊
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I counted 10 great metaphors and have probably missed loads more. This is an epic poem, Yasmin ~ George
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You are too kind, George, thank you ~~ Yasmin ~
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“I bleed in this odyssey
Where tears turn to diamonds” this line gave me goosebumps….love it.
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thank you so much , my dear Michy 😘
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😊😊😊
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🤗😊
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you ❤️🤗
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I read this sitting outside, soaking up the sun which is keeping me warm on this yet again cold day. The birds giving me the background music to go with your lovely words. What a wonderful gift it is, and you are 🙂 I hope all is good with you dear Yassy.
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I am happy you read my work. It’s a great feeling of inspiration and love..I am sure the birds are happy singing to you Margaret. And the flowers must be enjoying your presence. You , indeed are a true gift of friendship.
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You my dear make me feel wanted and loved 🙂
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Everyone who knows you will love you my sweet saster.. I cherish our friendship ❤️
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I’m glad I found you! What an inspiration!
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Thank you 😊! What an awesome thing to say. Quite made my weekend, thank you.
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Oh I’m so glad! 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
COLOR HER WORLD!
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Thank you, Jonathan 😊
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ME PLEASURE! 😀
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😊😊
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You’ve a very unique way of writing. Beautiful piece from your heart.
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I am glad you think so. That is very much appreciated 😊
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Amazing visuals… tears like diamonds, language of rainbow wings, etc. ❤️🙂
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The Ken of imagination, if ye know 😊 , thank you Ms.Carly. Mighty glad you enjoy my work.
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Yes, let the imagination and creativity flow!! 🖊 📝
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Bless you , Carly. Happy weekend to you , sweetie 🤗
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Aww, you too, honey. 🤗
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❤️
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🌸💎
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💐
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❄️⛄️❄️⛄️
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🌞🦋🌈💧🍓
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🍎 🍓 That strawberry looks good! Making me hungry! Lol!
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Hahaha 😂 eat away , Carly 🍇🍒🥑
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😂 lol! Ok, I’ll take those cherries and grapes you have up there but I am one of those weirdos who doesn’t like avocados. Have you ever heard of someone not liking avocado? Lol! 😂
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No, never heard of anyone not likin avocados but to each his/her own. You eat to please yourself. So no worries , Carly , as long as the tummy is happy 😊
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That’s right. 🙂💜
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You take good care of yourself 🤗❤️
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You too! 🙂❤️
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Tears turn to diamonds… lovely…
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Thank you, Geet , geet …song of poetry 😊
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You’re welcome…😊
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WOW WOW WOW….so good.
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Thank you, Avia 😊
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Most welcome.
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🤗
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😉
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Yassy, sweetheart, I bleed in your poetry/ where your tears turn to diamonds.
Exceptional. You are great.
xoxo
I bleed in this odyssey
Where tears turn to diamonds
A jeweled promise
Like a timepiece
Holding the
Cosmos.
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Thank you, G. I sit in this cosmos and I write and I love writin and I love that you read my work. I am grateful and happy 😃
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My pleasure. I love your work. And you are my Queen of Poetry.
🌸💕🤗❤️
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Ahh you my High Priestess of Poetry ❤️🤗
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Ahhh… 🤗💕🌸💐
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Oooooh💐
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😉
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🌞
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Wow, Yassy, these are deep and complex thoughts. Well done on a great and inspiring poem.
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Thank you, sweet Robbie 🤗
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Powerful imagery. Lovely.
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Thank you, Florence.
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Marvellous thank you Dear 🕯️🙇😌🙌
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Thank you, and welcome 🌞🤗
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Good Lord, Yassy! SOOOOO very beautiful! Thank You!!! 🙂
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Awwwwwww 😘🥰
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Every line is crafted so carefully, it’s always a pleasure to read your work Yassy. This piece has so many beautiful turns of phrase and degrees of light and shade, excellent stuff!
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Thank you so much ☺️
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One of my favourite poetic forms and you’ve penned such a beauty. ❤
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Ahhhh! Thank you so much , G. You write wonderful poetry yourself so it’s an honour for me when you read and appreciate!
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Awww thanks 💛 🤗
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You are so welcome, Gorgeous!
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lovely
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Thank you
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you’re welcome!
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Gorgeous. 🖤
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Thank you ☺️, Carter.
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