Moonlit night-- Your smile takes away the shadows. A moment in time-- In the night's stillness The scent of you. Stars Turning the darkness- Frosted. Lullabies-- The Milky way sings Fragments of dreams. Midnight- The hush of solitude.... The distance The universe And words Between us... The taste of a poem All things said And unsaid- On my lips.. The night melts away... Dawn comes-- Nightingale's song Stops my breath... In the gentle strokes Of your brush-- New blooms.... #Senryu # Haiku
It reads like a classic diary. Brilliant, Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, George ~~Yasmin ~~
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you.
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Welcome!
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🌞
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This is so beautiful. Your writing is stunning. Love this piece. ❤️
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Thank you , Lucy ❤️🤗
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I cherish this poem. It is so succinct, yet says so much.
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Thank you 🌝🌺
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❤
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❤️
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I like how you use all different styles of writing. Well done 👍🏻
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Thank you 😊
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Very atmospheric
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🌝❤️🤗
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Yummy just yummy Yassy. I could gobble it all up 🙂
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Yoohoo 🤗❤️, thank you 😊
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Your words are a beautiful escape in the middle of my day.
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Thank you 🙏🏼, Michele😊
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Great choice of font!
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Thank you 😊
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Dreams … sadly, sometimes, that’s where we most comfortably reside. I found this poem wonderful evocative and suggestive. Thanks for sharing 😊
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Yes, you are right, Anna. Dreams are our escape and poetry gives us that escape. Thank you for your insightful comment.
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So wonderfully beautiful.
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Thank you, Nico. Peace ✌️
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Peace to you. 🙂
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😊
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Oh man, 🤩
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Man, oh ! Man !! Thanks K. I am so enjoying the cold .
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I love it, too!
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YASS!!
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Breathtaking!
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Thank you 😊
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Loved it.😊
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Thanks, Sumi🧚
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Absolutely beautiful, Yassy!
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Thank you, Susi
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Beautiful Yassy – I love your poetry
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Thank you, Katey.
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Thank you 🙇 especially written with love ❤️
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Yes…
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Oh Yassy, this is so lovely, so uplifting, like a sweeping breeze clearing the air. ❤
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Thank you, Holly ❤️🤗
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🥰❤️
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Felt musical 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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This makes me feel the slow summer night. Good words!
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😊 thanks.
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Good evening 🌝
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Good evening 😊
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beautiful words. thank you for visiting my site.
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Thank you and welcome 😊
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Truly beautiful Yassy!
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Thank you , Venessa.
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Aw thank you dear Yasmin, for beautifying our world. xo
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🤗🤗
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🤗🌼
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You are very romantic, Yassy, and it is lovely. I sometimes feel that having two teenage sons and a husband in my house has bashed all the romance out of me.
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🤗🤗
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Lovely!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome!
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I absolutely love binge reading your poetry. Saying you’re astoundingly brilliant isn’t giving you enough credit. 🖤🖤🖤
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thank you, Carter. ❤️
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I love ALL of this, but here’s my fave pick: “Stars
Turning the darkness-
Frosted.”
Very vivid and exquisite.
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Thank you very much.
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Most welcome.
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😊🤗
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💝💝💝 (your old “Avia” has returned! Blessings to you!!)
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Awesome. Missed you much much ❤️
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I always come back, yes–I’m so glad to see you too💖
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I kept thinking about you , wonderful where you were. Glad to see you back.
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You are a sweetheart to have thought of me in my absence…truly, I thought about you and other wonderful blog friends as well. It’s a wonderful world here–which is why I come back 🙂
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❤️🤗
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😊😊
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Beautiful
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Thank you 😊
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Oh.wow.so much sweet imagination in the poem with amazing metaphor like the shining gem.gorgeous.specially last stanza is most beautiful and lovely for me”The taste of a poem..
All things said or un said-
On my lips …
The nights melts away….
Dawn comes–
Nightingale’s song
Stop my breath…
In the gentle stroke of your brush—
New blooms…..” I love these lines very much as feelings of my heart,my dear yassy!!❤
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Thank you so very much 🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You are most welcome,my dear Angel yassy.!!❤❤❤❤🤗
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😘
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😘😘😘😘😘😉😉😉😉
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