Delphinium scented night Delphinium sparkling bright Bright, the heliotrope stars Bright, the frosty tasseled hours Hours that spell sweet Alyssum Hours filled with poignant rhythm Rhythm chiming cosmic tunes Rhythm , lay of aural runes Runes that bloom in your eyes Runes that caress my sighs Sighs of our rendezvous Sighs that define I love you You are the vision in my eye You are where I want to fly Fly to where the flowers sway Fly to where our souls can stay Stay where your dreams become mine Stay to let interludes entwine Entwine Mine. A Blitz poem. # Blitz
This is beautiful.
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Thank you, Charles ๐
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It’s like every two lines is a book/song/lyric. I agree with Charles, Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, George.
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Brilliant!
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Thanks !
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Welcome!
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Oh! this is amazing, fantastic Yassy ๐ค๐ค๐ค
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Oh! Thank you so much , Holly ๐ค
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A joy to read Yassy ๐บ
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I can breath in the love, or the hope of love in this wonderful piece Yassy. It is so wonderful ๐
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Thank you, thank you , Maggi โค๏ธ๐ค
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It is my pleasure Yassy ๐
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Bless you โค๏ธ๐ค
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So Beautifully penned ๐
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Thank you , Geetanjali๐น
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Gitanjali ๐
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Gitanjali๐๐ wonโt forget now lol
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Hahahhaaaaa Hugsss ๐ค ๐
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Hugs ๐ค โค๏ธ
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Beautiful use of exquisite words.
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Thank you ๐, Sumi ๐ค
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Fabulous writing
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Thank you, Kritika. That is so kind of you ๐ค
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welcome ๐
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Thank you ๐
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You are welcome.
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What a mastery of the form and such beauty in your words! This looks fun and I must endeavor to try this from in the near future, though I could never do it the justice that you have. ๐
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Thank you, Brad. Well, I am sure you will do a fantastic Blitz. Much better than my feeble attempt lol . Looking forward to reading yours . Happy weekend ๐
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A Blitz poem, what an interesting idea, Yassy. I have not seen one before. I though you did a great job.
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thank you, Robbie.
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An angelic poem that made me feel like I was floating, as I read each line. Beautiful.
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thank you, Michele , thank you โบ๏ธ
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
A wonderful poem dear Poet. I had to read again.
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Thank you so much. Thank you ๐
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You are welcome my friend.
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A wonderful poem. Made me smile.
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Thank you, John. I am so happy you like it.
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Your words I adore
Through a purple floral haze
Left me longing for more
On the floor and in a daze
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Your words kindled a blaze
Your dance moves never fail to amaze
You groove on the floor
Your feet have wings that soar
Bravo , David
Bravo
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Your poem was the thing
that left me blitzed, and in a
pleasant delphinium delirium ๐
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And your words leave me in a tizzy ๐๐ค
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Wow so nice. And still learning new types of poems from you.
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Thank you, Johnny ๐
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That’s so beautiful and amazing
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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How gorgeous!!
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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This is lovely, Yassy! Thank You and Cheers!!! ๐๐๐ค
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Enchanting๐
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