Rock me gently into a stardust's dream
Till sweet dreams kiss eyelids drooping with sleep
Where evening's prism bursts into twirled reams.
The thrill of Mozart notes on your lips sweep
Me into a glimmering, vintage night
You gift me opal reveries to keep.
Fireflies trailing vales and leas delight
Pewter clouds gently quilt a lullaby
Birds coo final ditty in fading light.
Wispy sky hangs up its hat, triste goodbye
To a cruising, mellow sun, adieu
Then, stars are born as tinseled moonbeams sigh.
On dappled landscape, tempo of night's hue
I breathe to a sweet rush of honeydew.
# Terza Rima
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And I breathe through your verses that are as sweet as the honeydew. My beautiful Queen of Poetry, what a gorgeous poem.
The thrill of Mozart notes on your lips sweep
Me into a glimmering, vintage night
You gift me opal reveries to keep.
You make me dream.
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That is high praise indeed from the High Priestess of verses. You know how much I admire your work , Gabby .
Thank you for a wonderful beautiful compliment. Ah! My weekend is made π€
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My pleasure sweetheart and thank you for your beautiful words. I hope itβs a heavenly weekend as your poetry is π€πβ€οΈπΈπ
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Mama Mia , my weekend has to go well , letβs see, what better way to spend time than reading your work and other wonderful poets here.
I hope you have a gorgeous weekend ,my lively lovely friend.
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Oh, you too.
xoxoxo
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‘Wispy sky hangs up its hat, triste goodbye, To a cruising, mellow sun, adieu, Then, stars are born as tinseled moonbeams sigh’. How do you find these words, Yasmin. Genius ~ George
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Thank you , George. You are too kind. I think you are a genius when I read your work and think to myself , I wish I could write like that.
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So beautiful, a dream unto itself! So very sigh worthy. xo
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Thank you, Holly ππ€π
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You are so welcome!
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Happy Sunday my dear , Holly.
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Happy Sunday to you!
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Beautiful writing, Y.
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Thank you, D .
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Welcome, Y.
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WOW yassy. I wish I could write like this! It is just dripping with genius! Xx
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Thank you, Lorraine π€
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I learn something new about poetry every time I read one of yours! Thank you for a great poem and a new challenge.
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Thank you, Tim. I am happy that you do so.
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Who is Terza Rima?
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It is a poetic form. You can google it.
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Oh I see. Didnt know that. I will check out now.
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Yeah , π€ enjoy your Sunday , Ash.
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Ah this was so beautifully penned.. β€
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Thank you , Geetanjaliπ€
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π€ Pleasure lovely
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ohmygoodness this gorgeous! I felt like I was part of a dream, wispy yet clear. Iβm not sure how youβre able to do that, transport me far away to when I get to the end I blink and look around wondering how much time has gone by.
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You are a sweet one , Tara. Thank you sweetheart, I am happy you could connect with this π€ itβs great to see you smilin. Bless you β€οΈ
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well, that first line hooked me and never released
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lol thanks π
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Thank you, Alaedin ππ§πΌββοΈ
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I’m honoured to do my pleasure, you are much appreciated dear Yassy, great poem β€πβ€πβ€
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Bless you , my friend π€
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I feel privileged to be reading fresh poetry of a poetess, whose work is for the eternity. Stunning lines.ππ
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Thank you so very much, Sumiβ€οΈ
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Oye, Wilde, my garden offering ππΊπΉand a butterfly π¦ to boot .
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Your words spring life and magic to every poetic plant there is, and makes your readers soar like butterflies.ππ
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Wonderful π
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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Your writing has such a calming effect. Thank you.
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Thank you π
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Thank you, Ned.
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