Like murdrum, seities are lost
Pullup of life, struggle to live
Denned life of misfortune
Income I eke, meagre paycheck
Survive I everyday
On succus, water and breadloaf
I search in my pocket for halalah
Forever thirsty and hungry
Hungry and thirsty forever
For halalah in my pocket I search
Everyday I survive
On loaf bread, water and succus
Paycheck meagre, eke I income
Misfortune of life denned
Live to struggle life of pullup
Lost are seities murdrum like.
Palindrome words used are below
Murdrum
Seities
Eke
Pullup
Succus
Halalah
This is a Palindrome poem I wrote a couple of years ago.I am posting this again because I know several poets here who are interested in various poetry forms, expecially you Brad Osborne @commonsensiblyspeaking.
A Palindrome is a word, number, phrase, or other sequence of characters which reads the same backward as forward. Composing literature in palindromes is an example of constrained writing.
I call it disciplined creativity.
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yassy, re: palindromes: We share an interest in oblique elements of communication. I even have a palindrome phone number 8831388. Hardly anyone gets it.
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Von, you are amazing with words, you should do one Palindrome.
Lol I am tempted to call you but I won’t hahaha 😆
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I think of Yoda from Star Wars: he has mastered palindromes 😉 palindromes mastered has he
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Oh! Has he? He has?
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;);)
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*smiling *
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Clever, Yasmin. To deal with the palindromes and get a story out of it, extra clever ~ George
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It was a tough one , George but then poetry is fun . Thank you .
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It is a shame that the word “palindrome” is not a palindrome. Your poem makes up for it though. It is well composed!
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Thank you, Anders. I hope you like it.
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Wow! My palindrome word to describe your work and talent Yassy, you are just beyond this world. I agree that takes a level of concentrated discipline and the heartfelt story you put into it, no matter how you read it….backwards or forwards, it’s simply beautiful emotion.🌹🌹
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Roy, you are a sweet one , so happy to have you as a friend , no, not because you say the nicest things by because you have the purest of hearts. I have known you a long time here and you have never changed. I guess I will be friends with you even if I stop blogging here.
You make me smile with your joie de vivre attitude. Love to you and Sona❤️🤗
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Your friendship means so much to me and to us, and yes we do go back and you’ve always been so kind and amazing too. Yes, we’ll always be friends dear Yassy, and don’t utter those words about not blogging 🤔….what would Sparkling Freeze do?😉❤️
Sona and I send our love back to you for you make us smile with your words and support.🌹
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Back at you both , and lots of happiness to you both in the coming year. ❤️🤗
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A million thanks Yassy, and much love from us both!!♥️♥️
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Happy new year to you both again. Stay warm stay safe stay blessed ❤️
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❤️. You too Yassy! 😊
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A difficult poetry form that you have mastered beautifully here. The words deep and heartfelt. 🤗🥰
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Thank you, Holly 🤗🤗🤗
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You’re so welcome 🤗🤗🤗
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A wonderful palindrome. Have never had it in me to even attempt it. Will leave this to the writing pros.
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I think you could do it and I think if you don’t it’s only out of lazy comfort and not because you can’t lol 😝
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Nope, I definitely can’t write this form. It takes me a few days to pen a sonnet. Figuring something like this out would take months and I’d probably end up losing my mind before nearing completion. Some poets just have it 🙂
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Sounds surreal to me , the way you talk. Losing your mind duh 😒, come on, it doesn’t make anyone a less of a poet if they don’t write in form lol you know what I mean touché
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Lol… mind losing and whatever is beyond surreal 🙂 Yes, I know what you mean. No worries, though, won’t be trying one any time soon. 🙂
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Nah, it is surreal surreal , sounds nice surreal , well, I ,need your mind , if you give it to me i don’t mind , it will be a clever find because your brain is creatively disciplined
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Oh, the rhymes… only poets can rhyme. It takes me a long time to find words that fit together to make them rhyme. Another form I stay away from 🙂
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I like all the work of most poets here , rhyming doesn’t matter D. Poetry doesn’t necessarily have to rhyme , don’t box yourself into thinking that if you don’t rhyme you can’t write. 🤓
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Oh, never. My favourite poets free the pen from shackles of form, though there is nothing wrong with any form. 🙂
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Indeed 👍
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love it – strange and mystical words – my birthplace is a 7 letter palindrome …
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Oooh! Really , interesting 😊
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Pockets full of nutritional creativity
you have, Yassy 😎💛
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Good for the brain, David but what about the body , David. A man needs to eat , eh?
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“A man’s gonna do
what a man’s gonna do
when he’s got a hungry
mouth to feed.”
~ Bob Dylan
Thank goodness we don’t live
by bread alone. Imagination
is the power of creation from
the spiritual zone 🌈 ♾️🌟👀
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Imagination feeds the soul. 👍❤️
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You are consistently surprising! That is exceptional work, considering the form seems like it would be a true challenge to write. And yet you make it look easy. Thank you for pushing me and for the shout out! You are the best! ❤
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First time reading a Palindrome and I honestly love it. I think I might give it a try. This was great.
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Looking forward to reading 👍
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Great way with words you have Yassy my dear! Wishing you much love, peace and blessings for the New Year! 🧡🎉🎇🎊💛💚♥️💙💜☮️✌️🙏🏻
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Thank you my dear Tigress. Wishing you all that is wonderful and beautiful in this world. Be happy , safe and healthy ❤️🤗💕🌹💐🌻🦋
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Thank you dear Yassy, may the wonder and beauty find its way back to you in platitudes! Stay safe and well 😊🙏❤️
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You stay safe too. ❤️🤗
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Amazing! What a unique poem.
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Thank you, Sumi. A very happy new year to you 🤗
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