yassy in Poetry November 12, 2019November 12, 2019 11 Words November Haiku Flower child ; Notes on her iPhone Filled with poems . #haiku # Senryu ShareTwitterLike Loading...
I have so many notes on my iPhone – I think I may indeed by a flower child – bellow Yassy – lovely to see you writing. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Yay, good to hear from you , Kate. Stuff stays safe in the phone unlike paper 📝. Thank you ☺️ LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
I have been known to take photos of paper scraps – paper is as fragile as a thought – quickly lost in my distraction. LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes, I quite break my brain’s writing one lol . But I do enjoy the challenge. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I’ve a collection of sporadic thoughts. I too love the challenge of haiku. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Words flow from his quill A shower of flowers It’s a dream reality Thank you , Von 😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Stroke Reality’s my dream Yes, flowers are my power Every stroke defines me LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
There are dreams in the stroke of your pen You turn the dreams to reality The stroke LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Play I love the play Of words between us It’s like being a child All over again LikeLiked by 1 person
Eternity Poetry will be for eternity And our childhood dreams Will keep us hoping Indefinitely LikeLiked by 1 person
Smile As our heart still beat We bring all our dreams to life And smile in our sleep LikeLiked by 1 person
Renewal Like a renewal of hope Dreams aspirations We are a worthy lot Just believe LikeLiked by 1 person
Plugged into a screen A floral garden of inspiration Where life is dream 🌸🌼💮 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
The Haiku I know used to have 5 syllables for the fiesr line; 7 syllables for the second line and 5 syllables for the last linem LikeLiked by 1 person
Just check Wikipedia for haiku. Read about Japanese haiku poets and their work. Read Haiga online. It’s very helpful. Read Basho more. LikeLiked by 1 person
Having gone through now, I have a better understanding that the 5-7-5 pattern is a traditional method which is not compulsory. Thanks LikeLiked by 1 person
Hope the flower child has it all backed up. The world would be so much less without her beautiful words. I am drawn to concise writing… LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
yaskhan 
Lovely! But perhaps a Senryu
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Yes, you are right. Thank you.
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Gosh, this is beautiful!
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Thank you 😊
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That’s lovely!
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Thank you, Sarah. It’s awesome to hear from you.
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Of course, love.
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🤗
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I have so many notes on my iPhone – I think I may indeed by a flower child – bellow Yassy – lovely to see you writing.
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Yay, good to hear from you , Kate. Stuff stays safe in the phone unlike paper 📝.
Thank you ☺️
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I have been known to take photos of paper scraps – paper is as fragile as a thought – quickly lost in my distraction.
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That is where a phone comes in handy.
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I never could get the grasp of haiku. This is very nice!
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Yes, I quite break my brain’s writing one lol .
But I do enjoy the challenge.
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Not bad Yasmine 😁
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Thanks oy 🧚🏼♀️
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You are welcome 👍🏻
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If I had an iPhone, that’s probably mostly how I’d use it.
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Of course 😊🌞
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Brilliant!! 🖤
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Thank you ☺️
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I love it!! Hope you are doing well, it’s always so good to see you! 🙂
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Thank you, Avia. I am well, thank you. Hope all is well with you too.
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Thank you!
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😊🤗
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😊
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I’ve a collection of sporadic thoughts. I too love the challenge of haiku. 🙂
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Do write 😊👍
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Beautiful.
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Thanks, Sumeee😊🤗
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💖😊
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💕
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Cool haiku,😎
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Thank you 🤓
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Flowers
Flows out of her phone
Into a new reality
Filled with flowers
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Words flow from his quill
A shower of flowers
It’s a dream reality
Thank you , Von 😊
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Stroke
Reality’s my dream
Yes, flowers are my power
Every stroke defines me
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There are dreams in the stroke of your pen
You turn the dreams to reality
The stroke
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Relish
If dreams have a taste
I am tasting every one
With so much relish
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I relish the taste
Of my dreams
In my soul
I nuture
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Soul
The soul of my dreams
Nurtures their happy children
Rejoicing in play
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Play
I love the play
Of words between us
It’s like being a child
All over again
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Children
I do not believe
We have ever stopped playing
Eternal children
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Eternity
Poetry will be for eternity
And our childhood dreams
Will keep us hoping
Indefinitely
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Hope
Eternity is hope
And we its hopeful children
Sitting on dreams
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Hope
To hope is to dream
And to dream is to hope
Our hearts beat
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Smile
As our heart still beat
We bring all our dreams to life
And smile in our sleep
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Sleep
Sleep gives us dreams
All our yearnings
From deep within
Renaissance
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Worthy
Renewal is life
Yearnings give us joyful hopes
Worthy of our dreams
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Renewal
Like a renewal of hope
Dreams aspirations
We are a worthy lot
Just believe
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Amen
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Amen
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Beautiful, nothing like the songs of a ring tone.🌹🌹
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You should know better hahaha 😂 , your ring tones sparkle , Wilde !
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❤️😁🌹. Gotta love Yassy💫
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🌝💫☺️
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😍🌹🌈
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⭐️🌟🤩🧚🏼♀️🧜🏻♀️
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😁
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Plugged into a screen
A floral garden of inspiration
Where life is dream 🌸🌼💮
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🤩
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Niiiiiiice!!
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Thanks, K.
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Description of you, perhaps? Flower child, wah, my friend, way to go!
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Shukran habibi 😊
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I think a lot of poets are like this, Yassy.
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Yes, yes, i totally agree.
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Amazing haiku! 🖤🖤
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Thank you so much ☺️, Carter.
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Beautifully Done. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you 🙏🏼, Amanda.
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Anand, sorry
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Lovely but not too sure if it’s an Haiku from my little knowledge…
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Okay
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The Haiku I know used to have 5 syllables for the fiesr line; 7 syllables for the second line and 5 syllables for the last linem
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Just check Wikipedia for haiku. Read about Japanese haiku poets and their work. Read Haiga online. It’s very helpful. Read Basho more.
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Having gone through now, I have a better understanding that the 5-7-5 pattern is a traditional method which is not compulsory. Thanks
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👍🙏🏼
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Hope the flower child has it all backed up. The world would be so much less without her beautiful words. I am drawn to concise writing…
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Yes yes i have on paper too.
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Good idea!
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😊
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❤
you're pretty special. you know that, right?
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Thank you, Charles. 😊
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