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The Birds’ Path

The bird carries

A poem

To the trees..

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  12. When reading your poem the bird that came to mind is the high altitude Mountain bluebird (faithful companions here in the forest where I live). I imagined that little mister discovering a small slip of paper on the forest floor with your poem on it. The thought of that creature ferrying your micro-poem to a high branch where he and his bride were building a nest was awesome! 👏

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    1. You live in the midst of nature, that is so fantastic! No wonder, your comment is so poetic.
      Ah! I see you breathe pure air. I can imagine you living amongst the grandeur of mountains and trees and the sound of a brook gurgling in your ears .
      I am going to google your little fella here.
      Thank you, Laura.

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  21. Wonder I (Eye?) which/ is mistress of form and flight?/ Look above!
    What a wonderful combination, Yassy. Slowly scanning downward through the clouds the solitary beat steals breath. (with work the last might launch a double ‘ku to you…so, ‘scues whilst I transcribe for further reflection. I go, grinning.

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      1. Only my sad due to you m’dear Lady. Write past the world, you do. (even if it’s prepositional sentence-death. I’ve been away far three-long. Must go beat rain into my submission – and if not then tote water in buckets to thirsty garden which silent suffers my woebegotten battle with a flyghty bed which feels the wind coursing above. When I read you, Yassy, and some but few others I feel compelled to scribble and hope I can collect the curls and cue and turn them wordishly.

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      3. Shall I be flip(pant?) and say: Throw Harder!. But, no. I miss you three! So, There. I miss most having the time to peruse your work and find absolutely not an ounce of marvel over how much you draw – as is your worth to so many of us. But I have a large batch of mine own to tran(sub, some might say)scribe: a couple maybe worth a gander. We have bouncing East- and West-Coast seabreezes almost overhead. Oh, well, Friday happens if it comes to that. See you, Lady Yasmin!

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